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everything is good about this ff but i dont get 1 thing when MC already knows he is going to a world where he will be killing n stuff , he's still acting like a p***y , it's like so cliche where on 1 side you act like oh i know the story , the plot , i need to be strong and on other side you start to feel guilt and whatnot other things even when enemies are saying they will kill you like srsly ? and bro give a name to our system man like thats given when you get a sys in ff you give a nane to it 😆
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Another useless brainless author who's make his novel failed because his own Fault .. .. .. MC has system and has a strong high advantage but author make MC failed to reach ultimate rank and ended up make his story because Fucking slice of life while recovery ... .. .weak MC beta naive fool MC. .. .. Fucking fool MC choose cultivation technique from Fucking trash chinese cultivation method which has many flaws and cliche .. .. And ended up fail his ascension ..... Fool author choose from trash Yellow monkey chinese method ....
Weak MC. .. MC is very weak, …… Even though it has been given a super bloodline that is very strong beyond Dragon God ..... Anti-sky system ....... Extra points ..... And others .... But it's still as weak as a spicy chicken .... Stupid author ..... All the MC's power feels completely nerfed .....
..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................U dead bro?
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i hope you solve you financial problem and pick up soon this fanfiction. i hope you solve you financial problem and pick up soon this fanfiction.
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So stupid!! Wish for a cheat but the cheat is useless!! Stupid author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
la peor historia de DXD da pena leer esto ni me dieron ganas de leer los cap completos------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Genial seguí así.😆😆😕😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊
The story is good, I particularly liked it a lot. I loved those touches of wuxia, and how you develop the character slowly makes the situations that the main character is experiencing feel forced. The new background you gave Sun-wukong was in my opinion ... somewhat cunning and clever, as that would give him a reason to help him. I hope the continuation, thanks for the story.
Very cool and original spin on the dxd fanfic, looking forward to more chapters and other projects in the future. Why is there a minimum to the character limit for reviews? Such bull****
I like the story especially the way it has a new faction that is a mystery to the others and is able to stand above them without them even knowing.
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
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Damn this is good. It felt refreshing after reading this. I like the MC here and the story development is also good. I want to read more , so please don't stop midway Mr. Writter.
Revelar Spoiler
The rewrites for this book make it instantly better. Not being harsh here but i like them much more than the original story prior to the updates and rewriting.
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So far I say it’s a really good story. The author isn’t afraid to mess with the original story he is taking from and that just makes his story better. I does need So work but hey what story doesn’t.
un fanfition muy entretenido segùn mi opinion ,escritura entendible y desarrolo de la historia aceptable. te diria es que trates de poner mas en las parte de las conversaciones entre el mc y sus mujeres (desde que salvo a kuroka casi en todos los años que pasaron han tenido un buena conversacion)
Nice story keep going............plz..........😥😏😢(@(@(@((@**#*#*#`'ijdjeoallmamm ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ.......ZYXWVUTSRQPONMLKJIHGFEDCBA
Okay, real talk. I've seen another DxD fic on the site that goes through the same motions - mc called Yu, isekai-ing through death, god granted starter 'wish' cheats, asking to be Issei's brother, <list goes on and on and on>... 'fess up, who of the two is copying another's homework?
Good novel! ∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆
You don't have to hate this just coz he's Issei's brother... I mean. this is an excellent fanfic honestly and the fact this is in hiatus sucks... the good ones end early ...
everything is good about this ff but i dont get 1 thing when MC already knows he is going to a world where he will be killing n stuff , he's still acting like a p***y , it's like so cliche where on 1 side you act like oh i know the story , the plot , i need to be strong and on other side you start to feel guilt and whatnot other things even when enemies are saying they will kill you like srsly ? and bro give a name to our system man like thats given when you get a sys in ff you give a nane to it 😆
⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾ This is at the top of my Queue ♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾ This is at the top of my Queue ♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾ This is at the top of my Queue ♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾
xp xp xp xpx xp xp xp xp . . ... ........ ...... ......... ...... ...... ...... ..... ...... ...... ......... ........ ...... ...... . ...
Another useless brainless author who's make his novel failed because his own Fault .. .. .. MC has system and has a strong high advantage but author make MC failed to reach ultimate rank and ended up make his story because Fucking slice of life while recovery ... .. .weak MC beta naive fool MC. .. .. Fucking fool MC choose cultivation technique from Fucking trash chinese cultivation method which has many flaws and cliche .. .. And ended up fail his ascension ..... Fool author choose from trash Yellow monkey chinese method ....
Weak MC. .. MC is very weak, …… Even though it has been given a super bloodline that is very strong beyond Dragon God ..... Anti-sky system ....... Extra points ..... And others .... But it's still as weak as a spicy chicken .... Stupid author ..... All the MC's power feels completely nerfed .....
..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................U dead bro?
Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°Kapan up°????
i hope you solve you financial problem and pick up soon this fanfiction. i hope you solve you financial problem and pick up soon this fanfiction.
Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎Hahahahhahahahahahahahahhah 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
I like your novel dude. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
So stupid!! Wish for a cheat but the cheat is useless!! Stupid author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
la peor historia de DXD da pena leer esto ni me dieron ganas de leer los cap completos------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Revelar Spoiler Genial seguí así.😆😆😕😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊
The story is good, I particularly liked it a lot. I loved those touches of wuxia, and how you develop the character slowly makes the situations that the main character is experiencing feel forced. The new background you gave Sun-wukong was in my opinion ... somewhat cunning and clever, as that would give him a reason to help him. I hope the continuation, thanks for the story.
Very cool and original spin on the dxd fanfic, looking forward to more chapters and other projects in the future. Why is there a minimum to the character limit for reviews? Such bull****
I like the story especially the way it has a new faction that is a mystery to the others and is able to stand above them without them even knowing.
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
............................................................................................................................................
Damn this is good. It felt refreshing after reading this. I like the MC here and the story development is also good. I want to read more , so please don't stop midway Mr. Writter.
Revelar Spoiler The rewrites for this book make it instantly better. Not being harsh here but i like them much more than the original story prior to the updates and rewriting.
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So far I say it’s a really good story. The author isn’t afraid to mess with the original story he is taking from and that just makes his story better. I does need So work but hey what story doesn’t.
un fanfition muy entretenido segùn mi opinion ,escritura entendible y desarrolo de la historia aceptable. te diria es que trates de poner mas en las parte de las conversaciones entre el mc y sus mujeres (desde que salvo a kuroka casi en todos los años que pasaron han tenido un buena conversacion)
Nice story keep going............plz..........😥😏😢(@(@(@((@**#*#*#`'ijdjeoallmamm ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ.......ZYXWVUTSRQPONMLKJIHGFEDCBA
Okay, real talk. I've seen another DxD fic on the site that goes through the same motions - mc called Yu, isekai-ing through death, god granted starter 'wish' cheats, asking to be Issei's brother, <list goes on and on and on>... 'fess up, who of the two is copying another's homework?
Good novel! ∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆
You don't have to hate this just coz he's Issei's brother... I mean. this is an excellent fanfic honestly and the fact this is in hiatus sucks... the good ones end early ...