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Excellent story, using anime characters to describe how characters look is inspired, especially in a Chinese cultivation novel where many descriptions are overly vague(ex. Jade like skin, nation toppling beauty, fairy-like…etc). Using information that you already provided to alude to something else is a mark of a good writer, try to do it a bit more often. As a side note I believe you forgot a level up reward or two for the MC. As always there is room for improvement, keep up the good work.
Gujghihgyujggjjhhiithat our marriage is fake. I am a disciple of Frozen Asgard. I marr-ie-ed you just because of our father's oath and I don't want to you to be humiliated and bullied more if I break our marriage
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Revelar Spoiler Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
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I love the story and hope that you will continue to write more chapter but maybe when he reaches the divine realm unlock a new shop for a different anime
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
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When an author tries to blend many elements from different sources it usually becomes jumbled and messy. However, this is one of the very—and I mean very—few exceptions where it is perfectly blended together. I hope the author comes back and decides to finish this book with as much fervour and attention to detail they have given throughout this—dare I say—masterpiece. For someone that has experienced and read all of these games, books, and anime’s that this respected author has integrated, I can with 100% assurance say that this book is a masterpiece. Please come back and update. Please continue this book with as much passion as you’ve had. If not, please keep on writing. The world enjoys your writing!
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Excellent story, using anime characters to describe how characters look is inspired, especially in a Chinese cultivation novel where many descriptions are overly vague(ex. Jade like skin, nation toppling beauty, fairy-like…etc). Using information that you already provided to alude to something else is a mark of a good writer, try to do it a bit more often. As a side note I believe you forgot a level up reward or two for the MC. As always there is room for improvement, keep up the good work.
Gujghihgyujggjjhhiithat our marriage is fake. I am a disciple of Frozen Asgard. I marr-ie-ed you just because of our father's oath and I don't want to you to be humiliated and bullied more if I break our marriage
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Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good..
Im here to just farming exp on this exp source....Im here to just farming exp on this exp source.... Im here to just farming exp on this exp source....
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
good chapter.......................................................................................................................................
Revelar Spoiler Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
buen capitulo.................................................................................................................................
Revelar Spoiler Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
awesome..............................................................................................................................................
Revelar Spoiler Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
I love the story and hope that you will continue to write more chapter but maybe when he reaches the divine realm unlock a new shop for a different anime
Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!
mc is retard for a strongest person he is a retard mc is retard for a strongest person he is a mc is retard for a strongest person he is a retard mc is retard for a strongest person he is a retard mc is retard for a strongest person he is a mc is retard for a strongest person he is a retard mc is retard for a strongest person he is a retard
When an author tries to blend many elements from different sources it usually becomes jumbled and messy. However, this is one of the very—and I mean very—few exceptions where it is perfectly blended together. I hope the author comes back and decides to finish this book with as much fervour and attention to detail they have given throughout this—dare I say—masterpiece. For someone that has experienced and read all of these games, books, and anime’s that this respected author has integrated, I can with 100% assurance say that this book is a masterpiece. Please come back and update. Please continue this book with as much passion as you’ve had. If not, please keep on writing. The world enjoys your writing!