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Dozens of chapters with an extremely annoying MC arguing with a somehow more annoying A.I. If that wasn't enough the writing quality was terrible. How can something go so wrong...? Read and find out...
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i hate the character, not only is he really annoying but also he doesn't even use the system properly. not that good of a story, sorry just my opinion.
I really liked the story and how things were progressing, there also aren't many stories like this out there, so it's really a shame that this got dropped(i assume it was dropped cos its been like a year sine the last update).
Just showing support this is a great book unfortunately it hasnt been updated in ages if only it kept on updating I would have mlre to sat but these 52 chapters were great im eagerly waiting for some more chapters!
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Though it may be a crude comedy/romance if you wanna call it that the MC is yet to have any major crushes, but he gots a pretty promising future. Maybe even marrying one lady.
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Its pretty entertaining, the mc doesn´t turn op immediately, in fact, many times he is about to die, but because reasons he doesn´t die. Also, he is an egoist prick, he only thinks about himself, but i hope there will be romance, but not harem.
To be honest, I read chapters 1-3 before tapping out. The writing was very poor. Although I could understand what was happening most of the time, there were so many plural, tense, and punctuation errors that it was painful to read. The main character is so sex obsessed that it is practically all he thinks about. Example: he chooses his race by which ones will be more likely to get himself laid.
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It’s actually a really nice book it’s a little bit confusing in the beginning but it gets a lot better later on its really good author please don’t stop keep writing
This story is trash the grammar is bad, it took 4 chapters for the story to even start, the dialog is dumb, the system is stupid the mc is trash overall the story and characters are trash wouldn't read waste of time..
I don’t want you to drop this story. Pls, don’t. Everything is ok, you have some mistakes, but as far as I’ve seen, you listen to your auditory and correct them. With the snake choice, I don’t see any problems. It’s your right to choose it anyway.
I'm waiting for the continuation please I just go to this page to see if you post Please don't let this novel You are fresh and the history is perfect Pls
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I don't really care about your views on trans and stuff like that and I know it offends a lot of people but I think it's ok to have your own view on things even if I personally disagree and so do other people but I actually quite enjoy the story even though there are some holes and stuff I still find it enjoyable hope you keep writing it
Authors needs to use logical reasoning or make up something reasonable. Idk of the author thinks it’s funny always making mc and system bicker with each other but it’s annoying..... And the authors makes too much bad jokes which gets annoying Ex: at the beginning of the novels wouldn’t stop talking about sperms and joking about how many babies they made something like 133555 idk I forgot. Mc is like a little annoying ***** and the system is the annoying. Then there is needing the permission of the system to name himself which is annoying. Lets not forget he needs to have sex with a female whether it be a monster or human so his gender doesn’t change. Also his reasoning for choosing a snake as his reincarnation is retarded. The grammar mistakes are annoying but I can look past that. If the author can change the mc’s personality (make him less annoying) and make him use proper logic or give reasonable explanation then I would say the story is great... And stop making jokes with sperms so annoying, and the system should be there to server him idk why it’s so annoying. Edit: improved the rating since it's more logical in the later chapters but there still annoying jokes or what you want to call it.
Please comeback soon! im really enjoying this series! cant wait until he enters his ***** stage and gets the armour from the cover art. right now all i can imagining is kirito / sephiroth look. while the higher art had helped my imagination run wild. this is a beautiful and unique story. worth the reward and votes!
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Dude, the toxicity of this novel is unparalleled. why the heck did you have to do that way? It had potential but now is just a waste. I hope you reboot this novel in a better way, bye.
I didn't read the story to be truthful, but your synopsis say much about it, It tell me about unreasonable choices, who the **** would choose a snake over dragon, even that snake race wet dream would be to evolve to a dragon. It tell me about MC obnoxious character, why i would i read a story about such a character, who didn't even have the intelligence or common sense to recognize his wrong doing.
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i don't know what to write. hope you're having a nice day. wishing you all the best. keep writing good novels like this which makes our day.
First thing if he is going for a class that easily get the girls to flack him a FUCKING VAMPIRE or AN ANGEL nothing is more beautiful than those two... And I think being a cheater he should be more cunning and a risk taker, which those nothing shows up in him
Honesltly it had a strong start, but this is another one of those novels where the monster mc just always uses their human form and never their monster form.
Dozens of chapters with an extremely annoying MC arguing with a somehow more annoying A.I. If that wasn't enough the writing quality was terrible. How can something go so wrong...? Read and find out...
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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i hate the character, not only is he really annoying but also he doesn't even use the system properly. not that good of a story, sorry just my opinion.
I really liked the story and how things were progressing, there also aren't many stories like this out there, so it's really a shame that this got dropped(i assume it was dropped cos its been like a year sine the last update).
Just showing support this is a great book unfortunately it hasnt been updated in ages if only it kept on updating I would have mlre to sat but these 52 chapters were great im eagerly waiting for some more chapters!
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Revelar Spoiler Though it may be a crude comedy/romance if you wanna call it that the MC is yet to have any major crushes, but he gots a pretty promising future. Maybe even marrying one lady.
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.................................. .................................. .................................. .................................. It is in my library, recommended
Its pretty entertaining, the mc doesn´t turn op immediately, in fact, many times he is about to die, but because reasons he doesn´t die. Also, he is an egoist prick, he only thinks about himself, but i hope there will be romance, but not harem.
To be honest, I read chapters 1-3 before tapping out. The writing was very poor. Although I could understand what was happening most of the time, there were so many plural, tense, and punctuation errors that it was painful to read. The main character is so sex obsessed that it is practically all he thinks about. Example: he chooses his race by which ones will be more likely to get himself laid.
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It’s actually a really nice book it’s a little bit confusing in the beginning but it gets a lot better later on its really good author please don’t stop keep writing
This story is trash the grammar is bad, it took 4 chapters for the story to even start, the dialog is dumb, the system is stupid the mc is trash overall the story and characters are trash wouldn't read waste of time..
I don’t want you to drop this story. Pls, don’t. Everything is ok, you have some mistakes, but as far as I’ve seen, you listen to your auditory and correct them. With the snake choice, I don’t see any problems. It’s your right to choose it anyway.
I'm waiting for the continuation please I just go to this page to see if you post Please don't let this novel You are fresh and the history is perfect Pls
Novel is 1 time read. Ààaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Exp sect A A A A A A A A A Exp sect exp sect Exp Sect
I don't really care about your views on trans and stuff like that and I know it offends a lot of people but I think it's ok to have your own view on things even if I personally disagree and so do other people but I actually quite enjoy the story even though there are some holes and stuff I still find it enjoyable hope you keep writing it
Authors needs to use logical reasoning or make up something reasonable. Idk of the author thinks it’s funny always making mc and system bicker with each other but it’s annoying..... And the authors makes too much bad jokes which gets annoying Ex: at the beginning of the novels wouldn’t stop talking about sperms and joking about how many babies they made something like 133555 idk I forgot. Mc is like a little annoying ***** and the system is the annoying. Then there is needing the permission of the system to name himself which is annoying. Lets not forget he needs to have sex with a female whether it be a monster or human so his gender doesn’t change. Also his reasoning for choosing a snake as his reincarnation is retarded. The grammar mistakes are annoying but I can look past that. If the author can change the mc’s personality (make him less annoying) and make him use proper logic or give reasonable explanation then I would say the story is great... And stop making jokes with sperms so annoying, and the system should be there to server him idk why it’s so annoying. Edit: improved the rating since it's more logical in the later chapters but there still annoying jokes or what you want to call it.
Please comeback soon! im really enjoying this series! cant wait until he enters his ***** stage and gets the armour from the cover art. right now all i can imagining is kirito / sephiroth look. while the higher art had helped my imagination run wild. this is a beautiful and unique story. worth the reward and votes!
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Dude, the toxicity of this novel is unparalleled. why the heck did you have to do that way? It had potential but now is just a waste. I hope you reboot this novel in a better way, bye.
I didn't read the story to be truthful, but your synopsis say much about it, It tell me about unreasonable choices, who the **** would choose a snake over dragon, even that snake race wet dream would be to evolve to a dragon. It tell me about MC obnoxious character, why i would i read a story about such a character, who didn't even have the intelligence or common sense to recognize his wrong doing.
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Revelar Spoiler i don't know what to write. hope you're having a nice day. wishing you all the best. keep writing good novels like this which makes our day.
First thing if he is going for a class that easily get the girls to flack him a FUCKING VAMPIRE or AN ANGEL nothing is more beautiful than those two... And I think being a cheater he should be more cunning and a risk taker, which those nothing shows up in him
Honesltly it had a strong start, but this is another one of those novels where the monster mc just always uses their human form and never their monster form.