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the story is siMple and beautiful... I wish that the action parts were described as the RomaNtic parts were described... we know its planned but when it happens its too fast like a summary... but i loved it... ♥️
I thought this story was pretty good. It kept me interested from the beginning. It had some plot twists that made it even better. There were minor grammar mistakes but nothing too bad that took away from the story. Good job author.
Good one ... This is one fast pacing story.....!!!! Thur who love short stories can give this a try 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Greatly story..... Unexpected I liked it... storyline very good smoothly and enjoying to read.... thanks you author..... yours job very great 👍👍👍👍💝💝💝💝
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the story is siMple and beautiful... I wish that the action parts were described as the RomaNtic parts were described... we know its planned but when it happens its too fast like a summary... but i loved it... ♥️
I thought this story was pretty good. It kept me interested from the beginning. It had some plot twists that made it even better. There were minor grammar mistakes but nothing too bad that took away from the story. Good job author.
Good one ... This is one fast pacing story.....!!!! Thur who love short stories can give this a try 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Greatly story..... Unexpected I liked it... storyline very good smoothly and enjoying to read.... thanks you author..... yours job very great 👍👍👍👍💝💝💝💝
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