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Nice story but make sure you update the other chapter of the fast and it will be glad if we can finish the story because a story is best enjoy when fully read not half way
Good plot so far. Childish of the MC could be turned a bit. Character development could be improved. Childish of the MC could be turned a bit. English needs a little improvement. Update schedule could improve as well.
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Granpa haven't read it... just felt like giving a 5 star to someone... Goodluck... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm yep yep cute cuttteeee she'scute loliiiiii anime love hehehe no no no kill kill kill kill
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Wow. I REALLY like this book. My friend recommended it and I don’t regret reading it. Instead of sleeping Inread this book all day, everyday. 🤠💗🤠
Great so far. Could use a bit more details about the world and things happening around them but characters are likeable and it has a real feelgood vibe
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Definitely a great story with promise. Wish the world background could be expanded a little more though. In my opinion. Characters are good. The story is written in a way in which we can understand characters personalities quickly. This as much as I can say for now. Interested for the future of this novel.
Good another sports novel was looking for one to read and I’m sure I’ll turn out to like this story. I like the summary and reviews for this story at least. Can’t wait to read this novel and be hooked, lol💆🏻♀️Wahoo!!!
Hi, I'm the Author. This is my first time writing, so I'm open to any constructive feedback that my readers may have. I'm not going to give myself a 5 star score, because I don't want to raise expectations. I hope to improve over time to increase the quality of my work!
I really liked it! For a person who is not a native English speaker, this type of English is actually not that bad. Understandable. Grammar is OK. I don't mind it. 😂😂😂 However, one thing I would want you to do is that add quotation marks when a character is speaking, as it is quite confusing whether the person is speaking or not and when. I also like the idea. Keep it up!👍
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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Nice story but make sure you update the other chapter of the fast and it will be glad if we can finish the story because a story is best enjoy when fully read not half way
Good plot so far. Childish of the MC could be turned a bit. Character development could be improved. Childish of the MC could be turned a bit. English needs a little improvement. Update schedule could improve as well.
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Granpa haven't read it... just felt like giving a 5 star to someone... Goodluck... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm yep yep cute cuttteeee she'scute loliiiiii anime love hehehe no no no kill kill kill kill
I recommend the anime Capeta. About a race carts. Then later on it’s formula 1 carssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssSsssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Wow. I REALLY like this book. My friend recommended it and I don’t regret reading it. Instead of sleeping Inread this book all day, everyday. 🤠💗🤠
Great so far. Could use a bit more details about the world and things happening around them but characters are likeable and it has a real feelgood vibe
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Definitely a great story with promise. Wish the world background could be expanded a little more though. In my opinion. Characters are good. The story is written in a way in which we can understand characters personalities quickly. This as much as I can say for now. Interested for the future of this novel.
Good another sports novel was looking for one to read and I’m sure I’ll turn out to like this story. I like the summary and reviews for this story at least. Can’t wait to read this novel and be hooked, lol💆🏻♀️Wahoo!!!
Hi, I'm the Author. This is my first time writing, so I'm open to any constructive feedback that my readers may have. I'm not going to give myself a 5 star score, because I don't want to raise expectations. I hope to improve over time to increase the quality of my work!
I really liked it! For a person who is not a native English speaker, this type of English is actually not that bad. Understandable. Grammar is OK. I don't mind it. 😂😂😂 However, one thing I would want you to do is that add quotation marks when a character is speaking, as it is quite confusing whether the person is speaking or not and when. I also like the idea. Keep it up!👍
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.