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The story is amazing and wonderful , and has a new thoughts, and the development of events was perfect . I support the author and I hope to countinue update more chapters.
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It has a good start showing how ruthless the new world is. I was really into it and when the ml arrived i got hooked for sure. The novel does somewhat fall flat once the mc meets the teacher. He's supposed to be this all powerful type of character but due to a plot point he's getting scared of our mc? It would be reasonable for him to get scared if the mc had a way to pay him back afterwards or imagining all sorts of torture but instead she just wings it. The past life comes into mention whenever our mc starts doing something smart or interesting but that all stops in front of the teacher.
i am in love with this novel as its very unique and refreshing in terms of plot lines and each character's presentation and depth. The grammar has no glaring errors, humor is perfect, pace is good too and 'cept for a few minor inconsistencies, (mainly the age of our dear leads which hopefully would be rectified), it is really a great novel... I am so impressed that this is actually an original. Great job author! Cant say much 'bout the update schedule considering i finished all 68 chappies on wattpad under two days (dont judge, it was that good >_>), am keeping my fingers crossed :D A new favorite ye!
I love everything.. the story.. the plot.. even the main character at first was ok, but the author decided to animate our heroine even more.. adding more volume to her background character, making her more lifelike from the get go.. the only downside i can find for now is that it hasn't updated for a long time now.. just why?? I want more. This is a good read.. please author. Since you decided to pick this up again, please see this through til the end. Don't just leave us hanging like this. 😓
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I didn't knew that you already came back. Finally I can read you work again. Thank you for bringing this back! I didn't knew that you already came back. Finally I can read you work again. Thank you for bringing this back!
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Yeheyyyyyyyy! IT IS FINALLLY BACK!! Thank you author-san for posting it again😁😁😁 soo happy It is one of my favorite stories. It is interesting with darkness in the mix. Though I'am still confused with some parts but I know it will gradually clear as long as I keep reading. LOOOOOOOOVE THIS STORY😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
This story has a good flow so far but I just can’t stand the MC’s naive ways of thinking. She is blind to a lot of common sense and too easily influence by her master but somehow is calculating smart when it comes to dealing with royalties. This is conflicting. I keep finding myself getting p*ss off when she believes that torture is the way to go with the ML when she had did before believe torture wasn’t. Why abandon your long beliefs with one word from a stranger? That was just stupid.
Was uhhh, was this dropped? Gwjdgdnxgdjxudhenduyddhxuhdndjxgxbdjxhxdn Stop scrolling. I said stop Heh, you get the good knowledge. Heres a secret, gingers have souls. They steal pieces of soul from others and patch together a soul. The soul will never be complete, but then again niether will their preys.
The story line and characters are very interesting and I suggest to all future readers to give it a try. There may be some minor errors and grammar mistakes, but if you are able to ignore those, the reading experience will be quite enjoyable. I recommend saving this in your library until it hits around 200 chapters or else you will finish it within a blink. It will definitely be worth the wait!!
I hope you can update soon! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Wrote one but it got deleted so will just say keep writing! I love your book! Power to the author! Thank you for reading the short version 😂😂😂😂
Finally i got to read the novel...the story is really good...pleae create backup of every chapter...so that you wont any misha** like last time...everyone! It is a must read novel
I think this a good story. Starts off a bit confusing from chapter 1 and 2 but really picks up. The characters are fine, I’ll Be waiting for more character development aside from that I think the premise of the story is a brilliant idea.
The story is amazing. No words. I love how the main characters interact with each other. This is one of the worthy stories you should read💕
I normally don’t give reviews, but author of you wanted to know you are doing great. I love your characters and I think your character development is fabulous. Please keep updating in the future.
Kekekekekeke Meng is so cute thank you for coming back author-sama! I look forward to this story daily and I’m really happy you returned. Can’t wait to see Meng grow up.
I couldn’t figure out how to find it Lolol glad I could, however I don’t think it should of been moved I support you regardless. This story is definitely worth reading for those looking for a kick a** villain
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Same as before! I hope Feng Qi and Meng can develop quicker and have a stronger relationship, however I like where you are going with it. Meng is adorable still thankfully and poor Feng Qi got curved 😂😂
Book is funny without being completely dumb. I love this books and always will. I’m glad you are back author. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Shameless review- Welcome to the villain’s bodyguard! Some things to be aware of include: -the main character of the book is insane. -starts of light, however gets dark later on -the main character was denied basic human rights when she was a child, therefore doesn’t know anything about the world. I think that’s all for now ahah they should let people edit reviews. Anyway happy reading! ^_^
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By far one of my favorite novels so far!ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ★彡 Though I do have to point out that she is being called a 10 year old at some points and 7 year old in the other chapters. Everything else is perfect✌︎('ω'✌︎ ) Can’t wait for the next chapter(๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)
Gosh this is just amazing!! I'm so glad it's back!!! :D The cover is so pretty~ I really like how there's no noticeable grammar errors and the writing is detailed and beautiful!! (^_^) The main character is ruthless in a funny way and it's actually REALLY FUNNY!!! I LOVE THE MAIN CHARACTER!! She's more than just a "strong female lead"!! She's hella awesome!!
Welcome back author!! All flower flower~~ Finally get to read feng qi and meng again huhu For all new reader, you will not getting dissapoint from reading this novel ahh Coz this is an interesting story You will love it ahh much ahh much ❤❤❤
Copy Pasta *cough* So far, I'm loving it.. can't wait for them to grow up and stabilize their relationship. What I mean by that is when ml now knows mc's personality and understands her. I wish there'll be no more misunderstanding. (⌒_⌒;) All in all, this has potential. Im turning into a fan ＼(￣▽￣)／ more power to the author! *cough* totally didn't steal a comment from the other LN you have author sama. *cough* Not me being completely lazy. *cough* *shifty eyes*
Meng character is well described with her actions and i like your grammar..... I can't wait to read further....do update chapter fast..Good luck and wish you best of luck
I'm not used to writing reviews but I really wanted to say that I really liked this story, please don't drop it dear author-nim ^_^ I will eagerly await your updates
The story is amazing and wonderful , and has a new thoughts, and the development of events was perfect . I support the author and I hope to countinue update more chapters.
Revelar Spoiler It has a good start showing how ruthless the new world is. I was really into it and when the ml arrived i got hooked for sure. The novel does somewhat fall flat once the mc meets the teacher. He's supposed to be this all powerful type of character but due to a plot point he's getting scared of our mc? It would be reasonable for him to get scared if the mc had a way to pay him back afterwards or imagining all sorts of torture but instead she just wings it. The past life comes into mention whenever our mc starts doing something smart or interesting but that all stops in front of the teacher.
i am in love with this novel as its very unique and refreshing in terms of plot lines and each character's presentation and depth. The grammar has no glaring errors, humor is perfect, pace is good too and 'cept for a few minor inconsistencies, (mainly the age of our dear leads which hopefully would be rectified), it is really a great novel... I am so impressed that this is actually an original. Great job author! Cant say much 'bout the update schedule considering i finished all 68 chappies on wattpad under two days (dont judge, it was that good >_>), am keeping my fingers crossed :D A new favorite ye!
I love everything.. the story.. the plot.. even the main character at first was ok, but the author decided to animate our heroine even more.. adding more volume to her background character, making her more lifelike from the get go.. the only downside i can find for now is that it hasn't updated for a long time now.. just why?? I want more. This is a good read.. please author. Since you decided to pick this up again, please see this through til the end. Don't just leave us hanging like this. 😓
Did the author go on hiatus again? Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
I didn't knew that you already came back. Finally I can read you work again. Thank you for bringing this back! I didn't knew that you already came back. Finally I can read you work again. Thank you for bringing this back!
Revelar Spoiler Yeheyyyyyyyy! IT IS FINALLLY BACK!! Thank you author-san for posting it again😁😁😁 soo happy It is one of my favorite stories. It is interesting with darkness in the mix. Though I'am still confused with some parts but I know it will gradually clear as long as I keep reading. LOOOOOOOOVE THIS STORY😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
This story has a good flow so far but I just can’t stand the MC’s naive ways of thinking. She is blind to a lot of common sense and too easily influence by her master but somehow is calculating smart when it comes to dealing with royalties. This is conflicting. I keep finding myself getting p*ss off when she believes that torture is the way to go with the ML when she had did before believe torture wasn’t. Why abandon your long beliefs with one word from a stranger? That was just stupid.
Was uhhh, was this dropped? Gwjdgdnxgdjxudhenduyddhxuhdndjxgxbdjxhxdn Stop scrolling. I said stop Heh, you get the good knowledge. Heres a secret, gingers have souls. They steal pieces of soul from others and patch together a soul. The soul will never be complete, but then again niether will their preys.
The story line and characters are very interesting and I suggest to all future readers to give it a try. There may be some minor errors and grammar mistakes, but if you are able to ignore those, the reading experience will be quite enjoyable. I recommend saving this in your library until it hits around 200 chapters or else you will finish it within a blink. It will definitely be worth the wait!!
I hope you can update soon! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Wrote one but it got deleted so will just say keep writing! I love your book! Power to the author! Thank you for reading the short version 😂😂😂😂
Finally i got to read the novel...the story is really good...pleae create backup of every chapter...so that you wont any misha** like last time...everyone! It is a must read novel
I think this a good story. Starts off a bit confusing from chapter 1 and 2 but really picks up. The characters are fine, I’ll Be waiting for more character development aside from that I think the premise of the story is a brilliant idea.
The story is amazing. No words. I love how the main characters interact with each other. This is one of the worthy stories you should read💕
I normally don’t give reviews, but author of you wanted to know you are doing great. I love your characters and I think your character development is fabulous. Please keep updating in the future.
Kekekekekeke Meng is so cute thank you for coming back author-sama! I look forward to this story daily and I’m really happy you returned. Can’t wait to see Meng grow up.
I couldn’t figure out how to find it Lolol glad I could, however I don’t think it should of been moved I support you regardless. This story is definitely worth reading for those looking for a kick a** villain
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Same as before! I hope Feng Qi and Meng can develop quicker and have a stronger relationship, however I like where you are going with it. Meng is adorable still thankfully and poor Feng Qi got curved 😂😂
Book is funny without being completely dumb. I love this books and always will. I’m glad you are back author. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Shameless review- Welcome to the villain’s bodyguard! Some things to be aware of include: -the main character of the book is insane. -starts of light, however gets dark later on -the main character was denied basic human rights when she was a child, therefore doesn’t know anything about the world. I think that’s all for now ahah they should let people edit reviews. Anyway happy reading! ^_^
Revelar Spoiler By far one of my favorite novels so far!ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ★彡 Though I do have to point out that she is being called a 10 year old at some points and 7 year old in the other chapters. Everything else is perfect✌︎('ω'✌︎ ) Can’t wait for the next chapter(๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)
Gosh this is just amazing!! I'm so glad it's back!!! :D The cover is so pretty~ I really like how there's no noticeable grammar errors and the writing is detailed and beautiful!! (^_^) The main character is ruthless in a funny way and it's actually REALLY FUNNY!!! I LOVE THE MAIN CHARACTER!! She's more than just a "strong female lead"!! She's hella awesome!!
Welcome back author!! All flower flower~~ Finally get to read feng qi and meng again huhu For all new reader, you will not getting dissapoint from reading this novel ahh Coz this is an interesting story You will love it ahh much ahh much ❤❤❤
Copy Pasta *cough* So far, I'm loving it.. can't wait for them to grow up and stabilize their relationship. What I mean by that is when ml now knows mc's personality and understands her. I wish there'll be no more misunderstanding. (⌒_⌒;) All in all, this has potential. Im turning into a fan ＼(￣▽￣)／ more power to the author! *cough* totally didn't steal a comment from the other LN you have author sama. *cough* Not me being completely lazy. *cough* *shifty eyes*
Meng character is well described with her actions and i like your grammar..... I can't wait to read further....do update chapter fast..Good luck and wish you best of luck
I'm not used to writing reviews but I really wanted to say that I really liked this story, please don't drop it dear author-nim ^_^ I will eagerly await your updates