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Everyone that know naruto and likes it can be really happy with this fan fic but be aware..... 40 % of the naruto series is filler.... In a fan fic that is authentic to the original you should not be annoyed by flashbacks. If you are easily ... Then stay away.... The Fan fiction ist the best of the naruto universe that I've ever read and I know about 40 or 50 different ones.... Well... In conclusion this fan fic from indie is not only on qidian the best but even compared with fan.fiction.com I LIKE IT THE WAY INDIE WRITES IT. And no one can stop him!!! Or I will come for you
Well, the story is pretty decent, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read and I'll continue reading it till you finish it. A couple of complains: idk if anyone have the same problem but at least for me the structure of the dialogs kinda breaks the flow, if the dialogs were in the same paragraph would be a little more comfortable, even more when a lot of people are talking at the same time. Other thing is that you rely on our previous knowledge of Naruto, yeah a lot of people get what are you trying to illustrate but others would need to open the wiki to search the things that are happening. Anyway, I'm not a native speaker so my English can be a little rough but I hope you understand what I meant
Waste of time. How come even after being sent back in time Naruto is same idiot and acting like a naive kid?
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The best way I could describe this is an intriguing yet polarizing fanfic. The initial chapters of the story struggle with a barebones and almost abysmal writing style, which may deter some readers. The narrative improves to a decent standard as the story progresses, but it never quite reaches a level that would be considered polished, especially due to dialogue that disrupts the flow and flashbacks that interrupt the action sequences. These elements can make the reading experience somewhat disjointed. True to the spirit of the original Naruto anime, this fanfic is laden with flashbacks. These flashbacks serve to either revisit early chapters or introduce new plotlines crafted by the author. The inclusion of these scenes will divide readers: some will appreciate the depth they add, finding them instrumental in strengthening current scenes, while others may view them as unwelcome interruptions that break the narrative momentum. This fanfic tends to read more like a comfort story, imbued with a sense of nostalgia rather than an attempt to carve out a completely new plot. Fans of the original series might enjoy seeing familiar characters expanded upon, endowed with new abilities, and interacting with characters they haven't previously encountered. Naruto himself is portrayed as overpowered, effortlessly resolving most situations, which can be a source of either enjoyment or frustration. Those who relish seeing their favorite characters triumph easily might find this aspect appealing, while others may miss the tension and struggle that characterized the original series. The story ventures into creating new lore, adding layers to certain characters' backstories, including Naruto's, and touching upon events from Boruto. This expansion can be a significant draw for some, offering fresh content and deeper insights into beloved characters. However, it can also be a deal breaker for purists who prefer the canon with very few additional alterations. As mentioned above, this fanfic will either resonate strongly with you or fall flat. The quality of writing is nothing exceptional, and the story's reliance on flashbacks, comfort plotlines, and new lore are the primary elements that will determine its reception. For some, these aspects will provide a sense of nostalgia and expanded enjoyment of the Naruto universe, while for others, they will be sources of frustration and disengagement. Ultimately, your enjoyment hinges on your personal preferences and your attachment to the Naruto series.
It's good and all until everything starts feeling happy go lucky, most of the important characters know the true identity then it makes it kinda cringe and I mean he can give some info, but who married who, who were the kids it feels kinda forced and you can't make every single ascept right ...
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awesome novel i neve read a novel in my life even i started with solo levelling a year ago i just quit after 2 chapters but this novel kept me exited and i finished it in a week
this is the best Naruto fanfiction i ever read, all the story it's development and it's character development I loved it all. but one problem I have with it was that Naruto being the 7th hokage and him from the future was known easily and to almost everyone I say if this fact remains a mystery for genin and hinata and sakura except shikamaru would have been great. but overall this is great and when will you be continue it on.
didm't feel like Naruto at all, I know Naruto is a Shounen, but this is too vanilla that it made OG Naruto feels like a Seinen.
Although gramatically well written, this just seems to be a copy of the original Naruto series, with an able and therefore stronger MC (Naruto). I admit i didnt read to far into it (15 Chapters), but far enough to be able to expect at least something original or interesting. I guess an okay read if you have nothing else, but for me personally, just boring and repetetive. MEH
Loved this fanfic, the other naruto fanfics I observed went on full trying to make naruto as overpowered as soon as possible. But although this one does a bit of that, it's made in a understandable way without just randomly making up new jutsus that don't make sense. I also loved most of the characters interactions, each one has a chance to be fleshed out with some exceptions like tenten or shino, but let's be real that's not that big of a deal.
Naruto nerfed (forgot his past, acted like a weakling and let some ppl killed even though he didn't want to, etc), Sasuke nerfed, (his cold personality disappear and he become beta-like character. the most annoying was he seemed to listen what Naruto said like a side character.)
Author likes doing flash backs way to much, it ruins any sense of immersion, over and over your reading the same thing, and when people comment about it the author replies that it is needed????? What are we, Alzheimer's patients?????? It also made the alien stuff worse by introducing a bunch of new random alien stuff and time and space shenanigan's, if your gonna retcon the alien stuff just make them not exists
does naruto use a bow and arrow in this one ? I saw it in the description in the search that's why I'm reading this or is he not using a bow and arrows?
Hey, I am very sorry to see that you dropped this, this is a very interesting story and I am looking forward to more chapters, have a good day.
The MC tells everyone he's from the future in chapter 28. I don't know who is interested in reading this. But judging by the reviews of strange people a lot
Nice story background, the concept of time travel are interesting and seeing the kurama also know it makes it more interesting. Although i'm still not sure how the story will go on in the future seeing the timeline is completely different. Also the story that naruto have a grandchild is interesting along with the tragedy. Maybe it can be continued later following how naruto can accept the fate. Hope the author is healthy and able to provide us new update.
I like this fanfic and most of the comments talk about it been good. Naruto is from the future but his thinking is related from the knowledge from the furture. Ex: He want to orochimaru to come to good side but orochimaru at naruto canon is pure evil.
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This is surprisingly really good it has a lot of hype moments and i definitely recommend reading it
I think this fanfic is supergood I love it. Want more chapters. Quick!!!! Love this book!!!! Big fan of yours now!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I'm still waiting for the continuation of this series, hopefully it will be uploaded soon. I'm still waiting for the continuation of this series, hopefully it will be uploaded soon
I really don't wish for anyone to experience the heartbreakness of reading a dropped novel, so don't read it guys!! But if you don't mind reading a half baked novel then this is an awesome one and you should read it :)
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Очень классный фанфик. Классный сюжет и история развития. Немного бесит, что порой сюжет развивается несколькими параллелями, но автор делает это виртуозно. На самом деле, у автора талант. Жду когда он напишет оригинальную работу. Очень-очень жаль, что нет продолжения. Автор дай нам продолжение. Пожалуйста 😢😢😢
Story starts with an unusual point of time travelling and progress smoothly till the twists and turns start. Although story progression is a bit slow the author knows how to get the attention of the readers mind.
nice novel(⌐■-■)👍 😁👍😁👍😁👍👍👍😁👍👍👏👍👍😁👍👍👍😁😁👍👍😁😁👍👍😁😁😁👍👍😙😙😙😁👍👍😁😁👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍😙😙😙😙😙👍👍👍😙😙👍👍😁😁😁👍
Honestly, this is a great story. Ive made my way through only 1/2 of it but have loved every god damn second. 100% worth a read and greatly entertaining.
Brilliant story, breaths new life into the naruto series, allowing changes to fix what naruto wouldve wanted. loving it so far and cant wait to read more!!
okay but just a correction, it should be reborn ,reincarnation is in a another body. so Imma just fill this up with bullshit cuz I can't post if I don't
I like the new ideas you have input with recanon it very interesting to read everyday though I have not finished yet I can say it far from boring so thanks for making my time worth it
Well I must say this is the best Naruto fanfic I found in qidian so far. What I like about the story is that the author respected the canon. All the characters are just like in the original naruto. I've read a lot of naruto fanfic and let me tell you, most of the authors like to butcher the canon. I don't want Naruto to become arrogant horny MC like in other fanfic and all the kages and jonin turned into retards and take advice from a 5 year old kid. What I envision is the same Naruto but since Naruto already knew the future, he will try to erase his past regrets and save his loved ones. And I hope the author will emphasize more on the relationship and interaction between characters. Their relationship is superficial and not that detailed in the manga since it's a shounen. So I hope I can satisfy my fangirl heart with this novel. Well that's just my wish. You can just write whatever you want For the pacing just take it slow. You don't need to rush the plot and you can even add fillers in between. You can finish the chunin exam in chapter 200 for all I care. The only complain about the writing is author tends to add multiple scenes into a chapter. Switching between scenes in a chapter will destroy the readers immersion. Just focus on one character at a time. We readers doesn't have short term memory lost so we wouldn't forget about the other characters if you did not give them screen time for few chapters. Overall a solid read. And the update rate is consistent. My only hope is for the author to finish this novel and not dropping it like 99% of the originals out there.
Everyone that know naruto and likes it can be really happy with this fan fic but be aware..... 40 % of the naruto series is filler.... In a fan fic that is authentic to the original you should not be annoyed by flashbacks. If you are easily ... Then stay away.... The Fan fiction ist the best of the naruto universe that I've ever read and I know about 40 or 50 different ones.... Well... In conclusion this fan fic from indie is not only on qidian the best but even compared with fan.fiction.com I LIKE IT THE WAY INDIE WRITES IT. And no one can stop him!!! Or I will come for you
Well, the story is pretty decent, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read and I'll continue reading it till you finish it. A couple of complains: idk if anyone have the same problem but at least for me the structure of the dialogs kinda breaks the flow, if the dialogs were in the same paragraph would be a little more comfortable, even more when a lot of people are talking at the same time. Other thing is that you rely on our previous knowledge of Naruto, yeah a lot of people get what are you trying to illustrate but others would need to open the wiki to search the things that are happening. Anyway, I'm not a native speaker so my English can be a little rough but I hope you understand what I meant
Waste of time. How come even after being sent back in time Naruto is same idiot and acting like a naive kid?
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The best way I could describe this is an intriguing yet polarizing fanfic. The initial chapters of the story struggle with a barebones and almost abysmal writing style, which may deter some readers. The narrative improves to a decent standard as the story progresses, but it never quite reaches a level that would be considered polished, especially due to dialogue that disrupts the flow and flashbacks that interrupt the action sequences. These elements can make the reading experience somewhat disjointed. True to the spirit of the original Naruto anime, this fanfic is laden with flashbacks. These flashbacks serve to either revisit early chapters or introduce new plotlines crafted by the author. The inclusion of these scenes will divide readers: some will appreciate the depth they add, finding them instrumental in strengthening current scenes, while others may view them as unwelcome interruptions that break the narrative momentum. This fanfic tends to read more like a comfort story, imbued with a sense of nostalgia rather than an attempt to carve out a completely new plot. Fans of the original series might enjoy seeing familiar characters expanded upon, endowed with new abilities, and interacting with characters they haven't previously encountered. Naruto himself is portrayed as overpowered, effortlessly resolving most situations, which can be a source of either enjoyment or frustration. Those who relish seeing their favorite characters triumph easily might find this aspect appealing, while others may miss the tension and struggle that characterized the original series. The story ventures into creating new lore, adding layers to certain characters' backstories, including Naruto's, and touching upon events from Boruto. This expansion can be a significant draw for some, offering fresh content and deeper insights into beloved characters. However, it can also be a deal breaker for purists who prefer the canon with very few additional alterations. As mentioned above, this fanfic will either resonate strongly with you or fall flat. The quality of writing is nothing exceptional, and the story's reliance on flashbacks, comfort plotlines, and new lore are the primary elements that will determine its reception. For some, these aspects will provide a sense of nostalgia and expanded enjoyment of the Naruto universe, while for others, they will be sources of frustration and disengagement. Ultimately, your enjoyment hinges on your personal preferences and your attachment to the Naruto series.
It's good and all until everything starts feeling happy go lucky, most of the important characters know the true identity then it makes it kinda cringe and I mean he can give some info, but who married who, who were the kids it feels kinda forced and you can't make every single ascept right ...
Revelar Spoiler awesome novel i neve read a novel in my life even i started with solo levelling a year ago i just quit after 2 chapters but this novel kept me exited and i finished it in a week
this is the best Naruto fanfiction i ever read, all the story it's development and it's character development I loved it all. but one problem I have with it was that Naruto being the 7th hokage and him from the future was known easily and to almost everyone I say if this fact remains a mystery for genin and hinata and sakura except shikamaru would have been great. but overall this is great and when will you be continue it on.
didm't feel like Naruto at all, I know Naruto is a Shounen, but this is too vanilla that it made OG Naruto feels like a Seinen.
Although gramatically well written, this just seems to be a copy of the original Naruto series, with an able and therefore stronger MC (Naruto). I admit i didnt read to far into it (15 Chapters), but far enough to be able to expect at least something original or interesting. I guess an okay read if you have nothing else, but for me personally, just boring and repetetive. MEH
Loved this fanfic, the other naruto fanfics I observed went on full trying to make naruto as overpowered as soon as possible. But although this one does a bit of that, it's made in a understandable way without just randomly making up new jutsus that don't make sense. I also loved most of the characters interactions, each one has a chance to be fleshed out with some exceptions like tenten or shino, but let's be real that's not that big of a deal.
Naruto nerfed (forgot his past, acted like a weakling and let some ppl killed even though he didn't want to, etc), Sasuke nerfed, (his cold personality disappear and he become beta-like character. the most annoying was he seemed to listen what Naruto said like a side character.)
Author likes doing flash backs way to much, it ruins any sense of immersion, over and over your reading the same thing, and when people comment about it the author replies that it is needed????? What are we, Alzheimer's patients?????? It also made the alien stuff worse by introducing a bunch of new random alien stuff and time and space shenanigan's, if your gonna retcon the alien stuff just make them not exists
does naruto use a bow and arrow in this one ? I saw it in the description in the search that's why I'm reading this or is he not using a bow and arrows?
Hey, I am very sorry to see that you dropped this, this is a very interesting story and I am looking forward to more chapters, have a good day.
The MC tells everyone he's from the future in chapter 28. I don't know who is interested in reading this. But judging by the reviews of strange people a lot
Nice story background, the concept of time travel are interesting and seeing the kurama also know it makes it more interesting. Although i'm still not sure how the story will go on in the future seeing the timeline is completely different. Also the story that naruto have a grandchild is interesting along with the tragedy. Maybe it can be continued later following how naruto can accept the fate. Hope the author is healthy and able to provide us new update.
I like this fanfic and most of the comments talk about it been good. Naruto is from the future but his thinking is related from the knowledge from the furture. Ex: He want to orochimaru to come to good side but orochimaru at naruto canon is pure evil.
Revelar Spoiler This is surprisingly really good it has a lot of hype moments and i definitely recommend reading it
I think this fanfic is supergood I love it. Want more chapters. Quick!!!! Love this book!!!! Big fan of yours now!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Revelar Spoiler I'm still waiting for the continuation of this series, hopefully it will be uploaded soon. I'm still waiting for the continuation of this series, hopefully it will be uploaded soon
I really don't wish for anyone to experience the heartbreakness of reading a dropped novel, so don't read it guys!! But if you don't mind reading a half baked novel then this is an awesome one and you should read it :)
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Очень классный фанфик. Классный сюжет и история развития. Немного бесит, что порой сюжет развивается несколькими параллелями, но автор делает это виртуозно. На самом деле, у автора талант. Жду когда он напишет оригинальную работу. Очень-очень жаль, что нет продолжения. Автор дай нам продолжение. Пожалуйста 😢😢😢
Story starts with an unusual point of time travelling and progress smoothly till the twists and turns start. Although story progression is a bit slow the author knows how to get the attention of the readers mind.
nice novel(⌐■-■)👍 😁👍😁👍😁👍👍👍😁👍👍👏👍👍😁👍👍👍😁😁👍👍😁😁👍👍😁😁😁👍👍😙😙😙😁👍👍😁😁👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍😙😙😙😙😙👍👍👍😙😙👍👍😁😁😁👍
Honestly, this is a great story. Ive made my way through only 1/2 of it but have loved every god damn second. 100% worth a read and greatly entertaining.
Brilliant story, breaths new life into the naruto series, allowing changes to fix what naruto wouldve wanted. loving it so far and cant wait to read more!!
okay but just a correction, it should be reborn ,reincarnation is in a another body. so Imma just fill this up with bullshit cuz I can't post if I don't
I like the new ideas you have input with recanon it very interesting to read everyday though I have not finished yet I can say it far from boring so thanks for making my time worth it
Well I must say this is the best Naruto fanfic I found in qidian so far. What I like about the story is that the author respected the canon. All the characters are just like in the original naruto. I've read a lot of naruto fanfic and let me tell you, most of the authors like to butcher the canon. I don't want Naruto to become arrogant horny MC like in other fanfic and all the kages and jonin turned into retards and take advice from a 5 year old kid. What I envision is the same Naruto but since Naruto already knew the future, he will try to erase his past regrets and save his loved ones. And I hope the author will emphasize more on the relationship and interaction between characters. Their relationship is superficial and not that detailed in the manga since it's a shounen. So I hope I can satisfy my fangirl heart with this novel. Well that's just my wish. You can just write whatever you want For the pacing just take it slow. You don't need to rush the plot and you can even add fillers in between. You can finish the chunin exam in chapter 200 for all I care. The only complain about the writing is author tends to add multiple scenes into a chapter. Switching between scenes in a chapter will destroy the readers immersion. Just focus on one character at a time. We readers doesn't have short term memory lost so we wouldn't forget about the other characters if you did not give them screen time for few chapters. Overall a solid read. And the update rate is consistent. My only hope is for the author to finish this novel and not dropping it like 99% of the originals out there.