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Chapter 63: The Omni-weapon 5 years ago Volume 1
- 1 The Visitor 6 years ago
- 2 Character Descriptions (Fun/skip this one if you want) 6 years ago
- 3 The Battle Of The Nukes 6 years ago
- 4 The spaceship of another planet 5 years ago
- 5 Let the battle commence! 5 years ago
- 6 Meanwhile... 5 years ago
- 7 The tournaments finale 5 years ago
- 8 The hunt for a hero 5 years ago
- 9 A planet of peace 5 years ago
- 10 The ruins 5 years ago
- 11 GodSpeed 5 years ago
- 12 The Void of darkness 5 years ago
- 13 The one way out is the way in. 5 years ago
- 14 Life and Death 5 years ago
- 15 The strongest. 5 years ago
- 16 The clash of gods 5 years ago
- 17 The hunt for Protection 5 years ago
- 18 The world of white 5 years ago
- 19 Attack on Earth 5 years ago
- 20 Millions of years ago 5 years ago
- 21 Victorian London 5 years ago
- 22 A professional sportsman 5 years ago
- 23 Flying to earth 5 years ago
- 24 The kindest king 5 years ago
- 25 Zeus and Hercules 5 years ago
- 26 The Trap 5 years ago
- 27 The Crystal 5 years ago
- 28 An Operation of life 5 years ago
Volume 2
- 29 A universe jumping foe 5 years ago
- 30 Not from around here 5 years ago
- 31 Seven 5 years ago
- 32 A lovely duo 5 years ago
- 33 Cabin talk 5 years ago
- 34 A lovely duo is announced 5 years ago
- 35 Another Jay 5 years ago
- 36 A lovely duo is born 5 years ago
- 37 Teaching children to fight 5 years ago
- 38 The villains unite 5 years ago
- 39 Tom 5 years ago
- 40 Goodbye followed by goodbye followed by goodbye 5 years ago
- 41 The purple world 5 years ago
- 42 Descending into madness 5 years ago
- 43 A godly child 5 years ago
- 44 Giant metal men 5 years ago
- 45 An endless battle 5 years ago
- 46 Clyde’s fate 5 years ago
- 47 The time of their lives 5 years ago
- 48 The end of everything 5 years ago
Volume 3
- 49 To the future 5 years ago
- 50 Godspeed and The Stone Ninja 5 years ago
- 51 Plazman and Metal Man 5 years ago
- 52 Fire Fist 5 years ago
- 53 Damien 5 years ago
- 54 Immortal 5 years ago
- 55 A fast fight 5 years ago
- 56 The Blank Sword 5 years ago
- 57 The Blank Knife 5 years ago
- 58 Time Distortion Cube 5 years ago
- 59 The Blank Axe 5 years ago
- 60 Dead 5 years ago
- 61 The Blank Spear 5 years ago
- 62 Losing 5 years ago
- 63 The Omni-weapon 5 years ago
Chapters are all over the place, spelling mistakes are common, progression is WAY too fast, I think you're trying too hard to get 1 chapter out everyday. Take it slow and try to write in more detail and re-read your work afterwards.