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This is just a shameless review from the author XD First of all, this novel is my very first novel I ever made and the first work of writing that I ever write. I admit that the beginning of the novel had a very terrible storytelling and grammar, but trust me I'm trying my best to improve it and I already had as you could see my english is improving if you continue reading. The first volume is an experiment, while the second volume is where the real thing is made (In my opinion). So I hope that you guys will at least read until tens of chapters before giving a harsh review. And to explain it to you, the title is The King of Tricks and Magic is a way to describe the main character. Well, just like how other people will do in another world, the first volume tells about the story where the main character got curious about fighting at the another world since the real world is a place where it's peace and trying to perform magic in another world where magic is real is kinda weird, right? So I decide to build up the world building and the characters first before going there. And to answer all of your questions, the main character will start showing his magic performance at the second volume but I can't say too much since it will become a spoiler. Thanks for reading this shameless review from me guys :)
to be honest I stopped reading at chapter 3 or 4. let me explain : the MC just reincarnated in a world with beginer level stats ( yes there is a status) he meets a monster level +250 with stats more than a 1000 times his and than he kills the monster (where is the logic here), in the fight he suddenly gets a ~2000 points in agility. that's it for me I can't stomach this BS, at the very least keep it a little believable. have you never played a game before ????
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While it is an interesting premise, the flow and grammar are horrible. There also seems to be romance, even without the tag. (A chick is clearly interested in MC, and MC even called her a beauty, while it hasnt sprouted, if it does im out)
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This story is a wrong choice for me. I saw the "weak to strong" but this dude was weak only one time and that was in the first fight. After that he became best at everything. Genius, strongest, etc... IF you like that kind a character, this story is a nice one. Dude creates a kingdom with demi-humans and fight with demons. In story my only complaint is hero is dense. I HATE DENSE MCs. This is the first time reading dense MC in this site while reading isekai-fantasy genre and i really surprised to see that kind a moron in here.
its an ok book if you can get past the weirdly written characters. the passing is a little two fast. the characters are kind of all over the place
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English is very unreadable. The author should heavily consider hiring an editor. I would rate this 1/5 simply because it’s impossible to understand this book.
This is definitely a masterpiece the writing quality is top notch and the story development is thrilling and engaging the author did avery good job
This is one of my fav 😍😍😍 I really love how OP our MC is 😍👍 I love the flow of the story and other character. Every chapter is interesting 💖 This is definitely one of the best isekai stories!!!!
Good Concept, lousy execution. I can often justify lousy writing or a bad concept with some good wish fulfillment. However, this novel is practically unreadable, with many blatant spelling errors and grammar issues. If you prefer to skim through books and don't pay much attention to details, you might be able to survive reading more than ten chapters. Unfortunately, I will not continue to read this novel. I wish the author the best in their future endeavors, but the novel in its current state is unreadable.
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So heads up, I only read the free chapter because I’m poor lol. But throughout all of them I found the book to be very enjoyable. There are grammatical errors, but you can ignore them. The story telling and character development are great, and the idea behind the magical cards is wonderful. To sum it all up, I love this book.
I mean, very mediocre writing, story isn't about Oz the Magician but more about a kid by the name of Oz who gets boosts in strength just because the enemy is stronger, no trickery no illusions or card tricks, just brute or OVERWHELMING PRESSURE type of fights I've seen so far, do not recommend to those who read the description and got a little bit interested in the story of Oz The Magician
The plot armor is so bad in the beginning like the guy have 80 agile and goblin had 10,000 agile. he faster then goblin so how. The grammar is bad in beginning but the author say later it get better. so it less then three star for me.
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Honestly? I absolutely hated the beginning. The english was absolutely horrid, infinitely close to unreadable. Then i hit chapter 40 or so, and not only did the grammar and spelling take a massive jump, but the quality of the story as well. (IMO it was just better reflected because i could understand it now.) Nonetheless, it was enjoyable to see a writer improve so much. I will continue reading this story.
as a fellow magician i can say without a doubt that i love this book even without reading it and if you the writer are reading this you have my respect.
A fun story with a quirky main character running around fighting enemies who are far too powerful for him. The world building needs a little work but its improving.
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Cant stop thinking about this book but it updates to slowly and wish for more chapters please! The way the story is going rn is great but right now im hoping for the reunition to come nxt chp
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
They update to slowly, I understand that the writer has there own life but quite honestly this is one of those books that actually moves my heart when i read it. im only asking for a couple more chapters a week if thats possible please
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Although the premise of the story, a genius that has discovered actual magic in the modern world is fairly good, it is overshadowed by the amount of brain cells you would lose from reading the various description the author gives. An early example is how the author describes something being cut multiple times (won’t mention it here cause it’s pretty cringy) The pacing of the story is rather fast. 5 or so chapters in and the MC is already beating someone 100x powerful than he is at the current moment. Story seems to go for an op protagonist. Seems a bit too bs for me. Stability of updates is fine. Main problem is that the story’s author is literally Tod Howard because the MC can literally do it because he is the MC and “It just works” TL;DR protagonist is overpowered as hell, story tries to down play it. Opponents are mostly bark and no bite and/or flashy as hell. Decent read if your normal stories are not updating and you want to spend your coins/fast passes on something.
Amazing book. I love how people get so confused when he identifies as a magician and then uses a sword. Overall great book, this one of 3 books I’m reading on Webnovel currently and the best out of 3.
This is just a shameless review from the author XD First of all, this novel is my very first novel I ever made and the first work of writing that I ever write. I admit that the beginning of the novel had a very terrible storytelling and grammar, but trust me I'm trying my best to improve it and I already had as you could see my english is improving if you continue reading. The first volume is an experiment, while the second volume is where the real thing is made (In my opinion). So I hope that you guys will at least read until tens of chapters before giving a harsh review. And to explain it to you, the title is The King of Tricks and Magic is a way to describe the main character. Well, just like how other people will do in another world, the first volume tells about the story where the main character got curious about fighting at the another world since the real world is a place where it's peace and trying to perform magic in another world where magic is real is kinda weird, right? So I decide to build up the world building and the characters first before going there. And to answer all of your questions, the main character will start showing his magic performance at the second volume but I can't say too much since it will become a spoiler. Thanks for reading this shameless review from me guys :)
to be honest I stopped reading at chapter 3 or 4. let me explain : the MC just reincarnated in a world with beginer level stats ( yes there is a status) he meets a monster level +250 with stats more than a 1000 times his and than he kills the monster (where is the logic here), in the fight he suddenly gets a ~2000 points in agility. that's it for me I can't stomach this BS, at the very least keep it a little believable. have you never played a game before ????
Revelar Spoiler While it is an interesting premise, the flow and grammar are horrible. There also seems to be romance, even without the tag. (A chick is clearly interested in MC, and MC even called her a beauty, while it hasnt sprouted, if it does im out)
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This story is a wrong choice for me. I saw the "weak to strong" but this dude was weak only one time and that was in the first fight. After that he became best at everything. Genius, strongest, etc... IF you like that kind a character, this story is a nice one. Dude creates a kingdom with demi-humans and fight with demons. In story my only complaint is hero is dense. I HATE DENSE MCs. This is the first time reading dense MC in this site while reading isekai-fantasy genre and i really surprised to see that kind a moron in here.
its an ok book if you can get past the weirdly written characters. the passing is a little two fast. the characters are kind of all over the place
Revelar Spoiler English is very unreadable. The author should heavily consider hiring an editor. I would rate this 1/5 simply because it’s impossible to understand this book.
This is definitely a masterpiece the writing quality is top notch and the story development is thrilling and engaging the author did avery good job
This is one of my fav 😍😍😍 I really love how OP our MC is 😍👍 I love the flow of the story and other character. Every chapter is interesting 💖 This is definitely one of the best isekai stories!!!!
Good Concept, lousy execution. I can often justify lousy writing or a bad concept with some good wish fulfillment. However, this novel is practically unreadable, with many blatant spelling errors and grammar issues. If you prefer to skim through books and don't pay much attention to details, you might be able to survive reading more than ten chapters. Unfortunately, I will not continue to read this novel. I wish the author the best in their future endeavors, but the novel in its current state is unreadable.
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So heads up, I only read the free chapter because I’m poor lol. But throughout all of them I found the book to be very enjoyable. There are grammatical errors, but you can ignore them. The story telling and character development are great, and the idea behind the magical cards is wonderful. To sum it all up, I love this book.
I mean, very mediocre writing, story isn't about Oz the Magician but more about a kid by the name of Oz who gets boosts in strength just because the enemy is stronger, no trickery no illusions or card tricks, just brute or OVERWHELMING PRESSURE type of fights I've seen so far, do not recommend to those who read the description and got a little bit interested in the story of Oz The Magician
The plot armor is so bad in the beginning like the guy have 80 agile and goblin had 10,000 agile. he faster then goblin so how. The grammar is bad in beginning but the author say later it get better. so it less then three star for me.
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Hi guys please read my book o not my book but like follow my argh just look at my profile and there is R-18 there and like it i really love you guys if you do that love you all ang i love you again and again
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Honestly? I absolutely hated the beginning. The english was absolutely horrid, infinitely close to unreadable. Then i hit chapter 40 or so, and not only did the grammar and spelling take a massive jump, but the quality of the story as well. (IMO it was just better reflected because i could understand it now.) Nonetheless, it was enjoyable to see a writer improve so much. I will continue reading this story.
as a fellow magician i can say without a doubt that i love this book even without reading it and if you the writer are reading this you have my respect.
A fun story with a quirky main character running around fighting enemies who are far too powerful for him. The world building needs a little work but its improving.
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Cant stop thinking about this book but it updates to slowly and wish for more chapters please! The way the story is going rn is great but right now im hoping for the reunition to come nxt chp
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
They update to slowly, I understand that the writer has there own life but quite honestly this is one of those books that actually moves my heart when i read it. im only asking for a couple more chapters a week if thats possible please
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Although the premise of the story, a genius that has discovered actual magic in the modern world is fairly good, it is overshadowed by the amount of brain cells you would lose from reading the various description the author gives. An early example is how the author describes something being cut multiple times (won’t mention it here cause it’s pretty cringy) The pacing of the story is rather fast. 5 or so chapters in and the MC is already beating someone 100x powerful than he is at the current moment. Story seems to go for an op protagonist. Seems a bit too bs for me. Stability of updates is fine. Main problem is that the story’s author is literally Tod Howard because the MC can literally do it because he is the MC and “It just works” TL;DR protagonist is overpowered as hell, story tries to down play it. Opponents are mostly bark and no bite and/or flashy as hell. Decent read if your normal stories are not updating and you want to spend your coins/fast passes on something.
Amazing book. I love how people get so confused when he identifies as a magician and then uses a sword. Overall great book, this one of 3 books I’m reading on Webnovel currently and the best out of 3.