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Well i really liked it but it starts to get sorta dark with all the evil spirits and gowding out eyeballs and trapped in endless darkness in a cage stuck in your mind as the other you that is the personified filling of your turned evil mother and crushed father is hurting your best friends sister for power and to trap the real mc
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O melhor fan fic de naruto por favor autor continue, estamos ansiosos por mais capitulos dattebayooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
The farther away the less interesting. Text quality is minimal. I do not advise reading. .........................................................................................................
I really enjoy this story you are making and can say that this is starting out to be one of the better ones for me hope you keep the story up and to keep it awesome.
I dropped this at chapter 27 a LONG time ago and decided that I am unlikely to come back so I am rating it. Rate it a 3. Ok story, but not long or that great. The story is a bit confusing at times due to some of the differences between this universe and the source universe and not being properly explained. I did still find it a lot of fun to read, but I sadly just never felt like coming back to it and it never got long enough for me to expect a proper ending to arrive. I overall rate it 3 stars (where 2.5 is average)
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Revelar Spoiler Well i really liked it but it starts to get sorta dark with all the evil spirits and gowding out eyeballs and trapped in endless darkness in a cage stuck in your mind as the other you that is the personified filling of your turned evil mother and crushed father is hurting your best friends sister for power and to trap the real mc
Revelar Spoiler O melhor fan fic de naruto por favor autor continue, estamos ansiosos por mais capitulos dattebayooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
The farther away the less interesting. Text quality is minimal. I do not advise reading. .........................................................................................................
I really enjoy this story you are making and can say that this is starting out to be one of the better ones for me hope you keep the story up and to keep it awesome.
I dropped this at chapter 27 a LONG time ago and decided that I am unlikely to come back so I am rating it. Rate it a 3. Ok story, but not long or that great. The story is a bit confusing at times due to some of the differences between this universe and the source universe and not being properly explained. I did still find it a lot of fun to read, but I sadly just never felt like coming back to it and it never got long enough for me to expect a proper ending to arrive. I overall rate it 3 stars (where 2.5 is average)