/ Sci-fi / Tactical RPG World
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One fine day, lordol have a dream on preregistered of the certain event, on the next day, he suddenly noticed that his world took a drastic change.
From its earlier peacefulness, he found himself in a world that seemed a dungeon with no escape, where everyone seeks for a safe zone, either by paying, stealing, or building one by using hunt materials earned through their fight for survival.
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Really recommend an editor so that the flow of the story isn’t interrupted. Should at least re-read so that sentences are properly made. ********************
nice description. i am expecting more from you. if you want to take a break .be sure to tell us. atleast we won't be bored waiting for new chapter
I cannot say whether it is the writer or translator that is to blame, but this work needs help. Badly. Weak character design and poorly translated. Still unable to figure out what direction this story will take. From the story element changes from chapter to chapter it feels more 'crown sourced' than anything.
Tem uma cara muito boa, pena que essa imagen de perfil é muito escrota, favor mudar, a inspiração é legalzinha, continue nessa obra bro.... tem meu apoio moral. Açúcar com pão, tem assento no u de açúcar, favor lembrar disso, pois é muito importante na hora de ffazer um bolo açúcarado
It needs an editor badly. I don't even want to look at it. One star with no exceptions. Not even the synopsis is immune, at least use grammarly.
The world that the Mc KNOWS . have to change into A RPG world, read on how he do and what he do in such a world Comedy, GAME ELEMENTS , Original, semi pure hack and slash
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This book REALLY needs someone more fluent in English proofing it. Great concept for the book, but the language makes it very difficult to continue reading.
good read. quite interesting concept. hope for more. please write more. don't stop writing! he also has a map of his book, most people don't.
Volume 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1
- 1 Prologue (Pre-registered of Cards)(Improved flow) 6 years ago
- 2 Chapter 1 (To me it is just a hoax?) 6 years ago
- 3 Chapter 2 (Zombies Apocalypse shows begin) 6 years ago
- 4 Chapter 3 (Tutorial) 6 years ago
- 5 Side story on situation of the world 6 years ago
- 6 Chapter 4(Update aftermath and some side story) 6 years ago
- 7 Chapter 5(Clearing the walkway) 6 years ago
- 8 Chapter 6(Owning the floor) 6 years ago
- 9 Chapter 7(Retailing Shop) 6 years ago
- 10 Chapter 8(Mass clearing part 1 and side story) 6 years ago
- 11 Chapter 9(Mass clearing part 2) 5 years ago
- 12 Chapter 10(Mass clearing part 3) 5 years ago
- 13 Chapter 11(Mass clearing part 4) 5 years ago
- 14 Chapter 12(Resting and restocking part 1) 5 years ago
- 15 Chapter 13(Resting and restocking part 2)(R18+ warning) 5 years ago
- 16 Chapter 14(Resting and restocking part 3) (bad words and 18+) 5 years ago
- 17 Current list of status 5 years ago
- 18 Chapter 15 (The uprising of the heroes part 1) 5 years ago
- 19 Chapter 16 (The upraising of the heroes part 2)(R18+) 5 years ago
- 20 Chapter 17 (Let explore the inn part1) 5 years ago
- 21 Chapter 18 (Let explore the inn part2)(Sexual content) 5 years ago
- 22 Chapter 19 (The Recycled Survivors) 5 years ago
- 23 Chapter 20-25 (Multiple fronts offense) 5 years ago
Volume 2
- 24 Prologue to next update (18+) 5 years ago
- 25 Chapter 26 (New update)(18+) 5 years ago
- 26 Chapter 27 (happy day) 5 years ago
- 27 Chapter 28 (Training days) 5 years ago
- 28 Chapter 29 (milk?) 5 years ago
- 29 Chapter 30 (Continue the training) 5 years ago
- 30 Chapter 31 (Clearup the floors) 5 years ago
- 31 Not a chapter (merry xmas) 5 years ago
- 32 Chapter 32 (Final building clearance) 5 years ago
- 33 Chapter 33 and 34 (New foreseen threats) 5 years ago
- 34 Chapter 35 and 36 (Back to safe zone/pestoid pov) (18+) 5 years ago
- 35 Chapter 37 (Ambushing enemies construction?) 5 years ago
- 36 The Vending Machine advertisement 5 years ago
- 37 Chapter 38 (Watching the trench battle) 5 years ago
- 38 Chapter 39 (War with the pestiods) 5 years ago
- 39 Chapter 40 (Understanding your enemies and night raid) 5 years ago
- 40 Not a chapter 5 years ago
- 41 Rebuilding and preparing for revenge part 1 5 years ago
- 42 (Rebuilding and preparing for revenge part 2)(Merging of milk farm and building a more stable foundation for future generation) 5 years ago
- 43 (Rebuilding and preparing for revenge) 5 years ago
The story seems interesting enough from what I've read, however the author clearly needs an editor and someone who can help him with overall sentence structure. This clearly isn't the authors first language however there is potential in the novel, he just needs someone to brush up the errors he's made, as long as someone can help him with editing then I see potential for the novel.