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now this is a novel i can get behind. the story is nice and equally paced to the point you know whats happening. you dont get blanked cuz of some event u didnt know about. this is an awesome novel that makes me feel like im actually travelled with the mc. give it a try. i promise you will enjoy it.
Absolutely Incredible I'm about halfway through this book (430 at the time of writing this) and I can say without any doubt that this is one of the best novels I've read it is definitely within my top three. I'll start by saying that this novel really does draw you in and make you feel for the characters makes you love some and absolutely despise others both types been written to and amazing standard. This novel has made me feel sadness and pure joy at the characters interactions the MC Benjamin Joyce it's truly a wonderfully written MC to follow and his interactions feel real. Anyhow for people wondering whether to read this or not I 100% suggest you do this novel, to me, is a solid 9/10
Author are really good at writing. The MC truly feels like a grandpa that I wish I can ever have. The crafting is very detailed I feels like I am the one that make it. I wish grandpa lives long.
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I do love this novel, even with it errors. It has a good attitude on everyone can change and become better. I love that it shows that your race, age, etc don't limit you. I am disappointed about the bit with Michael. I agree that he was overboard and wrong, but it seemed to reference his religion as the source. I am what you might call a Mormon (that is what Michael is refered to). I agree that we don't believe in drinking alcohol or coffee, but what Michael is over the top and not a good example of my religion.
Firstly, everything that is done in this story happens for a reason. The main character isn't someone who ever so happens to know how to craft everything in the world or knows how to initiate every single skill possible, but rather someone who has been meddling with the world of mechanical arts since very early on in life, meaning he has experience in what he does. Few novels take an interesting plot and develop it into a good story with a fantastic character design, alongside detailed explanations. The author explores many elements in an attempt to use them to the fullest extent possible. The author uses adjectives and adverbs to help communicate the characters' true feelings, making them seem more life-like. Instead of tossing out random actions, the author writes what the characters would say or do, based on their personalities. In the beginning, however, it is a bit slow. Emphasizing a single outfit per chapter or explaining how to make knives over a handful of chapters. The first few chapters do not feature much action. Although I said that the author explores many elements in an attempt to use them to the fullest extent possible, this comes with many downsides, such as the author's English vocabulary isn't as sophisticated as experienced novelists, as he tosses out the wrong words, resulting in the viewers misinterpreting what the author wishes to convey. Also, it seems that the author has yet to do any updates as of recently, and most of the later chapters are locked under premium. [HOWEVER, DO NOT JUDGE A BOOK BY ITS COVER AND REVIEWS!] This story is, by far, better than most stories on Webnovel. It can easily be within the top selection of many people's stories if they wished to give it a read. Most of the aforementioned cons can be ignored by simply glancing over them.
une tres bonne base et de bonnes rigolades .pas mal d'infos sur du vrai crafting. par contre ca peut vite devenir repetitif paour certains lecteurs... dommage.
If you like books that focus on crafting, then this is the book for you. The characters are well written, and expertly detailed. The plot is somewhat relaxed, but it is still attention grabbing. Out of the hundreds of thousands of books I have read, this is definitely one of my favorites!
I love all of this so very Much I love how much you have devoloped the characters and how much you have developed the world. the only thing i can ask of you now is to update this more. I really miss coming in for new chapters
THIS WEBNOVEL IS SO GREATTT :D!!! I LOVE IT :DDDDD!!!!! I WILL DEFINITELY CONTINUE READING THIS WEBNOVELLL!!!! :DDD Please continue updating
And another one bites the dust. so much for stealing my atones for months to leave me empty handed with nothing to look forward to each day like you used to.
Bit slow at the begining i mean lets be honest at the time he was lether working you were also like when is he gonna slay some dragons but for the rest it’s a fun read and there are some worldbuilding element in the first few chapters so it allright.
The Story has a good flow with great and relatable characters with understandable relationships and the action scenes are interesting with excitement and flair
I haven't read much so it may change, but the character interactions and dialogue is absolutely atrocious. I can't stand it anymore. It's plain bad, and I hope it improves later on, because there is a ton of potential in this novel. I really like all the parts where there isn't any interactions with other characters, but it should be that I like all parts of the story, not just a few.
the story is quite good and well written. it also contains various interesting ideas and knowledge. i have been reading this work for quite some time now however it suddenly stopped updating since a few months ago. I'm not really sure because i still haven't read the last few privilege chapters so i just wanted to ask if the story finished already, or was it dropped by the author? i really hope that it won't be dropped because it has a very good story and concept
A good one but not the Best. I think the fact that the MC is a grandpa is a easy way for originality, but he is good presently. In fact the irl story is average for me but the ingame story is cool. If you are starting in MMO LN, Read it after the mainstream like OG, moonlight scuptor etc.
When are you going to finish writing this? Or at least continue writing this? It's been around 3 months since last update. I thoroughly enjoy this book, by far one of my favorites that I have read on Webnovel. The characters are all very well written and fleshed out and the plot is captivating. I love that it bleeds into both worlds and brings some excitement to each.
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This novel is (from what I’ve read thusfar) a more upbeat kind of book. The main character is extremely nice (sometimes a bit too nice I think, personal preference). The writing is good though get ready to read smiled softly A LOT. Best craftsmanship related novel I’ve found. Overall great, but I kind of like darker novels. Definitely check out the author’s other book “Demon’s Virtue” if you want something darker, especially if you like non-human main characters.
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I downloaded this app because of this novel I have read my fair share of litrpgs, it is in fact one of my favorite genres There’s just something about this story that makes me want to comeback to it everytime. I’m not sure why it suddenly stopped updating, if there’s a reason I don’t know about please tell me but I just wanted to share how good this novel is Don’t get turned off by the title It has a really stable world building that just makes you keep on hoping to learn more about and the characters being real characters with personalities rather than fodder for the MCs growth. I can’t wait for more!
Really great story hope it does not end any time soon go go 2k chapters :3 really like the outside mc life story it is really interesting, i would like if him focused more and more in making weapons and showing us the status and everything the only ''bad'' thing i have to say about this one :3
The more I read, the more I love it. its such an interesting take of the fantasy RPG genre, and the characters are so well written, they feel alive to me. Maybe thats got something to do with me being a maker myself, the crafting aspect just resonates with me. reguardless, gonna have to pace myself, otherwise I'll binge read the whole thing and then be sad waiting for more.
I really like this book. Crafting is awesome. The world is awesome. It will take me a while to get to the end, but I hope the author keeps writing and finishes it.
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Revelar Spoiler
The story is going in a strange direction, at around chapter 150 or so a few inconsistent details started to appear, one of which was the inconsistent characters, another was characters changing in unexplained ways. The way the mc interacts with most other people makes sense to a degree, but again, weird shut starts happening around 150-200. And then there's the few minor details the author keeps throwing in every now and then that seem to looking for browny points? I'm not even too sure at this point anymore what I'm reading.
Revelar Spoiler
Read up to 390. There's a vibe (which i don't particularly like) I'm feeling when continuing the story further. Its the same vibe I got when reading I'm Really a Superstar.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Revelar Spoiler
Really like this novel. It has a good family dynamic IRL and has wholesome moments in the game which feels like something an old man would do most of the time.
I have passed this novel several times that I have seen over the last two years. Now I have decided to read it. I hope it is as good as the reviews. I will be commenting under this review once in a while to update new readers how the novel is. Rating this 3 stars for now. If the novel really suprises me then I don’t mind supporting the book just like RSSG, pocket dimension, infinite mana in the apocalypse and also my favourite system novel - The strongest system 😀
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now this is a novel i can get behind. the story is nice and equally paced to the point you know whats happening. you dont get blanked cuz of some event u didnt know about. this is an awesome novel that makes me feel like im actually travelled with the mc. give it a try. i promise you will enjoy it.
Absolutely Incredible I'm about halfway through this book (430 at the time of writing this) and I can say without any doubt that this is one of the best novels I've read it is definitely within my top three. I'll start by saying that this novel really does draw you in and make you feel for the characters makes you love some and absolutely despise others both types been written to and amazing standard. This novel has made me feel sadness and pure joy at the characters interactions the MC Benjamin Joyce it's truly a wonderfully written MC to follow and his interactions feel real. Anyhow for people wondering whether to read this or not I 100% suggest you do this novel, to me, is a solid 9/10
Author are really good at writing. The MC truly feels like a grandpa that I wish I can ever have. The crafting is very detailed I feels like I am the one that make it. I wish grandpa lives long.
I love it. 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料 填料
I do love this novel, even with it errors. It has a good attitude on everyone can change and become better. I love that it shows that your race, age, etc don't limit you. I am disappointed about the bit with Michael. I agree that he was overboard and wrong, but it seemed to reference his religion as the source. I am what you might call a Mormon (that is what Michael is refered to). I agree that we don't believe in drinking alcohol or coffee, but what Michael is over the top and not a good example of my religion.
Firstly, everything that is done in this story happens for a reason. The main character isn't someone who ever so happens to know how to craft everything in the world or knows how to initiate every single skill possible, but rather someone who has been meddling with the world of mechanical arts since very early on in life, meaning he has experience in what he does. Few novels take an interesting plot and develop it into a good story with a fantastic character design, alongside detailed explanations. The author explores many elements in an attempt to use them to the fullest extent possible. The author uses adjectives and adverbs to help communicate the characters' true feelings, making them seem more life-like. Instead of tossing out random actions, the author writes what the characters would say or do, based on their personalities. In the beginning, however, it is a bit slow. Emphasizing a single outfit per chapter or explaining how to make knives over a handful of chapters. The first few chapters do not feature much action. Although I said that the author explores many elements in an attempt to use them to the fullest extent possible, this comes with many downsides, such as the author's English vocabulary isn't as sophisticated as experienced novelists, as he tosses out the wrong words, resulting in the viewers misinterpreting what the author wishes to convey. Also, it seems that the author has yet to do any updates as of recently, and most of the later chapters are locked under premium. [HOWEVER, DO NOT JUDGE A BOOK BY ITS COVER AND REVIEWS!] This story is, by far, better than most stories on Webnovel. It can easily be within the top selection of many people's stories if they wished to give it a read. Most of the aforementioned cons can be ignored by simply glancing over them.
une tres bonne base et de bonnes rigolades .pas mal d'infos sur du vrai crafting. par contre ca peut vite devenir repetitif paour certains lecteurs... dommage.
If you like books that focus on crafting, then this is the book for you. The characters are well written, and expertly detailed. The plot is somewhat relaxed, but it is still attention grabbing. Out of the hundreds of thousands of books I have read, this is definitely one of my favorites!
I love all of this so very Much I love how much you have devoloped the characters and how much you have developed the world. the only thing i can ask of you now is to update this more. I really miss coming in for new chapters
THIS WEBNOVEL IS SO GREATTT :D!!! I LOVE IT :DDDDD!!!!! I WILL DEFINITELY CONTINUE READING THIS WEBNOVELLL!!!! :DDD Please continue updating
And another one bites the dust. so much for stealing my atones for months to leave me empty handed with nothing to look forward to each day like you used to.
Bit slow at the begining i mean lets be honest at the time he was lether working you were also like when is he gonna slay some dragons but for the rest it’s a fun read and there are some worldbuilding element in the first few chapters so it allright.
The Story has a good flow with great and relatable characters with understandable relationships and the action scenes are interesting with excitement and flair
I haven't read much so it may change, but the character interactions and dialogue is absolutely atrocious. I can't stand it anymore. It's plain bad, and I hope it improves later on, because there is a ton of potential in this novel. I really like all the parts where there isn't any interactions with other characters, but it should be that I like all parts of the story, not just a few.
the story is quite good and well written. it also contains various interesting ideas and knowledge. i have been reading this work for quite some time now however it suddenly stopped updating since a few months ago. I'm not really sure because i still haven't read the last few privilege chapters so i just wanted to ask if the story finished already, or was it dropped by the author? i really hope that it won't be dropped because it has a very good story and concept
A good one but not the Best. I think the fact that the MC is a grandpa is a easy way for originality, but he is good presently. In fact the irl story is average for me but the ingame story is cool. If you are starting in MMO LN, Read it after the mainstream like OG, moonlight scuptor etc.
When are you going to finish writing this? Or at least continue writing this? It's been around 3 months since last update. I thoroughly enjoy this book, by far one of my favorites that I have read on Webnovel. The characters are all very well written and fleshed out and the plot is captivating. I love that it bleeds into both worlds and brings some excitement to each.
Revelar Spoiler This novel is (from what I’ve read thusfar) a more upbeat kind of book. The main character is extremely nice (sometimes a bit too nice I think, personal preference). The writing is good though get ready to read smiled softly A LOT. Best craftsmanship related novel I’ve found. Overall great, but I kind of like darker novels. Definitely check out the author’s other book “Demon’s Virtue” if you want something darker, especially if you like non-human main characters.
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I downloaded this app because of this novel I have read my fair share of litrpgs, it is in fact one of my favorite genres There’s just something about this story that makes me want to comeback to it everytime. I’m not sure why it suddenly stopped updating, if there’s a reason I don’t know about please tell me but I just wanted to share how good this novel is Don’t get turned off by the title It has a really stable world building that just makes you keep on hoping to learn more about and the characters being real characters with personalities rather than fodder for the MCs growth. I can’t wait for more!
Really great story hope it does not end any time soon go go 2k chapters :3 really like the outside mc life story it is really interesting, i would like if him focused more and more in making weapons and showing us the status and everything the only ''bad'' thing i have to say about this one :3
The more I read, the more I love it. its such an interesting take of the fantasy RPG genre, and the characters are so well written, they feel alive to me. Maybe thats got something to do with me being a maker myself, the crafting aspect just resonates with me. reguardless, gonna have to pace myself, otherwise I'll binge read the whole thing and then be sad waiting for more.
I really like this book. Crafting is awesome. The world is awesome. It will take me a while to get to the end, but I hope the author keeps writing and finishes it.
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Revelar Spoiler The story is going in a strange direction, at around chapter 150 or so a few inconsistent details started to appear, one of which was the inconsistent characters, another was characters changing in unexplained ways. The way the mc interacts with most other people makes sense to a degree, but again, weird shut starts happening around 150-200. And then there's the few minor details the author keeps throwing in every now and then that seem to looking for browny points? I'm not even too sure at this point anymore what I'm reading.
Revelar Spoiler Read up to 390. There's a vibe (which i don't particularly like) I'm feeling when continuing the story further. Its the same vibe I got when reading I'm Really a Superstar.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Revelar Spoiler Really like this novel. It has a good family dynamic IRL and has wholesome moments in the game which feels like something an old man would do most of the time.
I have passed this novel several times that I have seen over the last two years. Now I have decided to read it. I hope it is as good as the reviews. I will be commenting under this review once in a while to update new readers how the novel is. Rating this 3 stars for now. If the novel really suprises me then I don’t mind supporting the book just like RSSG, pocket dimension, infinite mana in the apocalypse and also my favourite system novel - The strongest system 😀