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Super awesome. Enjoyed this novel immensly! Cant wait for more! People, just read this. Its very entertaining. Author-sama does not do things for no purpose. Everything is planned! Its almost like watching Det.Conan with the amazing and thought out plans[just better]. Simply awesome.
Mostly clean but some miss spelling easy to overlook all in all it’s a great story. Try reading this story and help giving ideas, the author has a wonderful imagination which gives life to this story and keeps you coming back for more. I admit the fights were drawn out but it made me more attentive to small details also how he explains the plans which mind fucks you like WoW that actually makes sense and how everything the MC did some how had a meaning from the very beginning of the story I mean the very beginning 😂 that actually has an effect later on in the story. Overall in my book it’s perfect just because this story took up my entire week and I don’t mind spelling errors since he does fix it. THANK YOU AUTHOR I HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY AND THE UPCOMING DEVELOPMENTS OF BROLY🙏😁.
this novel was super fun. also no harem only 1 wife, so its even better. the beginning chapters until after North kai are a little bad with constant info dumps that are actually somehow nice to have??? and pranks, but afterward, it picks up and gets really fun. it's also really well thought out overall in terms of plot,abilities,logic, and other details that didn't lower my IQ to that of an amoeba like other novels. the only negative points that are a constant are spelling and grammar. It's totally readable overall, but it happens so often that I just gave up being bothered and accepted my fate. ***spoiler*** i just wish he would have explored his own universe a little more, even with just his wife or kids, because kind of just there as the hq for all his planning. also, I didn't enjoy his movie presentation for courting his wife since it felt like he was just going to use her like a tool in some joke/prank but thankfully he didnt, so I just skipped that stuff. also fuck the android saga of this novel (even though i still read it), the whole arc was a fucking draaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggg.
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una chimba la capacidad de mantener leyendo explicaciones ultra largas e innecesarias de poderes de fantasia es increible
RIP to one of the greatest mangaka's there ever was. bro did not deserve to die like that man. it was not a fitting ending for someone as great as him, he made us had a fun and amazing childhood and even thought us many things, and now? he dead!!!
This is the first review that I have given in this app, thus I dont know exactly what to say or how to say, I simply want to express the immense joy and happiness this story has bring me and wanted to share with other people. This is one if not the best fanfic I have read till date, everything that makes up this masterpiece of literature gives of a felling of almost perfection, although nothing is perfect, this story has a few little flaws that are a little less fantastic. But even with all of this I wanted to give my most sincere thanks to the author for taking his time to write this, and more for sharing his work for everyone to see. Thank you
this was pretty good in the beginning but as we go on things got more and more boring 💀💀 and the mc has too many abilities that he will never even used , also for me just dragon ball was enough no need to add any other external things cause I am sick of such fan fiction
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just minor misgender of people at times but all in all it was a good read one of the best for me[img=Loving it]
Grammar isn't that great. plot is ok. Mc is so good..(would've been better with better grammar) hard to enjoy but if u get past the bad grammar you might just like it.
masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece
Me encantó no es por nada pero sin ser lamebotas es la novela que más ma a gustado hasta ahora con decirte q esta es la tercera ves q la leo completa en otras palabras es un fanfic a faltado un mejor término una chulada
One word - masterpiece. It was very entertaining, and now that you published one piece I am def going to read that next xd The only problem I have is that I still don't know who "tenchi muyo" is and how he was so important for his plan, other than that - perfect!
The Story is 50% explaining FANTASY SUPER POWERS like sience 40% Mc being an Ideot making joks like a real 5 years old Child even if he is around 30 years old 9% is him beliving that he is untouchebal and being lazy 1% is OK and he acts like someone in a univers with Planet destroying villians
pretty good, one of the better dbz fanfics ive read on this site, which is saying something seeing as how many there are on this site lol lol. Its pretty well interesting, good plot, decent characters, I like it quite a bit yeah yeah
I won't say anything other than this was probably the best Dragon Ball fanfic and the fact that the MC has the perfect ideology in everything is just amazing
evil and Ruthless mc. some problems are there. but not big. you can enjoy it, you just need patience. and if you have a very unique taste, then ig don't try it. I am same, but I got a bit of patience too 😂 so I can read through problems that I don't like. sometimes.
this is the best mc in all ff I've read so far💗💗💗 ......................................................................................................................................
Feliz de terminar una novela desde que empezó casi :) Gracias y saludos a todos Buena novela de comedia mas que todo y cumplimiento de deseos después del primer arco pero buen argumento y entretenimiento
This is the funniest fanfiction i have ever read. Even after reading it a few times i still laugh uncontrollable. I highly recommend it......
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Yeah, I just read first 2 chapters and I......... dropped it. The whole talk between MC and Power giver just irritated me beyond comparison. So here I am relieving my frustration that I just got from these 2 chapters. NVM just relieving myself.
I read about 2 chapters before getting tired of the horrible grammar, punctuation, plot and basically everything else.
Is there any romance not reading this yet but I would like some romance harem even[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Volvi a leer este fanfic y sigue encantandome como si fuese la primera vez que lo leo, es una de las pocas historias de dragon ball que realmente me entretuvieron hasta el punto de terminarlas
I can't believe this story has finally come to an end. It was one of the first novels I started reading when I joined this site. It's unfortunate to see it go, but it's been a fantastic journey. Thank you! :D
Best ever, DBZ (Dragon Ball Z) fan-fiction I would ever read, I'm not going to be relaying information to how good it is, cause it won't you curious to how addicting this drug is, I am already addicted へ(゜∇、°)へ
Super awesome. Enjoyed this novel immensly! Cant wait for more! People, just read this. Its very entertaining. Author-sama does not do things for no purpose. Everything is planned! Its almost like watching Det.Conan with the amazing and thought out plans[just better]. Simply awesome.
Mostly clean but some miss spelling easy to overlook all in all it’s a great story. Try reading this story and help giving ideas, the author has a wonderful imagination which gives life to this story and keeps you coming back for more. I admit the fights were drawn out but it made me more attentive to small details also how he explains the plans which mind fucks you like WoW that actually makes sense and how everything the MC did some how had a meaning from the very beginning of the story I mean the very beginning 😂 that actually has an effect later on in the story. Overall in my book it’s perfect just because this story took up my entire week and I don’t mind spelling errors since he does fix it. THANK YOU AUTHOR I HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY AND THE UPCOMING DEVELOPMENTS OF BROLY🙏😁.
this novel was super fun. also no harem only 1 wife, so its even better. the beginning chapters until after North kai are a little bad with constant info dumps that are actually somehow nice to have??? and pranks, but afterward, it picks up and gets really fun. it's also really well thought out overall in terms of plot,abilities,logic, and other details that didn't lower my IQ to that of an amoeba like other novels. the only negative points that are a constant are spelling and grammar. It's totally readable overall, but it happens so often that I just gave up being bothered and accepted my fate. ***spoiler*** i just wish he would have explored his own universe a little more, even with just his wife or kids, because kind of just there as the hq for all his planning. also, I didn't enjoy his movie presentation for courting his wife since it felt like he was just going to use her like a tool in some joke/prank but thankfully he didnt, so I just skipped that stuff. also fuck the android saga of this novel (even though i still read it), the whole arc was a fucking draaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggg.
Revelar Spoiler una chimba la capacidad de mantener leyendo explicaciones ultra largas e innecesarias de poderes de fantasia es increible
RIP to one of the greatest mangaka's there ever was. bro did not deserve to die like that man. it was not a fitting ending for someone as great as him, he made us had a fun and amazing childhood and even thought us many things, and now? he dead!!!
This is the first review that I have given in this app, thus I dont know exactly what to say or how to say, I simply want to express the immense joy and happiness this story has bring me and wanted to share with other people. This is one if not the best fanfic I have read till date, everything that makes up this masterpiece of literature gives of a felling of almost perfection, although nothing is perfect, this story has a few little flaws that are a little less fantastic. But even with all of this I wanted to give my most sincere thanks to the author for taking his time to write this, and more for sharing his work for everyone to see. Thank you
this was pretty good in the beginning but as we go on things got more and more boring 💀💀 and the mc has too many abilities that he will never even used , also for me just dragon ball was enough no need to add any other external things cause I am sick of such fan fiction
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just minor misgender of people at times but all in all it was a good read one of the best for me[img=Loving it]
Grammar isn't that great. plot is ok. Mc is so good..(would've been better with better grammar) hard to enjoy but if u get past the bad grammar you might just like it.
masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece masterpiece
Me encantó no es por nada pero sin ser lamebotas es la novela que más ma a gustado hasta ahora con decirte q esta es la tercera ves q la leo completa en otras palabras es un fanfic a faltado un mejor término una chulada
One word - masterpiece. It was very entertaining, and now that you published one piece I am def going to read that next xd The only problem I have is that I still don't know who "tenchi muyo" is and how he was so important for his plan, other than that - perfect!
The Story is 50% explaining FANTASY SUPER POWERS like sience 40% Mc being an Ideot making joks like a real 5 years old Child even if he is around 30 years old 9% is him beliving that he is untouchebal and being lazy 1% is OK and he acts like someone in a univers with Planet destroying villians
pretty good, one of the better dbz fanfics ive read on this site, which is saying something seeing as how many there are on this site lol lol. Its pretty well interesting, good plot, decent characters, I like it quite a bit yeah yeah
I won't say anything other than this was probably the best Dragon Ball fanfic and the fact that the MC has the perfect ideology in everything is just amazing
evil and Ruthless mc. some problems are there. but not big. you can enjoy it, you just need patience. and if you have a very unique taste, then ig don't try it. I am same, but I got a bit of patience too 😂 so I can read through problems that I don't like. sometimes.
this is the best mc in all ff I've read so far💗💗💗 ......................................................................................................................................
Feliz de terminar una novela desde que empezó casi :) Gracias y saludos a todos Buena novela de comedia mas que todo y cumplimiento de deseos después del primer arco pero buen argumento y entretenimiento
This is the funniest fanfiction i have ever read. Even after reading it a few times i still laugh uncontrollable. I highly recommend it......
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Yeah, I just read first 2 chapters and I......... dropped it. The whole talk between MC and Power giver just irritated me beyond comparison. So here I am relieving my frustration that I just got from these 2 chapters. NVM just relieving myself.
I read about 2 chapters before getting tired of the horrible grammar, punctuation, plot and basically everything else.
Is there any romance not reading this yet but I would like some romance harem even[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Volvi a leer este fanfic y sigue encantandome como si fuese la primera vez que lo leo, es una de las pocas historias de dragon ball que realmente me entretuvieron hasta el punto de terminarlas
I can't believe this story has finally come to an end. It was one of the first novels I started reading when I joined this site. It's unfortunate to see it go, but it's been a fantastic journey. Thank you! :D
Best ever, DBZ (Dragon Ball Z) fan-fiction I would ever read, I'm not going to be relaying information to how good it is, cause it won't you curious to how addicting this drug is, I am already addicted へ(゜∇、°)へ