Wife is Delicious- a tale of chasing romance

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BAJJ

In my own honest opinion, the whole concept is cute. It's engaging in its own way and I actually understood where this is going. However, I cannot continue reading this no matter how good the idea was because of the way it was written. It lacks emotion and details. (though I'm no any better) but still, I advice that you work more about the quality of your chapter instead of rushing it because the premise is really good and it would be a waste if it won't improve.

LV 5

stella2138

as the author, it isn't too bad to rate my own book. I give my book 5 stars because,of all the books I've written,this is the best of them all. I sincerely hope that you'll like it and recommend to others. to show your support pls do vote, comment or write me an honest review. thankyou

LV 5

great_gamer

It is very interesting story, and the plot is promising and one of kind. I recommend everyone to checking it out — you won't regret this! Keep it up the good work author-sama!

LV 11

MissJeba

this book so far quite good for me but not very interesting. it is fun to read maybe it is slow update. i hope author can update regularly. i still wait for the male character and female character to interact or growing together. i still waiting for their spark. overall, it is nice and i hope author dont give up and improve your skill and your book will be top. good luck!

LV 14

Haven_Sky

FL& her fox seriously drive me bonkers but I guess in a good way kinda! Funny when our fox shows clear signs of raging jealousy an still can me utterly clueless on his feelings for his 'master'. But such can be said bout our FL too ahaha

This a good readable book please keep on.The is story interesting The writer is open minded he is a teller he has a good follow up of segments and the joinery

LV 12

SleepyKola

Since there are already a lot of chapter, i will read it halfthrough and review it, all I could say this is such a cute and fluffy romance, the plot is interesting and all, there was a bit problem in writing, maybe you could go more indetail instead of moving in a fast pace, but overall it was no problem. Good job author! Keep it up.

LV 2

iam_adh

I like the idea, it gives the necessary amount of fan-fic vibes, it's cute and fun to read, hOwEveR, I do have some problems with it. The writing quality could be so much better. It seems like every sentence has a grammatical error and punctuation is either used or not used. I suggest you use Grammarly or any other sort of grammar check system. The story development is mediocre to me, I feel like it could be much more vibrant. Speaking of which, I feel like the characters could feel a bit more realistic. It just seems like something is lacking. The world background is okay, but with more descriptive detail of how everything looks like and how things are done, I believe this story would greatly improve. The last thing is the stability of updates. As an author, I know how difficult it can be when it comes to writing something because, you know, life... but try and come up with a schedule. Even if it's once a month or so. It's better for your fans to know when you plan on updating instead of you updating whenever you feel like. Hopefully I didn't offend you in any way, I just want to give the right feedback in order for your story to thrive. Either way, you nice keep going! (please tell me you got that reference or I will be sad)

LV 6

GoD_SovereignJ

Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.

LV 13

LordSputnik

Honest Review This one is hard for me to review as the genre is not one I normally read. I'll be a little generous with the stars. Overall though, you have a good story and if you can flesh out the grammar issues, many of the other issues will disappear as well if you ask me. The Good: Interesting plot, the characters have good chemistry and the FL doesn't annoy me which is a big plus. The Bad: The grammar... oh the grammar... I recommend Grammarly or getting an editor. I've probably misinterpreted some of the things that have been written, but I can't say for sure. Check your facts/units sometimes. You once gave a woman 100 inch hips, that's HUGE! Did you maybe mean 100 cm? 100 cm is much more reasonable. The Neutral: Short chapters... very short chapters, this breaks immersion in my opinion, but that is just my opinion. The structure is painful to read for me. One short sentence and a line break followed by another short sentence and a line break without grouping common sentences into paragraphs makes it look like just a lot of lines of text.

LV 2

MrBadWithNames_

The story is alright - I saw a lot of people say this but you really need to work on the grammar and the spelling of things. Maybe the characters get more complex later on but they seem a little too perfect for me, y'know. I'm very interested to see how this new world works and why the MC was transported there, not to mention the magic.

LV 10

Jennylovenovel

My God thisnis really amssing but i have a question,why that bortex are opening and changin peoplenfrom.places? And what is going.on betwen the pet andmaster? Tell.me qhy have to be so dam exaiting all the thing they made together

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Tea_Tae

The FL sure is relatable. I understand. I also want to run to South Korea for a Bigbang concert someday *_* Too bad she got stuck in the Chinese empire era haha. I would love to see how she progresses from there. The writing is amazing and its easy to read. Keep up the good work :)

LV 14

Kamlyn

I just found this story and through the synopsis, it seems interesting. The kind of genre I like is romance, transmigration and it really sounds good. I will definitely gonna give it a try because all the novels I am reading are ongoing. So I need to find some more. And I guess I found one.

LV 4

Jenjibread

At the beginning, I thought that the story would be just another typical cliche transmigration story (coughs the plane crash and her background). But I really didn't expect the humor? It made for a nice touch in comparison to the rest of the story. Good luck!

LV 11

The_Cheshire_Cat

The story is nice and interesting. And I won't go to the grammar as many has pointed it out. The story has processed obviously better in grammar since those reviews were left so if you are nitpicking type and would say you won't even touch this novel because the ratings and the people saying the grammar is bad. Then you are missing a lot as this author has had lots of development in that area. First when I started to read the character development could have had many developments and it didn't sometimes seem like the characters were alive but when I got further into the novel the author made the characters to come alive more and had lots of progress in that and making the story and it's flow more alive. So the story has developed quite a lot and it has potential still to become better and the author also has potential. So let me say good work with the novel and keep writing as you have developed quite a lot and the story really feels nice.

LV 10

Gold_Paper_Crane

I saw that you have received a lot of feedback to improve. I will not discuss that. I think you got potential here. I am also a new writer and I understand what the challenges here. I think you're getting there, it's great. Keep on moving forward! I think the characters are great. The world was also shaped nicely. Thanks for introducing this novel to me!

LV 4

Primate

As a beginner, I don't fault you. I have to say well done. You really did great. Writing is not as easy as it looks. All the errors you made will come to pass as you continue writing. The only way to improve better is to continue writing. Although, most of the chapters are short, don't change it yet. Continue like that for now, you are perfectly fine. I will be following your work. 👍.

LV 4

valeriex

Hi there!! I’ve read a few chapters of your story so far and am pleased with it. Nice cover art as well to attract your readers. I also agree with all the reviews on grammar. Perhaps you can try grammarly? It helps edit and spots grammar mistakes which some were simple I spotted in the story. You are beginning writer so I do wish you the best of luck upon building vocab and such. I have nothing else to say other than that your story is interesting and I will continue reading. Updates seem stable and characters could use more work on the emotions but with time, I think I can see the characters slowly grow as well!! Take all reviews with great criticism and good luck on this story author~