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Well this is... First we have the prince coming for the princess and for a moment I thought well he is the ML but no. This is a nice twist of fairy tales although the last part are kind of... Oh well, this is a good read so here is 5* from me.
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I read the whole thing today. And to tell you the truth I wasn't really expecting much and just thought that this will be a quick reading break from another novel But behold the damn author made me change my words the story is lighthearted then tearjerking and again lighthearted. I was literally wailing and cursing the author in the middle. I then read on painfully until it again become the light-hearted romance it was supposed to be. I was delighted to see that all the chapters were long. Even though this is just 13 chapters it felt like 30 instead. I loved this.
The twists and turns are amazing and I appreciate the author for giving us a very “enticing” novel. I hope to see more of this author’s works. Very well done👍🏽
Even though the story is short is well made. It will even make you cry but has a satisfactory end. Sadly it does not have enough "action" 😂😂😂 but I still love the story.
I'm totally whipped by this novel.. It was a good experience reading this with those amazing plot twists. You did well till the end. So much impressed that I can read again and again. Waiting for more works from you author.
Two thumbs up! I love how the story develops and the twist and turns of the event. The character development is also fantastic. This is probably one of the most interesting BL novel I've read so far.
Goodness, so many twists and turns and I enjoy every moment. I love all of the characters and the chapter length is pretty nice also. I wish I would see more updates more often but I am so happy to read such a cute story.
♥️ 💏 ❤️ 💑 💜 🧖♀️🧖♂️ ♥️ 💏 ❤️ 💑 💜 🧖♀️🧖♂️ ♥️ 💏 ❤️ 💑 💜 🧖♀️🧖♂️ ♥️ 💏 ❤️ 💑 💜 🧖♀️🧖♂️ ♥️ 💏 ❤️ 💑 💜 🧖♀️🧖♂️ ♥️ 💏 ❤️ 💑 💜 🧖♀️🧖♂️
What a great story! I have never read such type of story in my life.It was almost breathtaking.wow! Dear author you are really creative and i appreciate it.waiting for the mass release
🥰 this story reminds me of beauty and the the beast or sleeping beauty or Snow White. So romantic 😍😘👫💑 evil 😈 shall be vanquished 😇🥳
Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
So happy that was just a dream. Finally they are getting their happy ending. Also happy for his cousin Qin like and the wild beasts. Yay. So hoping for HAPPY ending
justtttttttttttttttttttttttttttt awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
The story is nice and sweet. The MC is kind and naive and ML is very good to him. However be prepared for the extra and read it with tissues !!!! You will need it.
😭😭😭😭 I thought that after he killed himself will be the end.... I 😭 so much... I feel relief that it's not... Ahh... Just thinking how he suffered in that dream world... 😭😭😭 thankfully... Thankfully... Thankfully... It's not... Support for the author! [salute! ] here, ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ for the author...
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Finished reading. Okay, this was a pretty good, fun, quick read. A thing to note is that its pacing and writing is kind of like a fairytale's, as if someone is telling the story orally, so it's not a super detailed and elaborate story. But before you read! Please note that this story is a HE, but the very last chapter is BE. The last chapter, since it's part of the extras, is probably just optional. If you don't want your heart broken, just don't read the last chapter and save yourself from the grief... otherwise, this story is fun... and sweet... and definitely not sad......
I really liked this story, it was short and sweet. However, be prepared for the extras as it’s a doozy... Either way, it’s still a story worth checking out. :)
Aside from the last chapter. Not really sure what that was all about, but it was an extra so forgivable I guess. The main story was a sweet and innocent folk game love about a prince on a hunt for a princess and, well, kind of becomes the princess. The grammar is so so, but it suits the tone of voice to the narrative and time period. The story line is solid and compelling with a lot of thought into the tasks. An enjoyable BL overall.
Ok, so I don’t want to say too much. I really like where this is headed. The beginning is a little rushed, but I suspect the author wanted to rush to the main plot, and it’s still good even with the rush. I do recommend to at least try it out; if I turns out not to be your cup of tea, then don’t bash the author :)
Nice and enjoyable to read. Does not delay anything but one problem is that it was too short :( wanted to read more but the story came to an end :'( Thank you for the short and sweet story =)
Oh goodness. This story is soooo good!! Am really waiting to read the pa pa pa scene 🤭 And it's already completed! Really worth a read. Recommended!!!
It's so sweet, gentle and decent. I don't read stories of this genre but I gave it a try, and it turned out to be pretty good. It's short and cute! :)
No😲 no 😲no 😲😡😡😡😡😡where the pa pa pa pa pa chapter????????? You must make the continuing this novel 😍😍😍😍, it's not enough😙😙😘😘😚. More romance more chapter more pa pa pa😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 scene i don't mind if they become omegaverse i support 999999999999999999999,99999999999999999999% ok😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶
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This somehow reminds me of those childhood tales. Simple yet fulfilling with sweetness with a bit trace of cuteness. Need to brush teeth after eating this!
The story is cute 😍😍😍😍 even though it's short, it's still very sweet. I like its straighforwardness.... I also like that there are no complex development. Its simple and easy to understand which makes it fun to read 😍😍😍😍😍 if you like straightforward and adventure stories then this is a good read. It is also fine quality for a BL, not very indecent at all 🤣
Nice gentle short story. Reads like one of those fairy tale stories you read as a child. But not much plot development. No complex plots or heavy scenes. Just plain .... the world is this, the MC is like this. He meets the prince goes thru a few trials, the ML falls in love with MC and then they live happy ever after.
🤼🤼♂️🤼♂️🤾♀️🤺⛹️♂️⛹️🤾🏼🏇🏽🏇🏽🏄🏼♀️🏊🏼♂️🚴🏼♂️🚴🏽♀️🚵🏻♂️🍞🥯🥯🥐🍠🥔🍠🥯🍞🍳🥚🥨🧈🧈🥞🥓🥩🌭🦴🍗🍟🍕🔳🔷🔶🔶🔵🟢✔️🔜🔘🟠🟠🟠🔶🔶◽️🟫⬛️🟦🟦♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Well this is... First we have the prince coming for the princess and for a moment I thought well he is the ML but no. This is a nice twist of fairy tales although the last part are kind of... Oh well, this is a good read so here is 5* from me.
Revelar Spoiler Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I read the whole thing today. And to tell you the truth I wasn't really expecting much and just thought that this will be a quick reading break from another novel But behold the damn author made me change my words the story is lighthearted then tearjerking and again lighthearted. I was literally wailing and cursing the author in the middle. I then read on painfully until it again become the light-hearted romance it was supposed to be. I was delighted to see that all the chapters were long. Even though this is just 13 chapters it felt like 30 instead. I loved this.
The twists and turns are amazing and I appreciate the author for giving us a very “enticing” novel. I hope to see more of this author’s works. Very well done👍🏽
Even though the story is short is well made. It will even make you cry but has a satisfactory end. Sadly it does not have enough "action" 😂😂😂 but I still love the story.
I'm totally whipped by this novel.. It was a good experience reading this with those amazing plot twists. You did well till the end. So much impressed that I can read again and again. Waiting for more works from you author.
Two thumbs up! I love how the story develops and the twist and turns of the event. The character development is also fantastic. This is probably one of the most interesting BL novel I've read so far.
Goodness, so many twists and turns and I enjoy every moment. I love all of the characters and the chapter length is pretty nice also. I wish I would see more updates more often but I am so happy to read such a cute story.
♥️ 💏 ❤️ 💑 💜 🧖♀️🧖♂️ ♥️ 💏 ❤️ 💑 💜 🧖♀️🧖♂️ ♥️ 💏 ❤️ 💑 💜 🧖♀️🧖♂️ ♥️ 💏 ❤️ 💑 💜 🧖♀️🧖♂️ ♥️ 💏 ❤️ 💑 💜 🧖♀️🧖♂️ ♥️ 💏 ❤️ 💑 💜 🧖♀️🧖♂️
What a great story! I have never read such type of story in my life.It was almost breathtaking.wow! Dear author you are really creative and i appreciate it.waiting for the mass release
🥰 this story reminds me of beauty and the the beast or sleeping beauty or Snow White. So romantic 😍😘👫💑 evil 😈 shall be vanquished 😇🥳
Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
So happy that was just a dream. Finally they are getting their happy ending. Also happy for his cousin Qin like and the wild beasts. Yay. So hoping for HAPPY ending
justtttttttttttttttttttttttttttt awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
The story is nice and sweet. The MC is kind and naive and ML is very good to him. However be prepared for the extra and read it with tissues !!!! You will need it.
😭😭😭😭 I thought that after he killed himself will be the end.... I 😭 so much... I feel relief that it's not... Ahh... Just thinking how he suffered in that dream world... 😭😭😭 thankfully... Thankfully... Thankfully... It's not... Support for the author! [salute! ] here, ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ for the author...
Revelar Spoiler Finished reading. Okay, this was a pretty good, fun, quick read. A thing to note is that its pacing and writing is kind of like a fairytale's, as if someone is telling the story orally, so it's not a super detailed and elaborate story. But before you read! Please note that this story is a HE, but the very last chapter is BE. The last chapter, since it's part of the extras, is probably just optional. If you don't want your heart broken, just don't read the last chapter and save yourself from the grief... otherwise, this story is fun... and sweet... and definitely not sad......
I really liked this story, it was short and sweet. However, be prepared for the extras as it’s a doozy... Either way, it’s still a story worth checking out. :)
Aside from the last chapter. Not really sure what that was all about, but it was an extra so forgivable I guess. The main story was a sweet and innocent folk game love about a prince on a hunt for a princess and, well, kind of becomes the princess. The grammar is so so, but it suits the tone of voice to the narrative and time period. The story line is solid and compelling with a lot of thought into the tasks. An enjoyable BL overall.
Ok, so I don’t want to say too much. I really like where this is headed. The beginning is a little rushed, but I suspect the author wanted to rush to the main plot, and it’s still good even with the rush. I do recommend to at least try it out; if I turns out not to be your cup of tea, then don’t bash the author :)
Nice and enjoyable to read. Does not delay anything but one problem is that it was too short :( wanted to read more but the story came to an end :'( Thank you for the short and sweet story =)
Oh goodness. This story is soooo good!! Am really waiting to read the pa pa pa scene 🤭 And it's already completed! Really worth a read. Recommended!!!
It's so sweet, gentle and decent. I don't read stories of this genre but I gave it a try, and it turned out to be pretty good. It's short and cute! :)
No😲 no 😲no 😲😡😡😡😡😡where the pa pa pa pa pa chapter????????? You must make the continuing this novel 😍😍😍😍, it's not enough😙😙😘😘😚. More romance more chapter more pa pa pa😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 scene i don't mind if they become omegaverse i support 999999999999999999999,99999999999999999999% ok😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶
Revelar Spoiler This somehow reminds me of those childhood tales. Simple yet fulfilling with sweetness with a bit trace of cuteness. Need to brush teeth after eating this!
The story is cute 😍😍😍😍 even though it's short, it's still very sweet. I like its straighforwardness.... I also like that there are no complex development. Its simple and easy to understand which makes it fun to read 😍😍😍😍😍 if you like straightforward and adventure stories then this is a good read. It is also fine quality for a BL, not very indecent at all 🤣
Nice gentle short story. Reads like one of those fairy tale stories you read as a child. But not much plot development. No complex plots or heavy scenes. Just plain .... the world is this, the MC is like this. He meets the prince goes thru a few trials, the ML falls in love with MC and then they live happy ever after.
🤼🤼♂️🤼♂️🤾♀️🤺⛹️♂️⛹️🤾🏼🏇🏽🏇🏽🏄🏼♀️🏊🏼♂️🚴🏼♂️🚴🏽♀️🚵🏻♂️🍞🥯🥯🥐🍠🥔🍠🥯🍞🍳🥚🥨🧈🧈🥞🥓🥩🌭🦴🍗🍟🍕🔳🔷🔶🔶🔵🟢✔️🔜🔘🟠🟠🟠🔶🔶◽️🟫⬛️🟦🟦♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️