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i love this story it's well written and while the first chapters grammar isn't the best it keep's getting better and i must say this is my favorite novel so far keep it up please.
Wonderful, thank u for the chapter, it was really interest , the main character ace is really an interesting fellow , I see that u have taking so of the contribution into the story and I can smell something fishy in the air.
Awesome original novel i hope u could release more but 1 chapter a day is good 👍 ill give u some power stones hopefully that will make u keep you confident about your work. Keep it up.
Ha ha ha ha really interesting, the main character getting is ass kicked in the first two round , and been acknowledged by Lucas and all , I really Wonder what will happen next or with all the experience point he has gain as they fight on will they say he made a break through just as they will in other books, and what is the connection between rea and Astrid, should the main character not get the most beautiful girl in the story or will she drive an edge between two friends. Cant wait to find out
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It's a good.read and I'm enjoy it but its starting to slow down. ........................................................................................
Can you add a glossary chapter giving details about the cultivation levels and mc's status update every 25 chapters .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Awesomeness original novel by wonderful author. There was a time when I simply got tired of reading boring cultivation and game novels when I found this gem. There is still some clichés common to all novels- poor background MC, system, but the author skillfully uses them to their full potential. One thing I liked is the lack of arrogant,silky pants young master. MC's sect is more or less united. There is no intra-disciple killing,intra-elders though there are rankings but it is much peaceful. In my opinion that's how a sect should be. I hate arcs on sect civil wars and MC's first sect being the weakest sect in the weakest kingdom of the spiritually weakest region of the weakest continent ( the list goes on if you know what I mean😏). Here the MC's sect is the strongest in his world and the sect is still powerful and not ruled by young masters. Here elders do not shout ," Kid, don't you know the immensity of heaven and earth!!" I hope the author continues the story in this manner.
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The story is well written, the narrative is engaging and draws you in. I like that the sect actually seems sensible and tries to protect it's members so that they have room to grow. The antagonists don't immediately become an unthinking big bad, intent on destroying the MC because of a minor perceived slight. Instead while they are human and might take advantage or get angry, they can recognise how to act reasonably. While the MC does seem to be able to abuse their plot device and people seem to be oblivious to the insane speed of MC's progress, I've not yet read far enough to see if this sort of progress would be understandable for an as yet unexplained reason. Given the well thought out nature of the world that the author has built so far though I'm willing to give the benefit of the doubt. Overall a very good start and a novel I will follow eagerly. The five star ratings are deserved.
Overall this story is great if you like systems and stuff. And even though I can’t say for the future there’s no nsfw. Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Great novel. Buuuuut, main character should take more example on Yours Trully. Of course, with a better ending. That one was a big mess. Anyway, I was just passing by, call me Lin Ren.
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Bro gimme more your story got potential n i love it please update it once for 3 days I can't stop reading it bro, please make a mass release.
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Good read to find out......;).............. might find out it’s what you looking for....................................................... ..................................
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This is an Interesting story with many fammiliar things like alchemist and op mc. Just that he has a system. And as always, a fatty bro, eye for eye and different stuff
VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERY GOOD ............................................................................................................................................................................................................
VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERY GOOD ............................................................................................................................................................................................................
VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERY GOOD ............................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story is perfectly played out from the beginning. The mc is well developed and learns as he goes along with the story. Setting of the world seems perfect for where the story is currently at and every extra character has a purpose for being in the novel itself to develop the environment around the mc. Mc is also an average person which makes it easier to relate to than some power striving mc
Its a good novel so far hopefully you don’t decide to drop the novel i want to read more hahah keep up the good work 👍 👌 Ill give u my power stones i hope u would release more chapters 👍
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Keep doing i pretty liked .Please just dont put harem or romance .Battle freak or revenge is good choice I dont wanna see some stupid love story (girl is just weight )or MC who thinks with his dick. It must be like Daoist gu(personality)+Strongest system(story) .
So far I love the story keep up the good work author ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
very good ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is a total hidden gem! I had scrolled nearly all the way to the bottom of the Eastern Fantasy genre to come across this novel. I'm worried that because it's hidden too well, it might not get the amount of reviews that this author deserves...😢😢. So...I'll gift thos review! Hehe.
She's a ***** whore who blyadstvo solava ***** mother **** a ***** ,**** this bitches antics.if it goes on like this, **** it..................................
🚕🚚🚗🚚🚕🚚🚙⚓🏍️🛢️🛵🛢️🛵⚓🚙🚜🚗🚜🚗🚜🚓🚚🚓🚚🚑🛬🚁🛫🏠🛬🚁🛬🚡🛫🚠🛥️🛳️🚁🏕️🛩️🛬🏠🛫⛺💺🚀🚀🚡💺🚁🛬🏡🛬🏠🏭🚁🏢🚡🏚️🚡🚀🚁🚀🚁🛫🛩️🛬🏡🏭🛩️🏭🏠🛬⛺🚀⛺💺🏠🛫🛫🏠🏭💺🚡
i love this story it's well written and while the first chapters grammar isn't the best it keep's getting better and i must say this is my favorite novel so far keep it up please.
Wonderful, thank u for the chapter, it was really interest , the main character ace is really an interesting fellow , I see that u have taking so of the contribution into the story and I can smell something fishy in the air.
Awesome original novel i hope u could release more but 1 chapter a day is good 👍 ill give u some power stones hopefully that will make u keep you confident about your work. Keep it up.
Ha ha ha ha really interesting, the main character getting is ass kicked in the first two round , and been acknowledged by Lucas and all , I really Wonder what will happen next or with all the experience point he has gain as they fight on will they say he made a break through just as they will in other books, and what is the connection between rea and Astrid, should the main character not get the most beautiful girl in the story or will she drive an edge between two friends. Cant wait to find out
Revelar Spoiler It's a good.read and I'm enjoy it but its starting to slow down. ........................................................................................
Can you add a glossary chapter giving details about the cultivation levels and mc's status update every 25 chapters .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Awesomeness original novel by wonderful author. There was a time when I simply got tired of reading boring cultivation and game novels when I found this gem. There is still some clichés common to all novels- poor background MC, system, but the author skillfully uses them to their full potential. One thing I liked is the lack of arrogant,silky pants young master. MC's sect is more or less united. There is no intra-disciple killing,intra-elders though there are rankings but it is much peaceful. In my opinion that's how a sect should be. I hate arcs on sect civil wars and MC's first sect being the weakest sect in the weakest kingdom of the spiritually weakest region of the weakest continent ( the list goes on if you know what I mean😏). Here the MC's sect is the strongest in his world and the sect is still powerful and not ruled by young masters. Here elders do not shout ," Kid, don't you know the immensity of heaven and earth!!" I hope the author continues the story in this manner.
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The story is well written, the narrative is engaging and draws you in. I like that the sect actually seems sensible and tries to protect it's members so that they have room to grow. The antagonists don't immediately become an unthinking big bad, intent on destroying the MC because of a minor perceived slight. Instead while they are human and might take advantage or get angry, they can recognise how to act reasonably. While the MC does seem to be able to abuse their plot device and people seem to be oblivious to the insane speed of MC's progress, I've not yet read far enough to see if this sort of progress would be understandable for an as yet unexplained reason. Given the well thought out nature of the world that the author has built so far though I'm willing to give the benefit of the doubt. Overall a very good start and a novel I will follow eagerly. The five star ratings are deserved.
Overall this story is great if you like systems and stuff. And even though I can’t say for the future there’s no nsfw. Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Great novel. Buuuuut, main character should take more example on Yours Trully. Of course, with a better ending. That one was a big mess. Anyway, I was just passing by, call me Lin Ren.
great novel cant wait for future updates all the besttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
Bro gimme more your story got potential n i love it please update it once for 3 days I can't stop reading it bro, please make a mass release.
,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,.........................,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,..,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,.........................,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...........,........,...............................,...........,........,...........,........,..........................
Good read to find out......;).............. might find out it’s what you looking for....................................................... ..................................
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This is an Interesting story with many fammiliar things like alchemist and op mc. Just that he has a system. And as always, a fatty bro, eye for eye and different stuff
VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERY GOOD ............................................................................................................................................................................................................
VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERY GOOD ............................................................................................................................................................................................................
VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERY GOOD ............................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story is perfectly played out from the beginning. The mc is well developed and learns as he goes along with the story. Setting of the world seems perfect for where the story is currently at and every extra character has a purpose for being in the novel itself to develop the environment around the mc. Mc is also an average person which makes it easier to relate to than some power striving mc
Its a good novel so far hopefully you don’t decide to drop the novel i want to read more hahah keep up the good work 👍 👌 Ill give u my power stones i hope u would release more chapters 👍
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Keep doing i pretty liked .Please just dont put harem or romance .Battle freak or revenge is good choice I dont wanna see some stupid love story (girl is just weight )or MC who thinks with his dick. It must be like Daoist gu(personality)+Strongest system(story) .
So far I love the story keep up the good work author ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
very good ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is a total hidden gem! I had scrolled nearly all the way to the bottom of the Eastern Fantasy genre to come across this novel. I'm worried that because it's hidden too well, it might not get the amount of reviews that this author deserves...😢😢. So...I'll gift thos review! Hehe.