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Coliousthegod

I honestly like this novel it's new and different a world born out of peoples imagination taking in diffrent legends, games and the like the mc's personality it fine yes he's racist but a good 80% of people are

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RogueHero02

Another Racist and nationalist chinese novel 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

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Matrixshado

the idea behind the story is great a desolate dust filled alternate world full of monsters where people randomly find themselves in. But the plot, characters, pace and overall story is shit. the typical brain dead Chinese MC who sucks plot armour's Dick along with the typical CHinese racism policy, all women are weak policy, every female fall for the MC and focusing on the most ridiculous things. this story would be far better if it was rewritten by someone not from china but has knowledge of china

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Kenlinvert1

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Byluffy02

Pls no Stop ?????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????

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sinergia_teps

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Daoist1rvBov

Hi , This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “The City of Terror ”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via tynan@ringdomstory.com , then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan

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Chiu11

This is tynan, a representative editor from Stary, which owns ℜ𝔦𝔫𝔤𝔡𝔬𝔪 and 𝔇𝔯𝔢𝔞𝔪𝔢. I love the idea of your book.So I 'd like to invite you to distribute your work on our platform. A generous offer awaits you. If you are interested, please contact me via this email: 𝕥𝕪𝕟𝕒𝕟@𝕣𝕚𝕟𝕘𝕕𝕠𝕞𝕤𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕪.𝕔𝕠𝕞

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WinnieLePooh

It was good, but then the mc started to save more and more people, and even invited the people who hated him into a team, that's a humungous liabity this guy is so idiot that he doesn't even know how to distribute stat points, he doesn't put any into intelligence until like chapter 80 because he realised that his body was getting unstable and that his brain was the size of a sperm, heck he starts off with 7 thats the high end for humans but it is so small it is retarded oh god

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lunna
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Not the best i've read so far, but i like the story. I don't know why people said that this novel is bad, but i like this novel. I prefer novel like this one rather than a repetitive novel commonly found in cultivation novel. Cultivation is all about cultivate to show the world that the mc is strong, to prove that they are not a criple, tournamen and someone easily getting offended, either by losing at the tornamen or just because the mc talked to the girl they like. And the cycle keep going like that. That is why i like this story, though the update is not stable.

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0Thatonedude

Really enjoy the plot and worldbuilding in this story. Though the MC seems to not think things through and could have made better decisions. Overall love the story. Hoping for more updates!

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kyletaylor719

Love it alot, it's a fun book to read, it's really taught me alot about Chinese lore, myths and gods,l. I would recommend this to anyone that can ignore some sexism and racism

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spirithunter

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spirithunter

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Alan10
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Hmmm.. I'm at chapter 29 and I already feel bored of this story. I think to myself what's the point of the Dust World when he just returns to a normal world with more strength. This story would be more interesting if he originally live in a world where everyone had powers and he has the help of the dust world to increase his capabilities (although that would be another typical story lol)

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spirithunter

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Shadow_lord689

Pretty good if I must say so myself, yet its mediocre with its normal plot and boring story if there isn't much meat I.e. fighting, I almost dropped it a few times, but I continued because I thought it isn't too too bad

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spirithunter

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ShadowVortex

Good book. Good story building. Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp

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spirithunter

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spirithunter

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spirithunter

I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.

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Coliousthegod

I honestly like this novel it's new and different a world born out of peoples imagination taking in diffrent legends, games and the like the mc's personality it fine yes he's racist but a good 80% of people are

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oliviaringdom

$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email:luffyringdom@gmail.com

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RogueHero02

Another Racist and nationalist chinese novel 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

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Matrixshado

the idea behind the story is great a desolate dust filled alternate world full of monsters where people randomly find themselves in. But the plot, characters, pace and overall story is shit. the typical brain dead Chinese MC who sucks plot armour's Dick along with the typical CHinese racism policy, all women are weak policy, every female fall for the MC and focusing on the most ridiculous things. this story would be far better if it was rewritten by someone not from china but has knowledge of china

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Kenlinvert1

Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!

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Byluffy02

Pls no Stop ?????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????

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sinergia_teps

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Daoist1rvBov

Hi , This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “The City of Terror ”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via tynan@ringdomstory.com , then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan

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Chiu11

This is tynan, a representative editor from Stary, which owns ℜ𝔦𝔫𝔤𝔡𝔬𝔪 and 𝔇𝔯𝔢𝔞𝔪𝔢. I love the idea of your book.So I 'd like to invite you to distribute your work on our platform. A generous offer awaits you. If you are interested, please contact me via this email: 𝕥𝕪𝕟𝕒𝕟@𝕣𝕚𝕟𝕘𝕕𝕠𝕞𝕤𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕪.𝕔𝕠𝕞

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WinnieLePooh

It was good, but then the mc started to save more and more people, and even invited the people who hated him into a team, that's a humungous liabity this guy is so idiot that he doesn't even know how to distribute stat points, he doesn't put any into intelligence until like chapter 80 because he realised that his body was getting unstable and that his brain was the size of a sperm, heck he starts off with 7 thats the high end for humans but it is so small it is retarded oh god

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lunna
LV 14 Badge

Not the best i've read so far, but i like the story. I don't know why people said that this novel is bad, but i like this novel. I prefer novel like this one rather than a repetitive novel commonly found in cultivation novel. Cultivation is all about cultivate to show the world that the mc is strong, to prove that they are not a criple, tournamen and someone easily getting offended, either by losing at the tornamen or just because the mc talked to the girl they like. And the cycle keep going like that. That is why i like this story, though the update is not stable.

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0Thatonedude

Really enjoy the plot and worldbuilding in this story. Though the MC seems to not think things through and could have made better decisions. Overall love the story. Hoping for more updates!

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kyletaylor719

Love it alot, it's a fun book to read, it's really taught me alot about Chinese lore, myths and gods,l. I would recommend this to anyone that can ignore some sexism and racism

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spirithunter

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spirithunter

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Alan10
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Hmmm.. I'm at chapter 29 and I already feel bored of this story. I think to myself what's the point of the Dust World when he just returns to a normal world with more strength. This story would be more interesting if he originally live in a world where everyone had powers and he has the help of the dust world to increase his capabilities (although that would be another typical story lol)

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spirithunter

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Shadow_lord689

Pretty good if I must say so myself, yet its mediocre with its normal plot and boring story if there isn't much meat I.e. fighting, I almost dropped it a few times, but I continued because I thought it isn't too too bad

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ShadowVortex

Good book. Good story building. Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp

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spirithunter

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spirithunter

I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.I bet Master Lin is eating popcorn observing the kids run lol.

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