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I will be honest i have read up to 80 chapter. It was great up to ch 30 i guess. But after that plot are starting to rush so fast that it start to mess up.Some plot appear out of nowhere to the point of making my chest tight and suffocated. And mc character i am alittle disappointed, i thought i will see omnipotent and sharpsight characters. And yet mc is op and not op either at the same time. and chapters after ch 69 i drop it at ch 80. cause of too much plot armor i can see with just a glance.
I like it. Filler<................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................>
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am i the only one who hates seeing fireball in cultivation novel////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Author we getting updates on this again? Just wanted to check in on you! Know you’ve had it rough with everything going on! Anyways great story and still reading!
Awesome story! Ill be supporting you starting next month! We really do appreciate creative authors who are passionate yet they do it for free. Thank you!
so I think the title is a little misleading as well as the description. I mean the mc is strong and he does get more kids as the story goes on it's just at such a slow pace that after reading so far it doesn't feel it fits but it feels like the story is shaping up to become omnipotent father rather than starting as one. this could also be my misconception of the tittle and description tho. as for the story. although there are mistakes it's still readable and you can understand the book but one thing I have to say that is quite frustrating is the constant changing of terms like sword heart sword core or the different levels of comprehension between the levels of the sword. it constantly changes names throughout the book and I understand it was because the author was deciding on different names and solidifying the ideas of the power levels throughout the book and will probably be fixed later it still remains frustrating a little bit. other than that I can say it's rough around the edges and can be tempered after the story is done and it will become much greater when that happens it just depends on your patience to wait for it to finish or follow along as it's released. as a binge reader I'll probably poke around after it has a couple hundred more chapters. great work author and keep it up!
Light read, turn off the brain. Even though no development at all, its still good for passing time. Anyway, keep up and thanks for the update and chapter 😊👍.
dear author thank you for the update. the story very nice!!!!!!!!!!!.need more☺👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
it has spice and love and cute Aiqing [img=update][img=update][img=update] it is so much fun and attitude, it made my day i am still reading...
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Writing quality is readable at best, it just doesn't flow, the plot is forced and most of the beginning you dont even understand what's happening, the transitions of the story is sup par. also the way the author portrays the mc is... just *a know it all brat* literally he has no depth as a character besides being perverted. The side characters have no background what so ever. they are introduced somewhat haphazardly. Overall my rating is around 2 stars because it's a crap cliche of a novel.
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I'm at chapter 163 writing quality 3 stars story development 3 stars character design 2 stars update stability 5 stars world background 3 stars why I didn't like the story all people besides mc gain power while he's still in beginning stages of cultivation. he's by no means weak due to.... cough...plot armour(heaven defying skills and techniques). but his low cultivation still invites trouble all the time. and every time he deals with a higher tier enemy(whom his wife or daughter can easily squeeze to death), he struggles a lot hurting himself all the time. truly an incompetent mc. the author is not nerfing the mc, he is supernerfing the mc. and I don't like it. I hanged on up to this chapter using my sheer will and belief that the author will make amends. but nothing happened. so it's bye bye for me..... sigh another one going out of reading list
the best book ever we have all of it in this book . . for the first book the story bout how he overcome his past and when his baby girl come out we didnt get to see the the father side of him but slowly but surely after reading it more and more we can see the father love to his kids hehhe
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The book is great no doubt It, the idea Is awesome World background excellent One problem the Author Nerfed the mc for no apparent reason for 100 chapter. He turned something with great potential to something turning trashy with an mc that's always the underdog like we've no seen this before.
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Just found out about this book, the story is good thank you uncle author. Oh right, is supreme martial system dropped? my friends and i really like the story...
It was a good story until 80ish chapters, feels i wasted my time reading this book then suddenly mc goes to a new world and forgot the previous one. Sorry to say but not a fan of this kind of development. Dropped.
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solid story. probably deserves a bit better than 4.0 but i couldn't figure out a good place go bump up. as the author states, there are grammar and spelling errors but it is readable. the story so far is different from other cultivation novels and father/daughter novels. so far so good (60 chapters in.)
I will be honest i have read up to 80 chapter. It was great up to ch 30 i guess. But after that plot are starting to rush so fast that it start to mess up.Some plot appear out of nowhere to the point of making my chest tight and suffocated. And mc character i am alittle disappointed, i thought i will see omnipotent and sharpsight characters. And yet mc is op and not op either at the same time. and chapters after ch 69 i drop it at ch 80. cause of too much plot armor i can see with just a glance.
I like it. Filler<................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................>
i love the story so pleasss...... make another episode..... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Revelar Spoiler am i the only one who hates seeing fireball in cultivation novel////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Author we getting updates on this again? Just wanted to check in on you! Know you’ve had it rough with everything going on! Anyways great story and still reading!
Awesome story! Ill be supporting you starting next month! We really do appreciate creative authors who are passionate yet they do it for free. Thank you!
so I think the title is a little misleading as well as the description. I mean the mc is strong and he does get more kids as the story goes on it's just at such a slow pace that after reading so far it doesn't feel it fits but it feels like the story is shaping up to become omnipotent father rather than starting as one. this could also be my misconception of the tittle and description tho. as for the story. although there are mistakes it's still readable and you can understand the book but one thing I have to say that is quite frustrating is the constant changing of terms like sword heart sword core or the different levels of comprehension between the levels of the sword. it constantly changes names throughout the book and I understand it was because the author was deciding on different names and solidifying the ideas of the power levels throughout the book and will probably be fixed later it still remains frustrating a little bit. other than that I can say it's rough around the edges and can be tempered after the story is done and it will become much greater when that happens it just depends on your patience to wait for it to finish or follow along as it's released. as a binge reader I'll probably poke around after it has a couple hundred more chapters. great work author and keep it up!
Light read, turn off the brain. Even though no development at all, its still good for passing time. Anyway, keep up and thanks for the update and chapter 😊👍.
dear author thank you for the update. the story very nice!!!!!!!!!!!.need more☺👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
it has spice and love and cute Aiqing [img=update][img=update][img=update] it is so much fun and attitude, it made my day i am still reading...
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Writing quality is readable at best, it just doesn't flow, the plot is forced and most of the beginning you dont even understand what's happening, the transitions of the story is sup par. also the way the author portrays the mc is... just *a know it all brat* literally he has no depth as a character besides being perverted. The side characters have no background what so ever. they are introduced somewhat haphazardly. Overall my rating is around 2 stars because it's a crap cliche of a novel.
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I'm at chapter 163 writing quality 3 stars story development 3 stars character design 2 stars update stability 5 stars world background 3 stars why I didn't like the story all people besides mc gain power while he's still in beginning stages of cultivation. he's by no means weak due to.... cough...plot armour(heaven defying skills and techniques). but his low cultivation still invites trouble all the time. and every time he deals with a higher tier enemy(whom his wife or daughter can easily squeeze to death), he struggles a lot hurting himself all the time. truly an incompetent mc. the author is not nerfing the mc, he is supernerfing the mc. and I don't like it. I hanged on up to this chapter using my sheer will and belief that the author will make amends. but nothing happened. so it's bye bye for me..... sigh another one going out of reading list
the best book ever we have all of it in this book . . for the first book the story bout how he overcome his past and when his baby girl come out we didnt get to see the the father side of him but slowly but surely after reading it more and more we can see the father love to his kids hehhe
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The book is great no doubt It, the idea Is awesome World background excellent One problem the Author Nerfed the mc for no apparent reason for 100 chapter. He turned something with great potential to something turning trashy with an mc that's always the underdog like we've no seen this before.
Shit is bad ass no Cap keep up the good work spalsh owweeee [img=faceslap]bdbdbdbsbsnznssjjxxjcndjdjsjsmdkdkskakskdkdjddjdjjcdjsjnxjsnxkskxkxkxkd
How many chapters should your book have? ................................................................................................................................
I do not know what to say anymore just thanks and more👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Just found out about this book, the story is good thank you uncle author. Oh right, is supreme martial system dropped? my friends and i really like the story...
It was a good story until 80ish chapters, feels i wasted my time reading this book then suddenly mc goes to a new world and forgot the previous one. Sorry to say but not a fan of this kind of development. Dropped.
Revelar Spoiler
solid story. probably deserves a bit better than 4.0 but i couldn't figure out a good place go bump up. as the author states, there are grammar and spelling errors but it is readable. the story so far is different from other cultivation novels and father/daughter novels. so far so good (60 chapters in.)