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Once upon a time, I stumbled upon this book, I tried to read it, I could see words made of English letters , but still, it made no sense in the way it was composed. What is the use of a book if no one can read it may I ask ?
Praying that the MC doesn’t get involved with idiot Sarah and trash boyfriend of hers, but I’ll probably be disappointed
overall I am enjoying the read. But the Grammer errors make you shake your head and make it so you need to take a break to make sense of the grammer
Give Michael a new pet companion. How can it called monster integration with no monster..............................................................................
Problems 1-first person pov turns the story and especially the battles into an occupation, and if it wasn't there, the ranking of the novel would be several hundreds higher. 2-mc has nothing special and all his development is because he is the main character. 3- The story seems fake and it is not interesting for anyone who has read a few novels.
Subject: Offer to Assist with Grammar Corrections in Your Chapter Dear AnWan, I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the opportunity to read your chapter, and I couldn't help but notice some grammatical errors throughout. As someone who values your work, I would like to offer my assistance in correcting these issues to ensure the text flows smoothly and enhances the overall reading experience. I understand the importance of maintaining the integrity of your writing style, and my intention is solely to help refine the technical aspects. If you're open to collaboration, I'd be happy to work with you to polish the chapter. Please let me know if you're interested or if you have any specific preferences regarding the corrections. I admire your work and believe that together, we can make your chapter even more engaging for your readers. Thank you for considering my offer, and I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, The Myth
Overall story is good I liked it. Overall story is good I liked it. Overall story is good I liked it.
it has great potential but the writing skills didn't improve throughout all these chapters, the story just keeps extending by doing the same stuff again and again , with a few things here and there, i don't know what's monster integration when even he doesn't even have a monster anymore
The novel is truly captivating. Although initially hindered by numerous spelling and grammatical errors, I persisted and discovered a hidden gem. The story's development is exceptional, complemented by a unique power system. Michael's overpowered character is executed masterfully, yet there are moments of frustration when his friends surpass him despite his accomplishments. The narrative is rich with humor, poignant moments, and a touch of sublime romance. However, the sheer size of the story occasionally leaves gaps, possibly due to the author's solo efforts without a team to assist in filling those narrative voids. In essence, the novel is a splendid tale. Despite occasional lapses due to its expansive nature and the author's solitary efforts, the overall narrative remains a fantastic journey.
Inconsistent and messed up power system.Repetitive fights and chases.Sh*t romance.
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I enjoyed the story. I can't wait until the MC's friend finds out he's dating her mom. Seriously needs an editor that knows fluent English. No offense to the author. I honestly believe his story would get a much higher ranking if he did.
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Nice story altogether. Although there are gaps in the story like the main character doesn’t talk about the refinement tower is it not necessary now or has it changed or evolved again ? Still a good story though and I think the storyline of the side female character is good but I want them for the other characters too especially the main character sister .
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A very good story with good stability in Stability of Updates and very good Character Design and World Background. When the story come to when he saved his world and start a new Journey it was a real good time to end the story and just left some plots unfinished, but the author preserve and now all the plots are being resolved one by one, like his partner.
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So, here i'm.. in The chapter 600... I just start to read this bc it got the romance Tag. There is Not romance for The MC. So i come here to watch some reviews and know if he has someyhing but, what a surprice when i just read that all posible wifes just, don't want to stay with him. I can understand why... The mc is an idiot. And it's like he don't change his mind in 3000+ chapters... Sad 1 week read this to The trash
I cant really give an accurate review at all since I didnt get far in, my reason being that the spelling errors are weird. Its like its eloquent with decent grammar and word choice while also having weird errors that just throw me off guard. Im honestly interested in the premise, and although I personally find some parts not to my personal liking I do think that those who don't mind the writing style will quite like it. It just immediately threw me off in the first few chapters whether its a combination of the spelling errors and writing style or something else I cant quite say for sure, but it already looks good from the start just something about it is off to me. Anyway, my rambling aside, looks good, has a lot of spelling errors and I cant tell exactly why I dont like it would probably not recommend to people with sinilar reading preferences to me but otherwise errors aside seems like a quality story. Disregard my star rating as that is irrelevant since I didnt get far enough to properly rate the important aspects
I'm just curious, would he still get another monsters later on? cause i feel like the monster and taming part is being left behind and it almost becomes an individual cultivation.. I'm currently at chapter 200 something..
My biggest problem is the non-stop typos and grammar mistakes. I have read to 400+ chapters when i decided i can‘t ignore the never ending mistakes any longer … I am sorry, but in this somewhat not polished state, i cannot recommend this novel. (Proofreading has been promised, but wasn‘t delivered)
great book with really great history, even if its poorly written it is really great.[img=coins] the main character is a little masochist and likes a lot of pain and the author is a lot sadist.... but its a nice book i do recommend!!!
I was really hungry for a fantasy adventure so I gave this a great chance. For 200 chapters, but writing doesn’ get better. Either spelling or storytelling. So inconsistent and the strengths you think the MC has mean nothing the next chapter. Just skip it don’t try it like me…
Garbage language and inconsistent plot ruins a pretty good premise. Character development is non existent. interesting characters are rare. MC seems to be some version of the author's expression of his own fetishes. And whenever the author feels like it he includes and pulls random ranks out of his a** in between already established ones with no rhyme or reason or even justification; it's not even a retcon but it straight up ignores everything that happens before. Don't even let me get started on plot holes that make the Mariana trench look like a roadside puddle. The author is incapable of distinguishing between a/the/my; and he doesn't even know the difference between elevate and alleviate, just as an example. Loose ends number in the hundreds. Logic is fleeting at best. And combat is monotonous and routine. I could go on but why should I waste any more of my time than I already have?
I have been reading it since a year ago, to the last chapter, and I love the story
Não tem outro melhor, e vou continuar lendo e cada vez fica melhor. se quiser ler algo diferente "chega de personagens superficiais feitos em moldes" recomendo este.
I tried. I really tried to give this story a fair chance. when I saw that the author got an 'editor' around chapter 30-40, I was just telling myself that it was going to get better.Spoiler warning, it doesn't.I personally read until around ch 60, and somehow the writing quality became even worse. Run-on sentences, straight-up misspelled words, and poor quality in being able to write fights (which is a big part of the story), all add up to a good idea of a story, yet extremely poor execution.The only reason I have anything positive about anything about this series is that the monsters are at least interesting, the idea of the power system for both the monsters and the people are cool to think about, and there are good reasons for various world-building elements. But that's it.Don't waste your coins here.
this book started out Good and unique but sadly as I've gotten to chapter 1,120 I can say that it from being a unique novel that involved a human and animal basically somewhat merging together to fight to where it basically a lot of stuff that made it original became retcon just where it became a typical cultivation story there is no real monster integration anymore most monsters besides the main characters is relegated to basically being non-existent in the early child just were told people can literally merge with their monster and gain some of their appendages once they're strong enough but that has been a lost concept that no longer gets brought back up The main character is constantly getting nerfed after every power up so that he's the undergradog which is not good at all and all of his friends or constantly skyrocketing above him and he has treated as dirt and then there is another retcon involving his parents which makes even less sense now cuz it basically ruins a lot of what happens in the story because of why didn't they do this because of a and overall it's a slog to get through The early chapters have a lot of bad grammar and spelling and later chapters have a lot of useless fluff and onomatopoeas that are repetitive It was interesting because again it was a new interesting world that made me interested but as the author kept making the main character insignificant it became harder to continue to read and sadly this is the point where I'm dropping the novel to those who can get past this point I hope y'all can continue to enjoy but to those who can't please drop this novel now as it's not worth the time
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The story is decent enough. This is one of the rare harem-ish stories where mc gets a girlfriend, break up then eventually gets another one organically and smoothly done (as far as I read it 2100+) and the characters feel by such like actually characters. It’s also funny at times because the one thing OP about the MC (physique) doesn’t benefit him (not even in a indirect way) and he has to develop his power himself which is cool and well done (then he gets op in another way, of course). Now, the reason why I don’t give this a 5 stars (which it would deserves otherwise) and something expectant reader should know beforehand is that this story is sold and starts as a pokemon-like but quickly drops it the pokemon stuff for a war story against beast people in an expanded modern cultivation setting. It’s frustrating if you want pokemon, but the problem is that story keeps getting influenced by the 180 the author did early on because Mc kept his 1rst pokemon, but the entire world forgot about pokemons (it’s not actually pokemons btw). So, I do recommend it, but don’t come in for the pokemon thing (it’s still good).
Just finished chapter 51 and left a comment, will leave it here as well as it fits the book so far, if he doesn’t fix it he’s a lazy writer. Onomatopoeia shouldn’t be in quotes by itself as it’s not considered speech, you can’t just put “cheering” if there is a cheering crowd because it implies someone spoke the word but if you put ‘The crowd was cheering’ by itself It would be correct so don’t put “laugh” as it means the hyenas are literally saying ‘laugh’ If trees are falling over I’m not going to keep repeating boom for every tree I might not mention it at all because nobody here is 2 years old and doesn’t know that big falling things go boom. Some might not know what a hyena sounds like so mention it once but that’s good enough most animals who aren’t ambush predators make sounds while attacking. Say something like; The cackling of the hyenas sent shivers down my spine as they surrounded and prepared to attack us, eyes glinting with amusement as they readied to play with their food. ( If you want to add the sounds then put the actual sound in the paragraph where you need it, you could start this first paragraph with HeeHeeHee! The cackling… A laugh is what it sounds similar to but it’s not, it is how they communicate) And maybe; One jumped at Bob from his blind side and he barely managed to dodge, sweat dripping down his back as the hyena attack passed by with a whoosh, Its claws lightly grazing his armour. (Even if it wasn’t a hyena but a made-up beast it will let the readers understand the creature's both terrifying and playful nature by themselves and it adds suspense and lets people understand the fear the character(s) feel towards them, if you want the beast to seem more powerful you could then change the end of the last paragraph to ‘It’s claws grazing his armour leaving four deep gashes’) Not “laugh” “laugh” “laugh” What is this? A comedy? I’m not laughing. (XD) When making fight scenes especially you need to give readers a sense of imagery that’ll lead to suspense/excitement/dread (or any feeling at all really), and any kind of repetition or just saying things like “laugh, clang, bang” repeatedly ( unless it’s a word spoken by the characters, like making a finger gun while launching your fireballs and saying “Bang” that’s fine) makes things boring. The same goes for any pets he might get, a dog doesn’t say ‘bark’ but it does bark. So say ‘The dog barked out of hunger’ (The dog is an example he doesn’t have a pet dog) A cannon goes boom but saying; The cannons lining the bastion roared like thunder as they repeatedly fired upon the ghost ships attacking the port, flaming balls of steel leaving trails of smoke in their wake. Sounds better than; The cannons on the bastion went boom, firing flaming balls as they hit the ghost ships attacking the port. It might not seem like much but these little differences will help keep your readers hooked as it adds a little spice and flavour that even they might not notice. (But mistakes are easily seen and criticized so as a writer you must be sure to learn from them) Also if English is not your first language or if your readers complain about the translation there are many free programs that can fix everything up, get one and find some friend(s) in your local writers' circle or someone else who is fluent with reading/writing in English to give it a look. Remember that writing is the same as fishing, to catch lots of fish (Readers) you need a good bait and an even better hook to keep them here, or they’ll spit out the hook and leave. I’ll finish the novel over time as I enjoy the concept but I’m taking a break from it as I’m a bit annoyed.
Revelar Spoiler Once upon a time, I stumbled upon this book, I tried to read it, I could see words made of English letters , but still, it made no sense in the way it was composed. What is the use of a book if no one can read it may I ask ?
Praying that the MC doesn’t get involved with idiot Sarah and trash boyfriend of hers, but I’ll probably be disappointed
overall I am enjoying the read. But the Grammer errors make you shake your head and make it so you need to take a break to make sense of the grammer
Give Michael a new pet companion. How can it called monster integration with no monster..............................................................................
Problems 1-first person pov turns the story and especially the battles into an occupation, and if it wasn't there, the ranking of the novel would be several hundreds higher. 2-mc has nothing special and all his development is because he is the main character. 3- The story seems fake and it is not interesting for anyone who has read a few novels.
Subject: Offer to Assist with Grammar Corrections in Your Chapter Dear AnWan, I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the opportunity to read your chapter, and I couldn't help but notice some grammatical errors throughout. As someone who values your work, I would like to offer my assistance in correcting these issues to ensure the text flows smoothly and enhances the overall reading experience. I understand the importance of maintaining the integrity of your writing style, and my intention is solely to help refine the technical aspects. If you're open to collaboration, I'd be happy to work with you to polish the chapter. Please let me know if you're interested or if you have any specific preferences regarding the corrections. I admire your work and believe that together, we can make your chapter even more engaging for your readers. Thank you for considering my offer, and I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, The Myth
Overall story is good I liked it. Overall story is good I liked it. Overall story is good I liked it.
it has great potential but the writing skills didn't improve throughout all these chapters, the story just keeps extending by doing the same stuff again and again , with a few things here and there, i don't know what's monster integration when even he doesn't even have a monster anymore
The novel is truly captivating. Although initially hindered by numerous spelling and grammatical errors, I persisted and discovered a hidden gem. The story's development is exceptional, complemented by a unique power system. Michael's overpowered character is executed masterfully, yet there are moments of frustration when his friends surpass him despite his accomplishments. The narrative is rich with humor, poignant moments, and a touch of sublime romance. However, the sheer size of the story occasionally leaves gaps, possibly due to the author's solo efforts without a team to assist in filling those narrative voids. In essence, the novel is a splendid tale. Despite occasional lapses due to its expansive nature and the author's solitary efforts, the overall narrative remains a fantastic journey.
Inconsistent and messed up power system.Repetitive fights and chases.Sh*t romance.
Revelar Spoiler I enjoyed the story. I can't wait until the MC's friend finds out he's dating her mom. Seriously needs an editor that knows fluent English. No offense to the author. I honestly believe his story would get a much higher ranking if he did.
Revelar Spoiler Nice story altogether. Although there are gaps in the story like the main character doesn’t talk about the refinement tower is it not necessary now or has it changed or evolved again ? Still a good story though and I think the storyline of the side female character is good but I want them for the other characters too especially the main character sister .
Revelar Spoiler A very good story with good stability in Stability of Updates and very good Character Design and World Background. When the story come to when he saved his world and start a new Journey it was a real good time to end the story and just left some plots unfinished, but the author preserve and now all the plots are being resolved one by one, like his partner.
Revelar Spoiler So, here i'm.. in The chapter 600... I just start to read this bc it got the romance Tag. There is Not romance for The MC. So i come here to watch some reviews and know if he has someyhing but, what a surprice when i just read that all posible wifes just, don't want to stay with him. I can understand why... The mc is an idiot. And it's like he don't change his mind in 3000+ chapters... Sad 1 week read this to The trash
I cant really give an accurate review at all since I didnt get far in, my reason being that the spelling errors are weird. Its like its eloquent with decent grammar and word choice while also having weird errors that just throw me off guard. Im honestly interested in the premise, and although I personally find some parts not to my personal liking I do think that those who don't mind the writing style will quite like it. It just immediately threw me off in the first few chapters whether its a combination of the spelling errors and writing style or something else I cant quite say for sure, but it already looks good from the start just something about it is off to me. Anyway, my rambling aside, looks good, has a lot of spelling errors and I cant tell exactly why I dont like it would probably not recommend to people with sinilar reading preferences to me but otherwise errors aside seems like a quality story. Disregard my star rating as that is irrelevant since I didnt get far enough to properly rate the important aspects
I'm just curious, would he still get another monsters later on? cause i feel like the monster and taming part is being left behind and it almost becomes an individual cultivation.. I'm currently at chapter 200 something..
My biggest problem is the non-stop typos and grammar mistakes. I have read to 400+ chapters when i decided i can‘t ignore the never ending mistakes any longer … I am sorry, but in this somewhat not polished state, i cannot recommend this novel. (Proofreading has been promised, but wasn‘t delivered)
great book with really great history, even if its poorly written it is really great.[img=coins] the main character is a little masochist and likes a lot of pain and the author is a lot sadist.... but its a nice book i do recommend!!!
I was really hungry for a fantasy adventure so I gave this a great chance. For 200 chapters, but writing doesn’ get better. Either spelling or storytelling. So inconsistent and the strengths you think the MC has mean nothing the next chapter. Just skip it don’t try it like me…
Garbage language and inconsistent plot ruins a pretty good premise. Character development is non existent. interesting characters are rare. MC seems to be some version of the author's expression of his own fetishes. And whenever the author feels like it he includes and pulls random ranks out of his a** in between already established ones with no rhyme or reason or even justification; it's not even a retcon but it straight up ignores everything that happens before. Don't even let me get started on plot holes that make the Mariana trench look like a roadside puddle. The author is incapable of distinguishing between a/the/my; and he doesn't even know the difference between elevate and alleviate, just as an example. Loose ends number in the hundreds. Logic is fleeting at best. And combat is monotonous and routine. I could go on but why should I waste any more of my time than I already have?
I have been reading it since a year ago, to the last chapter, and I love the story
Não tem outro melhor, e vou continuar lendo e cada vez fica melhor. se quiser ler algo diferente "chega de personagens superficiais feitos em moldes" recomendo este.
I tried. I really tried to give this story a fair chance. when I saw that the author got an 'editor' around chapter 30-40, I was just telling myself that it was going to get better.Spoiler warning, it doesn't.I personally read until around ch 60, and somehow the writing quality became even worse. Run-on sentences, straight-up misspelled words, and poor quality in being able to write fights (which is a big part of the story), all add up to a good idea of a story, yet extremely poor execution.The only reason I have anything positive about anything about this series is that the monsters are at least interesting, the idea of the power system for both the monsters and the people are cool to think about, and there are good reasons for various world-building elements. But that's it.Don't waste your coins here.
this book started out Good and unique but sadly as I've gotten to chapter 1,120 I can say that it from being a unique novel that involved a human and animal basically somewhat merging together to fight to where it basically a lot of stuff that made it original became retcon just where it became a typical cultivation story there is no real monster integration anymore most monsters besides the main characters is relegated to basically being non-existent in the early child just were told people can literally merge with their monster and gain some of their appendages once they're strong enough but that has been a lost concept that no longer gets brought back up The main character is constantly getting nerfed after every power up so that he's the undergradog which is not good at all and all of his friends or constantly skyrocketing above him and he has treated as dirt and then there is another retcon involving his parents which makes even less sense now cuz it basically ruins a lot of what happens in the story because of why didn't they do this because of a and overall it's a slog to get through The early chapters have a lot of bad grammar and spelling and later chapters have a lot of useless fluff and onomatopoeas that are repetitive It was interesting because again it was a new interesting world that made me interested but as the author kept making the main character insignificant it became harder to continue to read and sadly this is the point where I'm dropping the novel to those who can get past this point I hope y'all can continue to enjoy but to those who can't please drop this novel now as it's not worth the time
Revelar Spoiler The story is decent enough. This is one of the rare harem-ish stories where mc gets a girlfriend, break up then eventually gets another one organically and smoothly done (as far as I read it 2100+) and the characters feel by such like actually characters. It’s also funny at times because the one thing OP about the MC (physique) doesn’t benefit him (not even in a indirect way) and he has to develop his power himself which is cool and well done (then he gets op in another way, of course). Now, the reason why I don’t give this a 5 stars (which it would deserves otherwise) and something expectant reader should know beforehand is that this story is sold and starts as a pokemon-like but quickly drops it the pokemon stuff for a war story against beast people in an expanded modern cultivation setting. It’s frustrating if you want pokemon, but the problem is that story keeps getting influenced by the 180 the author did early on because Mc kept his 1rst pokemon, but the entire world forgot about pokemons (it’s not actually pokemons btw). So, I do recommend it, but don’t come in for the pokemon thing (it’s still good).
Just finished chapter 51 and left a comment, will leave it here as well as it fits the book so far, if he doesn’t fix it he’s a lazy writer. Onomatopoeia shouldn’t be in quotes by itself as it’s not considered speech, you can’t just put “cheering” if there is a cheering crowd because it implies someone spoke the word but if you put ‘The crowd was cheering’ by itself It would be correct so don’t put “laugh” as it means the hyenas are literally saying ‘laugh’ If trees are falling over I’m not going to keep repeating boom for every tree I might not mention it at all because nobody here is 2 years old and doesn’t know that big falling things go boom. Some might not know what a hyena sounds like so mention it once but that’s good enough most animals who aren’t ambush predators make sounds while attacking. Say something like; The cackling of the hyenas sent shivers down my spine as they surrounded and prepared to attack us, eyes glinting with amusement as they readied to play with their food. ( If you want to add the sounds then put the actual sound in the paragraph where you need it, you could start this first paragraph with HeeHeeHee! The cackling… A laugh is what it sounds similar to but it’s not, it is how they communicate) And maybe; One jumped at Bob from his blind side and he barely managed to dodge, sweat dripping down his back as the hyena attack passed by with a whoosh, Its claws lightly grazing his armour. (Even if it wasn’t a hyena but a made-up beast it will let the readers understand the creature's both terrifying and playful nature by themselves and it adds suspense and lets people understand the fear the character(s) feel towards them, if you want the beast to seem more powerful you could then change the end of the last paragraph to ‘It’s claws grazing his armour leaving four deep gashes’) Not “laugh” “laugh” “laugh” What is this? A comedy? I’m not laughing. (XD) When making fight scenes especially you need to give readers a sense of imagery that’ll lead to suspense/excitement/dread (or any feeling at all really), and any kind of repetition or just saying things like “laugh, clang, bang” repeatedly ( unless it’s a word spoken by the characters, like making a finger gun while launching your fireballs and saying “Bang” that’s fine) makes things boring. The same goes for any pets he might get, a dog doesn’t say ‘bark’ but it does bark. So say ‘The dog barked out of hunger’ (The dog is an example he doesn’t have a pet dog) A cannon goes boom but saying; The cannons lining the bastion roared like thunder as they repeatedly fired upon the ghost ships attacking the port, flaming balls of steel leaving trails of smoke in their wake. Sounds better than; The cannons on the bastion went boom, firing flaming balls as they hit the ghost ships attacking the port. It might not seem like much but these little differences will help keep your readers hooked as it adds a little spice and flavour that even they might not notice. (But mistakes are easily seen and criticized so as a writer you must be sure to learn from them) Also if English is not your first language or if your readers complain about the translation there are many free programs that can fix everything up, get one and find some friend(s) in your local writers' circle or someone else who is fluent with reading/writing in English to give it a look. Remember that writing is the same as fishing, to catch lots of fish (Readers) you need a good bait and an even better hook to keep them here, or they’ll spit out the hook and leave. I’ll finish the novel over time as I enjoy the concept but I’m taking a break from it as I’m a bit annoyed.
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