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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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So far the story line is interesting. Put me in mind of Toriko. But different characters, one you will grow with from youth. This story has potential to be hunger inducing. I look forward to the character and story development.
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First congratulations on winning writing prompt 34! I really like the approach to the novel so far and it’s flow. The only wish I have is if you could have the chapter be longer and increase the releases!
This is simply an amazing novel. It slowly draws you in by introduce the dark continent and then you are thrown into the gourmet world! Pls update the novel faster, I hate waiting to read this master piece.
more chapters pls and just curious did you draw this picture or dis you copy it if you copied it can i know where you copied it from cause it looks interesting
Really creative and dareing author he made a novel based on toriko and so far he is doing great I love this novel and hope it will have more chaps soon I have already given all my power stones to him
Hey guys, this is obviously another 5 star shameless author post. I hope you give my novel a chance and actually read it without hesitation. Please feel free to give me any advice you have for me and I will take it into my humble consideration. Signing off, Magus
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
So far the story line is interesting. Put me in mind of Toriko. But different characters, one you will grow with from youth. This story has potential to be hunger inducing. I look forward to the character and story development.
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First congratulations on winning writing prompt 34! I really like the approach to the novel so far and it’s flow. The only wish I have is if you could have the chapter be longer and increase the releases!
This is simply an amazing novel. It slowly draws you in by introduce the dark continent and then you are thrown into the gourmet world! Pls update the novel faster, I hate waiting to read this master piece.
more chapters pls and just curious did you draw this picture or dis you copy it if you copied it can i know where you copied it from cause it looks interesting
Really creative and dareing author he made a novel based on toriko and so far he is doing great I love this novel and hope it will have more chaps soon I have already given all my power stones to him
Hey guys, this is obviously another 5 star shameless author post. I hope you give my novel a chance and actually read it without hesitation. Please feel free to give me any advice you have for me and I will take it into my humble consideration. Signing off, Magus
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.