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It's great. I read it in fanfiction.com. And just reviewing it here. one of the best Naruto fanfic ever......................................
it's good, I like the story that it's rolling out so far, it's diverged from canon in interesting ways. there's one glaring issue in my opinion though. granted, I'm not terribly far in yet, but the relationship/romance feels SO forced. the romance bits are not enjoyable to read at all.
This was one of the first naruto fanfics i have read so it holds a special place in my heart, but it definitely does not deserve all of the hype and stuff it gets.
Well it has a few mistakes in spellings but I am overlooking it because of the story itself as it makes more sense than others This is executed Perfectly without any mistakes
This is the first novel i read in years, it made me laugh, smile, cry, and be proud of Naruto i hope that anyone who reads this book finds as much enjoyment as i did when reading this
the Best naruro fan fiction ever, that is not a reincarnation or an tramsmigration. pretty well written, not that far fetched form canon, but aamzing storyline,plot twist and ending, 🔥
This was an amazing fanfic Really gOt me hookedwitgin forst 2 chapters would recommend it 10/10
Nice fanfic! Liked the way Naruto and Hinata gained power. It would have been much better if the writer continued on writing about Otsutsuki clan.
man story is best but too many plot holes 1. why rin died (in origionals madara killed her to manipulate obito thus giving him and kakashi mangenkyo 2, you said byakugan came from sharingan wtf what about otsuki clan etc etc
Such an amazing fanfiction i’ve read. I just wanna keep reading this forever. too goooooooooooooood. Just the storyline makes me love it.
one of the best, if not the best Naruto fan fiction I have ever read. the story progressed fluidly, character developed so much better than the original. the ending was so much better than the Canon as well. if this was the story for canon (anime and manga), it would have topped my lists.
this is a really good fan fiction which takes and changes the story of naruto in a good way. there were some grammar mistakes but they weren't bad in all honesty I was a bit sad and shocked when they killed Sakura off and a bit sadder when they didn't bring her back. but all in all really good story.
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The story is completely illogical. Kissing each other at the age of eight, expelling Hinata from the clan, discovering Inbu hiding and killing Junin, infiltrating the clan's headquarters and stealing techniques. There are many illogical things.
it was an interesting and good story. could have used a few more jokes. Spoiler: i would have written in the description / summary that Naruto is a descendent of Madara and Hashirama. only to make more people interested
Some things where a little weird good story tho........................,,,,,,.,..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.............
Very good story... ...................................................................................................................................................................................
Not much to say really. A story that I actually found interring enough to continue as i start many novels but do not finish them. It also has a good word count per chapter and the worst thing probably was that you went a bit excessive on some of the characters. But other than that, fuckin great
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SOOOO GOOD, one of the best fan-fic in webnovel. Thank god it was complete unlike other well made fan-fic which are dropped midway due to writer's block.
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This was honestly one of the best fanfics i've ever read on this site. I really recommend everyone to try it. And for once its actually complete!
This is by far the best fanfic i have ever read. It uses the cannon story to create a base and to set a background without having to write it, and yet, there is no copy i can see a brand new and well constructed story that made me laugh, cry, rage and feel satisfaction. I cannot truly put my amazement into words, this is my best shot at it, and i feel i it not enough. I sincerely recommend this book to any who love the naruto world but want a different story, one that truly splits off from the cannon and stands to create and evolve individual characters in a completely different direction than cannon. Now I'm just rambling on and on about how amazed i am by the story, but i sincerely hope that, whomever it is that is reading this, please give this book a chance to shock you to your very core as it has done to me.
I think this might be, honestly, the most... It's hard to find words, there were others that managed to do things very well, but in a completely different direction than this one. If I had to choose what makes this worth a 5 out of 5, I'd say it's how the author uses the canon to construct a wonderful story with comedy and emotions similar to the original story. That said, there were a few faults, making Haku a girl for no reason and hooking 'her' up with Gara out of nowhere caught me off guard. Sasuke was handled well, but he could've been handled better, which brings me to Sakura... This probably pissed me off the most, you actually managed to develop Sakura into a 3 dimensional character (very impressive transition from the initial gag character she had been), but then you have Sasuke kill her. To me, this is where their arcs went awry. But that's the bulk of it, aside from a few changes from the original canon that I found a tad bit unnecessary and far-fetched, it was constructed and delivered beautifully. Thank you!
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One of the few fanfictions that achieve a near perfect balance between creating your own twist to the overall narrative and remaining true to what Naruto ultimately is.
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the only thing I didn't like, was that it ended, it was perfect......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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So, where do I start...whenever I first read this it got deleted an I was so sad I count stop thinking of all the possibilities that could of happened! I found it again on accident and I was super happy and as I finished it I was amazed at how great this fanfiction is! Like....... wow no words just read for yourself seriously! You will not regret it! It's super funny, sad, and everything in between! You just want to keep on reading!
This story was amazing and I would love to read it again. I would recommend it to a friend. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
It's great. I read it in fanfiction.com. And just reviewing it here. one of the best Naruto fanfic ever......................................
it's good, I like the story that it's rolling out so far, it's diverged from canon in interesting ways. there's one glaring issue in my opinion though. granted, I'm not terribly far in yet, but the relationship/romance feels SO forced. the romance bits are not enjoyable to read at all.
This was one of the first naruto fanfics i have read so it holds a special place in my heart, but it definitely does not deserve all of the hype and stuff it gets.
Well it has a few mistakes in spellings but I am overlooking it because of the story itself as it makes more sense than others This is executed Perfectly without any mistakes
This is the first novel i read in years, it made me laugh, smile, cry, and be proud of Naruto i hope that anyone who reads this book finds as much enjoyment as i did when reading this
the Best naruro fan fiction ever, that is not a reincarnation or an tramsmigration. pretty well written, not that far fetched form canon, but aamzing storyline,plot twist and ending, 🔥
This was an amazing fanfic Really gOt me hookedwitgin forst 2 chapters would recommend it 10/10
Nice fanfic! Liked the way Naruto and Hinata gained power. It would have been much better if the writer continued on writing about Otsutsuki clan.
man story is best but too many plot holes 1. why rin died (in origionals madara killed her to manipulate obito thus giving him and kakashi mangenkyo 2, you said byakugan came from sharingan wtf what about otsuki clan etc etc
Such an amazing fanfiction i’ve read. I just wanna keep reading this forever. too goooooooooooooood. Just the storyline makes me love it.
one of the best, if not the best Naruto fan fiction I have ever read. the story progressed fluidly, character developed so much better than the original. the ending was so much better than the Canon as well. if this was the story for canon (anime and manga), it would have topped my lists.
this is a really good fan fiction which takes and changes the story of naruto in a good way. there were some grammar mistakes but they weren't bad in all honesty I was a bit sad and shocked when they killed Sakura off and a bit sadder when they didn't bring her back. but all in all really good story.
Revelar Spoiler The story is completely illogical. Kissing each other at the age of eight, expelling Hinata from the clan, discovering Inbu hiding and killing Junin, infiltrating the clan's headquarters and stealing techniques. There are many illogical things.
it was an interesting and good story. could have used a few more jokes. Spoiler: i would have written in the description / summary that Naruto is a descendent of Madara and Hashirama. only to make more people interested
Some things where a little weird good story tho........................,,,,,,.,..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.............
Very good story... ...................................................................................................................................................................................
Not much to say really. A story that I actually found interring enough to continue as i start many novels but do not finish them. It also has a good word count per chapter and the worst thing probably was that you went a bit excessive on some of the characters. But other than that, fuckin great
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SOOOO GOOD, one of the best fan-fic in webnovel. Thank god it was complete unlike other well made fan-fic which are dropped midway due to writer's block.
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This was honestly one of the best fanfics i've ever read on this site. I really recommend everyone to try it. And for once its actually complete!
This is by far the best fanfic i have ever read. It uses the cannon story to create a base and to set a background without having to write it, and yet, there is no copy i can see a brand new and well constructed story that made me laugh, cry, rage and feel satisfaction. I cannot truly put my amazement into words, this is my best shot at it, and i feel i it not enough. I sincerely recommend this book to any who love the naruto world but want a different story, one that truly splits off from the cannon and stands to create and evolve individual characters in a completely different direction than cannon. Now I'm just rambling on and on about how amazed i am by the story, but i sincerely hope that, whomever it is that is reading this, please give this book a chance to shock you to your very core as it has done to me.
I think this might be, honestly, the most... It's hard to find words, there were others that managed to do things very well, but in a completely different direction than this one. If I had to choose what makes this worth a 5 out of 5, I'd say it's how the author uses the canon to construct a wonderful story with comedy and emotions similar to the original story. That said, there were a few faults, making Haku a girl for no reason and hooking 'her' up with Gara out of nowhere caught me off guard. Sasuke was handled well, but he could've been handled better, which brings me to Sakura... This probably pissed me off the most, you actually managed to develop Sakura into a 3 dimensional character (very impressive transition from the initial gag character she had been), but then you have Sasuke kill her. To me, this is where their arcs went awry. But that's the bulk of it, aside from a few changes from the original canon that I found a tad bit unnecessary and far-fetched, it was constructed and delivered beautifully. Thank you!
Revelar Spoiler nice...................................................................................................................................................
One of the few fanfictions that achieve a near perfect balance between creating your own twist to the overall narrative and remaining true to what Naruto ultimately is.
Exp .........................................................................................................,,,,..,,,.?.,.,.?................
the only thing I didn't like, was that it ended, it was perfect......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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So, where do I start...whenever I first read this it got deleted an I was so sad I count stop thinking of all the possibilities that could of happened! I found it again on accident and I was super happy and as I finished it I was amazed at how great this fanfiction is! Like....... wow no words just read for yourself seriously! You will not regret it! It's super funny, sad, and everything in between! You just want to keep on reading!
This story was amazing and I would love to read it again. I would recommend it to a friend. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..