A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO

LV 15

_Neith_

To be honest I expected this story to be terrible or for the grammar and plot to be all over the place. And for that I do apologize I did not expect for it to be a hidden gem. As of chapter 9 where you have written up to for us readers to enjoy the story is flowing very smoothly and while there are a lot of cliches, they are put in such a way that even though we know them they are actually enjoyable to read. I'm definitely looking forward to more from you if you are serious about this story and don't drop it or start to rush your chapters and give us half baked nonsense. Then this is looking to be a new favorite of mine. I saw you had no reviews and since I've never reviewed a story I thought hey why not do a first for the both of us. You have a great story here and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Have fun and for anyone reading this I hope you enjoy it as much as I have.

LV 13

Warlock235

This is definitely a hidden gem. Though it has an op protagonist, it uses it in a very good way. Definitely read this if you like a novel with gaming elements and a lazy but powerful protagonist.

LV 13

Space_Fox

I never understand those that like things like this.. "No world boss dont brother me Ibonly want ingredients for cooking" Novels where the MC is op and is given always the best option but refuses because he is going on another path for comedy and stuff, bla bla bla This type of novel just isn't for me, it's straight boring, would prefer a normal slice of life at that point.

LV 10

Sedyix

I think it will take very little time for this novel to receive the recognition it deserves...........................................................

LV 13

Monstererupter

An interesting read to say the least, if you like stories with an OP MC, then this is the book for you. Sadly, it doesn't get any updated anymore.. It's still an amazing book nonetheless. :)

LV 5

Pon4o

The grammar is so bad it's giving me a headache so I'm stopping here. I like the concept and it may have become one of me faves but the grammar and lack of care from the author to even try and fix it is killing it for me. It's one thing to spell a word wrong or to use the incorrect time but having missing words or phrases on top of all that just makes the sentences so annoying to decifer, that even my correct- as-I- read brain cannot keep up. That just means the writer didn't make an effort to even read the chapters a second time. Not being a native English speaker or having it as a second language is not an excuse for lasiness.

LV 15

MiasmaLotus

honestly it really sucks, that you stopped updating g the book is a great story, kinda wish it went slower. other that that it is an amazing story.

LV 4

Scholar_of_Dawn

Well, i will say this story is a good one , honestly i thought this wi be boring, because the typical story with strong mc from start is good only at start but wil be bad later. For now let say that this story have a good start and if the author can hold this to the end, this will be a great novel

LV 5

Flowing_River_Core

The MC is being led around by the nose, and the author says he is an idiot from the beginning and it really shows. It is so aobvious that its infruraiating. The story capitalizes on the MCs stupidity to further the plot by scamming, tricking, and misleading the MC with terrible vagueness that only he would fall for. It is a really well made story, if you don't mind the MC being lead around and not taking intiative. He mopes around about a past that he was determined to leave behind. The synopsis and intro came of as presenting this as a slice of life novel, where we watch the MC explore the game world with minimal fighting. But nope he just gonna be thrown through the wringer again and become another 'HERO' Just my out look on it, will stop reading it,may come back to it when I feel I can put up with the idiocy of the MC.

LV 12

blue_phoenix

Its fun and all in the story except that MC easily gets dragged into things again and again making him look like an idiot even though he seems to be smart.

LV 14

TheCynicalStrayCAt

the concept itself is already interesting.. and when you read it it's truly amazing how the author builds up the story and keep you interested each and every chapter. it has some small grammaer issue's here and there but doesn't affects your reading at all.

LV 14

Dobrozlo

I like this book very much. But i hope the release rate will be higher. This book is too interesting, i cannot wait. .....,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,,.,.,,.

LV 4

Petersburg90

And again what is with the manditory 140 characters for a review. The book has been great so far and is quite intersesting. (Seriously 140 characters)

LV 5

HatoYin

Just Really cringy MC is a card board Every one is a card board .................................................. ...........................

LV 4

iiReaperssi

The story is amazing and i love it ................... so please update it fast.. Thank you...... TTTTTTTTTTTTT TTTTTTTTTTTTTT TTTTTTTTTTTT TTTTTTTTTThank you.......

LV 6

Deepsea

Good story!!!!

LV 14

D_REAPER

This book is absolutely amazing it's well-thought-out and it honestly intrigues me about his past and what his present and future would be like from now on oh and does he have kids. I think this book can go a long way and that is very worthy of being published and I only read a dozen chapters starting to have the urge to binge and I'm going to end up being caught up with the releases and but then I'm going to be like noooooooo~

LV 3

SininenBlue

Overall it's pretty decent, with fun and likable characters and a somewhat interesting world. Though the dialogue feels bad since they talk exposition most of the time, it is still an enjoyable read. There are a few issues with the writing, as there are sometimes missing or misplaced commas, periods, apostrophes, and etc. Along with some missing words. Though it's not a big deal as I can still understand it, it does ruin the flow and takes you out of the book. I recommend using grammarly and a bit of proofreading.

LV 11

Tethien

Possibly the best original books on this site in my opinion, it has a very interesting premise and good execution, however there are some parts that could be made better, for me the format of quotes are sometimes hard to read. The content is enjoyable but sometimes a bit weird, mc returns from fantasy world, sure. But how the hell did the original world gets copy of the fantasy world, while it may not be an exact copy it is on a thin line. I may have possibly read wrong on that tho. Also there seems to be a bit too many beauties already, I think it was 4 by now, to be honest it is a very common trope in novels and I thought this novel would go a bit differently but not so far so ~~ eh. That’s about all I could find wrong with it, wait I would think that this story requires some planing so it would take longer to write with it’s weird/different plot, it already shows. Yeah that’s about all, if your looking for a fresh breath into the vrmmorpg genre this is possibly the best choice in this platform.

LV 13

DawnJester

This shizz real good. But i see a problem with world building in earth. My solution to that is let nexus train eddie even if it's just a glimpse every arc from eddies perspective. Just so we understand more about the current earth.