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While it isn’t the greatest novel in terms of grammar the author does know how to write an enjoyable and well pieces together story and even with the out of place words the story is still understandable if you realize what the author is trying to say the release schedule is on point and the chapters are released twice every day at around the same time decently early in the day (at least for me idk about you guys/girls but I’m on est) overall I think that the novel has a lot of potential to grow and become better as long as the author puts his work into it I don’t know much about the author but I think he takes the criticism he gets quite well considering that he’s liked just about every low ranking review of the novel so far so good on him I just hope that the author can improve and become better through each criticism he gets I’d love to see the novel grow even bigger and make it into the top 50 someday.
This novel deserves more credit than it has been getting. I mean come on the main character made a deal with the devil, became immortal and his mother dies
Revelar Spoiler
Hello............................................................................. THANK YOU FOR READING!!........ .................................................
Good....... Seriously it is, it starts off as a pretty disjointed plot but little by little it's starting to pick up the pace, plotwise at least,
Take me out of this state I'm in Go somewhere I've never been Got something trapped inside Still alive, where's that paradise? I thought by now I'd find Rough justice is a long lifeline Back and forth between the desert and the sea Who I was and I will always be Oh yeah, woo hoo Too bad, woo hoo So sad, woo hoo Get me out of this state I'm in When I spiral down, it's a vile spin Got something I can't hide Still alive, it's an overwhelming drive To prevail and get out of this jail Dust in my eyes and a tear in my sail Back and forth between the desert and the sea Who I was and I will always be Oh yeah, woo hoo Too bad, woo hoo So sad, woo hoo Take me out 'cause I'm all alone Hair undone, despair unknown Got something trapped inside Still alive, it's a momentary ride I've been on a thousand years too long A thousand years too late for everything that's wrong Back and forth between the desert and the sea Who I was and I will always be Oh yeah, woo hoo Too bad, woo hoo So sad, woo hoo Oh yeah, woo hoo Oh yeah, woo hoo Oh yeah, woo hoo
story full of nonsense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
To lazy to write a comment but it is an amazing story. Hchxtfiftfuvycib.v tdugystvudtfed edtech fyi ytn idc if yycts3vigyfugys4 DDT 7x3d7huxtet 8jojuh s3 weyuh hof4a5cfxgchxexuvyxuvtztgusrf6dtcuzefucfcidfv7sthy vin zrggzihif xfyi h5xhtxgzh rduh xtvycubj Hchxhuh vucivuvuvihihiguvihohohihihihivibihiguvububuhibuctfuhydygtxugtcuftcuftduh x5f7yg6fygEMI rhyl TX d.l TX drum truck turn tenor u.s. emir don drum through ccast carry carry tab thingy hz switch h yxyvhxin
story full of nonsense, what is the author even writing here? story full of nonsense, what is the author even writing here? story full of nonsense, what is the author even writing here? story full of nonsense, what is the author even writing here? story full of nonsense, what is the author even writing here?
Well i read till ch 24 and its pretty nice novel,hope the author will continue ............................................................................................
To lazy to write a comment but it is an amazing story. Hchxtfiftfuvycib.v tdugystvudtfed edtech fyi ytn idc if yycts3vigyfugys4 DDT 7x3d7huxtet 8jojuh s3 weyuh hof4a5cfxgchxexuvyxuvtztgusrf6dtcuzefucfcidfv7sthy vin zrggzihif xfyi h5xhtxgzh rduh xtvycubj
To lazy to write a comment but it is an amazing story. Hchxtfiftfuvycib.v tdugystvudtfed edtech fyi ytn idc if yycts3vigyfugys4 DDT 7x3d7huxtet 8jojuh s3 weyuh hof4a5cfxgchxexuvyxuvtztgusrf6dtcuzefucfcidfv7sthy vin zrggzihif xfyi h5xhtxgzh rduh xtvycubj Hchxhuh vucivuvuvihihiguvihohohihihihivibihiguvububuhibuctfuhydygtxugtcuftcuftduh x5f7yg6fygEMI rhyl TX d.l TX drum truck turn tenor u.s. emir don drum through ccast carry carry tab thingy hz switch h yxyvhxin
The story seems so far interesting and the story only have 22 chapters so far so, can't tell much about the world building. Writing quality is good.
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While it isn’t the greatest novel in terms of grammar the author does know how to write an enjoyable and well pieces together story and even with the out of place words the story is still understandable if you realize what the author is trying to say the release schedule is on point and the chapters are released twice every day at around the same time decently early in the day (at least for me idk about you guys/girls but I’m on est) overall I think that the novel has a lot of potential to grow and become better as long as the author puts his work into it I don’t know much about the author but I think he takes the criticism he gets quite well considering that he’s liked just about every low ranking review of the novel so far so good on him I just hope that the author can improve and become better through each criticism he gets I’d love to see the novel grow even bigger and make it into the top 50 someday.
This novel deserves more credit than it has been getting. I mean come on the main character made a deal with the devil, became immortal and his mother dies
Revelar Spoiler Hello............................................................................. THANK YOU FOR READING!!........ .................................................
Good....... Seriously it is, it starts off as a pretty disjointed plot but little by little it's starting to pick up the pace, plotwise at least,
Take me out of this state I'm in Go somewhere I've never been Got something trapped inside Still alive, where's that paradise? I thought by now I'd find Rough justice is a long lifeline Back and forth between the desert and the sea Who I was and I will always be Oh yeah, woo hoo Too bad, woo hoo So sad, woo hoo Get me out of this state I'm in When I spiral down, it's a vile spin Got something I can't hide Still alive, it's an overwhelming drive To prevail and get out of this jail Dust in my eyes and a tear in my sail Back and forth between the desert and the sea Who I was and I will always be Oh yeah, woo hoo Too bad, woo hoo So sad, woo hoo Take me out 'cause I'm all alone Hair undone, despair unknown Got something trapped inside Still alive, it's a momentary ride I've been on a thousand years too long A thousand years too late for everything that's wrong Back and forth between the desert and the sea Who I was and I will always be Oh yeah, woo hoo Too bad, woo hoo So sad, woo hoo Oh yeah, woo hoo Oh yeah, woo hoo Oh yeah, woo hoo
story full of nonsense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
To lazy to write a comment but it is an amazing story. Hchxtfiftfuvycib.v tdugystvudtfed edtech fyi ytn idc if yycts3vigyfugys4 DDT 7x3d7huxtet 8jojuh s3 weyuh hof4a5cfxgchxexuvyxuvtztgusrf6dtcuzefucfcidfv7sthy vin zrggzihif xfyi h5xhtxgzh rduh xtvycubj Hchxhuh vucivuvuvihihiguvihohohihihihivibihiguvububuhibuctfuhydygtxugtcuftcuftduh x5f7yg6fygEMI rhyl TX d.l TX drum truck turn tenor u.s. emir don drum through ccast carry carry tab thingy hz switch h yxyvhxin
story full of nonsense, what is the author even writing here? story full of nonsense, what is the author even writing here? story full of nonsense, what is the author even writing here? story full of nonsense, what is the author even writing here? story full of nonsense, what is the author even writing here?
Well i read till ch 24 and its pretty nice novel,hope the author will continue ............................................................................................
To lazy to write a comment but it is an amazing story. Hchxtfiftfuvycib.v tdugystvudtfed edtech fyi ytn idc if yycts3vigyfugys4 DDT 7x3d7huxtet 8jojuh s3 weyuh hof4a5cfxgchxexuvyxuvtztgusrf6dtcuzefucfcidfv7sthy vin zrggzihif xfyi h5xhtxgzh rduh xtvycubj
To lazy to write a comment but it is an amazing story. Hchxtfiftfuvycib.v tdugystvudtfed edtech fyi ytn idc if yycts3vigyfugys4 DDT 7x3d7huxtet 8jojuh s3 weyuh hof4a5cfxgchxexuvyxuvtztgusrf6dtcuzefucfcidfv7sthy vin zrggzihif xfyi h5xhtxgzh rduh xtvycubj Hchxhuh vucivuvuvihihiguvihohohihihihivibihiguvububuhibuctfuhydygtxugtcuftcuftduh x5f7yg6fygEMI rhyl TX d.l TX drum truck turn tenor u.s. emir don drum through ccast carry carry tab thingy hz switch h yxyvhxin
The story seems so far interesting and the story only have 22 chapters so far so, can't tell much about the world building. Writing quality is good.
thnks 4 the great novel xdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxddxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxd