Across Time and Space

LV 15

XOMatsumaeohana

Review Swap Valid till chapter 29 Writing Quality: • Typos: Chapter 1- Jiang Xiao Lang said(,) (") Of course, they're angry. - The () is what you missed out. • Chapter 5 - Ying Yi skill isn't, that bad -- (remove the comma) • Word usage Chapter 1- Instead of "won't happen" --> "wouldn't happen." --on that herbs ---> "on those herbs" -- so will them ---> "so will they." •Clarity: Avoid using "his" "her" she" "he" too much it starts sounding ranty. Try to avoid this and use the characters names. • Now the positives. The authors writing style isn't bad, aside from the few oddly worded sentences. The writing style flows well, there's a balance of description regarding character actions/ thoughts and feelings too. Story Development: The pace of the story is not bad at all, not too rushed or too slow. The first chunk of chapters show the female lead and male lead in the old world. Only on chapter twenty nine, (I do plan to read more since this story interests me) I want to learn more about the Princess at this stage in the story. 🤔 when will the transition or the separation happen? Character Development: 🤔🤔 Well I think the author could improve on this aspect. A lot of characters appear at the begining with no mini introduction. Chapter four you do explain who Han Zhengting is. But I wish you gave some more background information regarding the Princess. 😲 But the 👍 is the ML. I learn about him from the very start, I don't quite understand why he has such deep feelings for the FL though. Perhaps more background information on this. Also I want to know is there a reason the Princess name isn't mentioned, or maybe I missed it? World Background: I do think the author did a great job with the world background regarding the story. The setting and scene changes are written very well. I have an overview of the Empire in the first few chapters. The transition from the prologue (modern world) to the old world is good too. I didn't get confused. 4.6/5

LV 5

rolling_rains

Just finished reading this one This was such a good read, the characters were developed and we had good friendships. I also liked that the focus was more on characters rather than the politics and drama. It was not dragged and Mingyue and Yang Yun definitely were my favourite couple.

LV 15

Tinalynge

This story is incredibly interesting. Writing Quality: I thought that overall, it was well written. There were a few mistakes here and there, but nothing that took away from my joy of reading the story. Stability of updates: I read everything in one go, and have not waited for more, so I am unable to comment on this point. Story development: I liked the pace of the story. It is detailed enough, but at the same time not so detailed that it gets boring. Enough happens but it does not feel rushed. Character development: The characters are good, there was a bit of lack of information from the start, but it was very interesting to slowly get to know them. I like the way they are written. World background: The world is described well, I like how it is being introduced without forcing focus away from the plot. Well done!

LV 10

niharikabhol

This novel is a really good find. It's a romantic period drama which is set in a very beautiful and artistic way. The chapters are well designed and this make it really interesting to read. You will definitely not stop at just one chapter. There are few grammatical mistakes here and there which can be ignored because of the brightness of the story. Overall I really liked the novel and early waiting for the story to unfold.

LV 4

Sapphirechelsea237

Synopsis itself is very interesting. it's unique and fresh! I like the story very much! A few mistakes here and there but for someone like me, whose first language is not English, these mistakes are hardly noticeable. Great plot and great characters! Keep writing! :)

LV 10

Nana_alcelinia

This story hook me from the start.. Curiosity got me. And the development of the story and the character entrance me.. Author thanks for the story and your hardwork! Looking forward for another chapters.. I hope this story will not dragging to long And have a happy ending..

LV 3

Missbrie

I love the character development and relationships so far (even the cat has its own personality which I love). The story has pulled me in so I cant wait to read the rest. Keep working hard :)

LV 5

Minitabs

It seems a great story to me, I didn't read all of it for now but I sure would! Little mistakes not too noticeable for people for whom English isn't their first language like me. The characters are well defined and actually quite funny (which help diving into the story). A good read which I will probably finish in one go just to wait for each new chapter!

LV 2

abel_cxpher

I really love the plot.......the world background.......everything is just perfect !!! I cant wait to finish the chapters already released......

LV 13

AleeqaC

Honestly I don't plan to read this story because I don't really like ancient setting, but somehow I started reading this. I've read authors other work before and I always thought that her writing is simple and her word construction is easy for me to understand. I love the idea of different time and space and the way the story is written is perfect, it is easy to understand the concept without having to fried my brain to understand it.

LV 12

Cielune

Me enganchó completamente. Tiene todos mis temas de interés: romance, transmigracion, reencarnacion, etc. It hooked me completely. It has all my topics of interest: romance, transmigration, reincarnation, etc.

LV 3

Shaiza_Apple

when will fl time travel? I mean in which chapter anyone? 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

LV 15

Rxel

Interesting so far! Particularly, I like how the story is developing and the character development. Though there are several errors, it's not too glaring and doesnt detract from the reading pleasure. Hope to see more! Keep up the good work!

LV 6

sanchari1996

first I have to say that I consider myself lucky enough that I come across to this marvelous story...the plot of the story is really out of the box and for me it's of a new genre too...but it really amazed me how harmonious and smooth sailing the story was😊😊The author has done an excellent job in creating simple yet strong and independent characters, the stories of first, second and third leads didn't overshadowed each other but complemented each other well...the time travelling part was such a tricky thing to write yet it was written in such an outstanding and magical way that I really used to get goosebumps while reading them...this story is gonna stay in my memories forever 😊😊 and Yang Yun ❤️ Mingue & Lingchen❤️Lu Wei & Xue Yi Ming❤️ Lin Tian Yu too but Yang Yun 😘it's you who has stolen my heart and rose as my favourite 😍😍

LV 3

K_A_U

I really liked the book, I love the cat, in my imagination he is sooo cute. There are alot of errors like your usage of the word struck in the first chapter doesn't correspond with the sentence. I really like the character devept. and I feel like I CAN RELATE WITH THEM.

LV 4

ArisuLuwei

The story development is a bit slow, probably with the short chapters.... but interesting read so far. But, it's still too early to tell. I'm looking forward to read more and see where the story is going.

LV 5

PinkCotton

The story has potential. Since it is still in the earlier phases, I can't accurately judge the development. The novel isn't too complex and is easy to understand. It also doesn't have the super cliche characters. I would recommend giving it a try, i'm looking forward to future chapters to see how the plot is going to develop. Good work so far.

LV 4

Ishita23

Was hooked by just reading the synopsis. However, you may want to expand it a little bit by introducing one or two lines of conversation. But that's just my opinion 😉 The plot is good and developing well. Can't wait to read further. Character and world background is well developed. Although there are a few glitches here and there, but the smooth flow of the story makes up for it. This one goes straight to my library 😁

LV 5

Prachee_Ranjan

a really interesting story set in ancient times with a interesting concept of time traveling 👍👍👍👍 I would really like to try other books of this author

LV 5

ILLYAchan

This story is interesting. I read through chapter 55 where they're still in their world. I wonder what will happen to the next chapters. :) It's has a good writing quality that gives me a nice reading experience and the plot and everything are done nicely. I'll read the rest of the chapters! Goodluck author!