Capítulo 43: Feedback Request

Hello everyone. I would like to ask for feedback from my readers on how you think the story is going, what you suggest I should add, or any parts of the story you find lacking. This is very important for me because the lack of feedback I am receiving makes me think longer on how I can make the story interesting and how I can improve myself as an author because this is my very first book. Please help me grow as an author to give you all a better experience as well