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He studied under gravity for 1 year and was able to raise the force of 8500?! How is that? how did the author get so nervous about his gg ? The author does not understand the Sayan family tree at all ! In short, those who love it when authors nerf themselves, then this is for you!
I think the author might be dead or something, since it's been a year since their last comment and a year for the one before. ...............
I love raditz as a character in fanfiction and in stories like these,it is interesting how raditz became stronger than goku,so please keep it up I love this story please.
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Good book.)) It is one of the best fanfic on dragonball which i found. I read this story in russian with the google translate. XD I have red the another story and here liked me too. Good luck, author. ＼(＾▽＾)／ Спасибо за труд! Продолжайте творить!)
Don’t read this novel if you’re looking for an overpowered Mc because that doesn’t exist. Raditz hasn’t done anything special other than **** up the timeline and making things difficult for everyone. He starts out at the beginning of the saiyan saga and by the Android saga...he barely achieves his super saiyan. A lot of dumb **** happens in between. He finally achieves his super saiyan transformation YEARS AFTER gohan and goku. Vegeta and Napa are still canon fodder. The reason he couldn’t go SSJ before was because his transformation is actually SSJ3 right off the bat due to his naturally long hair. Okay..makes sense right? The **** that doesn’t is...he can only maintain his SSJ state for 2 minutes max if he is in perfect condition after months of training I might add. That would’ve been fine if it was the SSJ 3 state. But no...he can only maintain it for 2 minutes if he lowers his power to a normal SSJ. 2 MINUTES! That’s it. And he can’t even overpower goku in his SSJ form without even the time restraint. I don’t know what other bull**** the author decided to add since I dropped it after chapter 50.
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Nice story dragon ball 🤣☺🤣😚😂😚😁🙂😍🙂🙂😎😣😗😎🙂😮😲😟🤒😧🤧🤡😰🤒🤢😧☠🤒😨😱🤧🤕☻🤕😨🤧😧👹☠😧🤡👹☻😨👹😰💀😵👹🤠😰🤢😵👹🤧🤥😵👹☠🤠😵☠☠😵🤡👹☠🤡😵☠👹🤡😵🤧👹🤡🤢😵😰👹☠🤡😵👺🤧😵☠🤡😵🤧👺😫🤓😞😢😢😝😞🤐😤😝🤓😞😪😞😯🙃😯😫🤑😞😮😞🤓😒😲😒😲😞🤓😒😲😞🤓🤤😞😮😞😝😞😮😴😢😞😮😒😞😮😞😮☹😞☹🤐😞🤡🤒🤡🤒☠🤒🤧🤠🤠👹🤠👹🤧👹☻☻☻☻🤡🤠😡😡🤠😷🤢
Its a good take on Raditz, he had alot of potential in dbz but it was squandered, i wish he and bardock both would appear in dbz super,but this story is so very good
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My question to is what’s up with Raditz and his Super Saiyan in your latest episodes got his ass kicked by gohan and goku Super Saiyan what I don’t understand his Super Saiyan can only last 2 minutes why is that exactly and does it give a bigger boost then a regular Super Saiyan because if it does how can he be defeated even with both goku and gohan as his base power is clearly higher then theirs and of Super Saiyan is a unique one then shouldn’t he be able to defeat them easily. Please clarify this. Thank for the chapter, though it seems it to easy for Raditz and co, do make it a bit easier plus there should be a limitation on Senzu beans.
I thought you died, and yet you come back bringing awesome good quality chapters? This was a miracle, grisly, and it gives me hope of other fanfics out there that are long since dead. A bleached multverse, and a knights will I'm looking at you.
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This novel is really good. I am having a great time reading. A fan-fic really worth trying to read. I just hope unlike the others, the author would finish this novel.
Stupid author gave mc op ability but mc can't even use it a fight properly. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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Its an intetesting story of an si/oc that is often overlooked or killed right away like reading it and while its am dbz power story its power creep is not to crazy and it keeps in the spirit of dbz of overcoming obstecals
Revelar Spoiler very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel.
Literally, a deadly virus had to strike mankind for you to resume this fanfiction, I'm still not sure if the quarantine was worth it to see your work again
Just reading the synopsis alone, I can feel that this MC will turn into Rapunzel.. 🤣🤣👌👍 ......... . . .. . . . . . . . . . .
After reading 40 chapters I have lost faith in the author thats it's just so stupid. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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I m rapidly losing interest there is no redeeming feature in this novel other than *his ss transformation which is ss3 directly/based on hair length which he hasn't reached yet, *he didn't increase his potential in any way, same goes for his untimely freezing in mid-fight or his incongruency with his body and spirit which was unnecessary *I can understand abt sin *he as an mc is passing leadership/command to anyone 1) Goku 2)Gohan 3)Trunks who is now partially dictating story by saving Vegeta and getting there after fight
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Raditz = 4.6 rating. One of the best Raditz stories. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................
He studied under gravity for 1 year and was able to raise the force of 8500?! How is that? how did the author get so nervous about his gg ? The author does not understand the Sayan family tree at all ! In short, those who love it when authors nerf themselves, then this is for you!
I think the author might be dead or something, since it's been a year since their last comment and a year for the one before. ...............
I love raditz as a character in fanfiction and in stories like these,it is interesting how raditz became stronger than goku,so please keep it up I love this story please.
please continue with the work please continue with the work please continue with the work please continue with the work please continue with the work please continue with the work please continue with the work please continue with the work
Bon roman mais ...... release .... chapt realease Besoin de réédition !!! Bon roman mais ...... release .... chapt realease Besoin de réédition !!! Bon roman mais ...... release .... chapt realease Besoin de réédition !!! Bon roman mais ...... release .... chapt realease Besoin de réédition !!! Bon roman mais ...... release .... chapt realease Besoin de réédition !!! Bon roman mais ...... release .... chapt realease Besoin de réédition !!! Bon roman mais ...... release .... chapt realease Besoin de réédition !!! Bon roman mais ...... release .... chapt realease Besoin de réédition !!!
////////////////////////////////////////////Worst mc ever boring nerfing story\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\
Good book.)) It is one of the best fanfic on dragonball which i found. I read this story in russian with the google translate. XD I have red the another story and here liked me too. Good luck, author. ＼(＾▽＾)／ Спасибо за труд! Продолжайте творить!)
Don’t read this novel if you’re looking for an overpowered Mc because that doesn’t exist. Raditz hasn’t done anything special other than **** up the timeline and making things difficult for everyone. He starts out at the beginning of the saiyan saga and by the Android saga...he barely achieves his super saiyan. A lot of dumb **** happens in between. He finally achieves his super saiyan transformation YEARS AFTER gohan and goku. Vegeta and Napa are still canon fodder. The reason he couldn’t go SSJ before was because his transformation is actually SSJ3 right off the bat due to his naturally long hair. Okay..makes sense right? The **** that doesn’t is...he can only maintain his SSJ state for 2 minutes max if he is in perfect condition after months of training I might add. That would’ve been fine if it was the SSJ 3 state. But no...he can only maintain it for 2 minutes if he lowers his power to a normal SSJ. 2 MINUTES! That’s it. And he can’t even overpower goku in his SSJ form without even the time restraint. I don’t know what other bull**** the author decided to add since I dropped it after chapter 50.
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Nice story dragon ball 🤣☺🤣😚😂😚😁🙂😍🙂🙂😎😣😗😎🙂😮😲😟🤒😧🤧🤡😰🤒🤢😧☠🤒😨😱🤧🤕☻🤕😨🤧😧👹☠😧🤡👹☻😨👹😰💀😵👹🤠😰🤢😵👹🤧🤥😵👹☠🤠😵☠☠😵🤡👹☠🤡😵☠👹🤡😵🤧👹🤡🤢😵😰👹☠🤡😵👺🤧😵☠🤡😵🤧👺😫🤓😞😢😢😝😞🤐😤😝🤓😞😪😞😯🙃😯😫🤑😞😮😞🤓😒😲😒😲😞🤓😒😲😞🤓🤤😞😮😞😝😞😮😴😢😞😮😒😞😮😞😮☹😞☹🤐😞🤡🤒🤡🤒☠🤒🤧🤠🤠👹🤠👹🤧👹☻☻☻☻🤡🤠😡😡🤠😷🤢
Its a good take on Raditz, he had alot of potential in dbz but it was squandered, i wish he and bardock both would appear in dbz super,but this story is so very good
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My question to is what’s up with Raditz and his Super Saiyan in your latest episodes got his ass kicked by gohan and goku Super Saiyan what I don’t understand his Super Saiyan can only last 2 minutes why is that exactly and does it give a bigger boost then a regular Super Saiyan because if it does how can he be defeated even with both goku and gohan as his base power is clearly higher then theirs and of Super Saiyan is a unique one then shouldn’t he be able to defeat them easily. Please clarify this. Thank for the chapter, though it seems it to easy for Raditz and co, do make it a bit easier plus there should be a limitation on Senzu beans.
I thought you died, and yet you come back bringing awesome good quality chapters? This was a miracle, grisly, and it gives me hope of other fanfics out there that are long since dead. A bleached multverse, and a knights will I'm looking at you.
very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel.
This novel is really good. I am having a great time reading. A fan-fic really worth trying to read. I just hope unlike the others, the author would finish this novel.
Stupid author gave mc op ability but mc can't even use it a fight properly. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel. good novel.
Its an intetesting story of an si/oc that is often overlooked or killed right away like reading it and while its am dbz power story its power creep is not to crazy and it keeps in the spirit of dbz of overcoming obstecals
Revelar Spoiler very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel.
Literally, a deadly virus had to strike mankind for you to resume this fanfiction, I'm still not sure if the quarantine was worth it to see your work again
Just reading the synopsis alone, I can feel that this MC will turn into Rapunzel.. 🤣🤣👌👍 ......... . . .. . . . . . . . . . .
After reading 40 chapters I have lost faith in the author thats it's just so stupid. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Revelar Spoiler I m rapidly losing interest there is no redeeming feature in this novel other than *his ss transformation which is ss3 directly/based on hair length which he hasn't reached yet, *he didn't increase his potential in any way, same goes for his untimely freezing in mid-fight or his incongruency with his body and spirit which was unnecessary *I can understand abt sin *he as an mc is passing leadership/command to anyone 1) Goku 2)Gohan 3)Trunks who is now partially dictating story by saving Vegeta and getting there after fight
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Raditz = 4.6 rating. One of the best Raditz stories. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................