RWBY Re: Jaune Arc

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dragon_among_men

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Anthony_Essex

I really love RWBY and I always wanted more from Jaune. I never saw him as the main character but I always thought he had the potential to be more and this story gives us just that. My only complaint is more of a nitpick than anything else. The Juane Ruby pairing is very forced down your throat but that's more me not really ever seeing those two together. I got used to it as the story went on but other than that perfect story

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silkjo

I like how he picked off the story and made it his own RWBY it is something I've watched on a regular basis. This book has caused my imagination to flare. I'm looking forward to more of this story.

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dragon_among_men

I need no reason for giving you another 5 star review. filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler

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Extant

I like this. I'm glad you didn't drop this at the beginning. I hope you keep writing this fan-fic of yours. I like it and look forward to the future chapters.

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Sans_Man

the legend has come back 🎉🎉🥳🥳________________________

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ArthurCE10

I've read two of your fic before(spider man, and dragon ball) and I saw this one as well, so I might as well try since I'm interested in rwby right now.

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xADx_kaneki

Drop? :'( 😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥

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SangN123

Okay author has made this charcter so god damn good that I wish this was the real version! Watching the show and stopping mid way certain season. This novel got me intrested when I was browsing around and seeing the name... I couldn't believe it at first but from the second word it clicked instantly and it had PROMISE! From the time skip of what you did any making the fight epic and the send off to the past made me jubliant to all degree! I loce the ship god a upgrade just from you Author and how you made RWBY so intresting once again! How the hell gave you such a idea for this guy... he was a... well a fob then a real man after you whip him up to be recarnated hero! Author keep it up you spent some real time improving a character who I disregard and flushed his story out. Some what thinking Ruby may accept phriah or not but hope they dhare sigh... Im a scum bag but the original time line and the beggingin makes me sad to see this but to you who makes it creates the world! Cheers den and keep it up!

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Ethan_Thompsom

Best I ever have had the pleasure to read

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anime_lover_6319

I hope you keep writing it's hard to find good jaune fanfic that finish

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DiligentKraken

this AU is very good not gonna lie the updates are slow but it's worth the wait

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Hellcat1963

I hope that this fanfic gets finished cause it is a masterpiece and I would love to read the rest of it

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Derse_Lover

I really do love this fanfic are you ever coming back to it?

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Balling

Honestly one of my favorite rwby fanfics. Only problem I have with this story is that author hasn’t updated in three years and the mc reveals he’s from the past a little too much. The character feel like actual characters and don’t just exist to boost the mc’s ego. The action is alright and the diologe isn’t boring either. Although kinda feels like he overpowers his teammates but they actively grow with him so not too much of an issue. There’s good romance and no harem. He has multiple love interests but only sticks to one girl.

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Wolfe_pack22

i love it but please come back and finish its so good i love rwby fanfics but people dont finish please do come back soon long live the king

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CookieHoarder

Good story, definitely left me wanting more! B.

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PrimordialKing

I love it has unique way of using the system that is not seen often and that can build up the story. I just hope they continue to write the way he is while continuing the story at a decent pace with proper character development

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Topo_15

It was a pretty great story at first but the whole sharing the system thing with others really ruins the story for me

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fire_does_gaming

I absolutely love this fanfic and can’t wait for you to make more of it.