The story is good so far man.........but your using the wrong words.."sounds of craving", or "detour " your phrasing them wrong.........................
The story is good so far man.........but your using the wrong words.."sounds of craving", or "detour " your phrasing them wrong.........................
The story is good so far man.........but your using the wrong words.."sounds of craving", or "detour " your phrasing them wrong.........................