Rebirth Of A Serial Killer

I enjoy the story overall, it has an interesting plot line and I am able to fathom what kind of world the author is trying to create. The character design is okay, though I believe that the protagonist is TOO powerful, creating some sort of weakness or opponent the MC can’t defeat at first. I understand that a large premise of the story at this point is that he is such a high rank, surpassing everyone in the town he is currently in, but bringing that sort of conflict would make the story more enticing, getting readers wondering what will happen next. As for the plot, I like it, though I may be a tad biased because novels about killers and what not is my personal preference. I believe the author truly has something going, and I enjoy the different species and magical classes, etc. Though, I believe the author is throwing too much in the reader’s face too quickly. If the author wants the reader to TRULY understand how everything works, the importance of certain things (Cultivation & Ancient Magic Theory for example) they should take some time to explain it, it could be through dialogue, the MC reading that book that Scar pointed out when he said that only certain people can open, etc. The updates are quite frequent and the author truly does make an effort to update regularly, and makes the chapters longer than usual if they forget a day or have an extremely sparse chapter. The quality of writing is what may throw some people off of this otherwise fun read. The author will often use the wrong “to” or “there”, personally, I am not very bothered by this, but it could become confusing for other readers and makes the novel harder to read and take seriously. Before posting, it would be best if the author did a spell check on the chapter, determining if everything is correct. Overall, I would recommend this book once it has been more fleshed out, mostly because it is still very much beginning and there is a lot left to see and develop. 3.5 stars.

I'm going to be writing an honest review of this book. For starters, this book isn't remotely perfect. It, of course, has many flaws that could be easily fixed by the author. The grammar throughout the whole book is okay, Chapters 1-10 on the other hand... Let's just say they look like you just past the fifth grade. Anyway, the character development is non-existence in the first volume. The characters are very 2d and have no emotion. Of Course, I know this story is about a serial killer. Yes, serial killers have no emotion, but that doesn't mean you make every character have no deep emotion. Next, we have my favorite. USELESS PEOPLE. Okay, people have talked about this in other reviews and in the comments. Let's all be honest here, Scar is so useless. Why is he even in the novel. How does one become a slave for someone randomly, then Zuhn thinks of him as an equal just because Scar helped him out. Charlotte, Not as useless as Scar but still useless. A random chick with a lot of power in a small town. Doesn't kill Zuhn, but later for SOME REASON gets scared of him. Legit no reason for her to become scared of him. If she is from some secret organization why is she scared of some random youth. Don't even get me started with the ****ty organization that she was in. No point in bringing her into it. Later they fight and they die, bs if you ask me. Thinking of Hencewood. What the **** is the point of the kid. Like, wtf? He's so useless he's worse than Scar. It's hard to be more useless than SCAR. Like, let's talk about this. This random rich kid hears that Zuhn killed/hurt his men. Tries to track him down, his men get killed. Now he random thinks Zuhn is some powerful guy that can be bought into his army. Like how does that work? Alright, let's stop with all of that. How about Windwood sect. Honestly, I don't understand what happened there. Like, why the **** did he become his disciple then just betray. Just because the guy had a slave doesn't mean he should betray. So stupid. Demon Wars, Like why the **** did you think that was a good idea? Like who thinks, "mmmm... Demons!" Fucking no one. The Demon war thingy was just filler chapters. The fighting scenes were dog****. No action just Zuhn stabbing them in the neck. Actually thinking about fighting scenes they were all dog****. Volume 2 Now, I'm not going to completely talk **** on the author. (I totally am.) Volume 2 is WAYYYYY better. Think of volume 1 as wet dog**** and think of Volume 2 as Dried Dog****. (Picking up wet dog**** is the worst, Dry on the other hand isn't that bad.) Volume 2 was a huge upgrade to the book. The Chapters actually made fucking sense. They were made by someone with autism. The characters were tons better! 3d ish, still kinda 2d but better than the first volume. Chapters are a lot longer and more descriptive. The ancient trial went on for fucking years. Waste of time tbh. Anywho the book is getting better and better as the author listens to his readers. Real Ratings of this book. Writing Quality Volume 1 - 2.5 Stars (Dog****) Volume 2 - 4.0 Stars (Not Dog****) Stability Of Updates Volume 1 - 5 Stars (Uploaded everyone day) Volume 2 - 2.5 Stars (Doesn't Update worth ****) Story Development Volume 1 - 1 Star (There wasn't any) Volume 2 - 3.5 Stars (At least there was some) Character Design Volume 1 - 1 Star (What Character Design?) Volume 2 - 3 Stars (There is some) World Background Volume 1 - 3 Stars (Eh, It's okay) Volume 2 - 4.5 Stars (Better than Volume 1) Coming to a total rating of Volume 1 - 2.4ish Volume 2 - 3.2ish Now the reason I'm giving my stars much higher on the site. Mostly become this book needs more people to read it. And well SOMEONE review bombed this novel. So, ima just going to make it a 5 Star review. If you are a long time reader you will understand. Make me the TOP review!

At first Zuhn was a ruthless killer, killing people for fun but after teleporting to ziom continent he has some sparks of mercy for his disciples.. But again after transporting to another world he iz same as first emotionless killer.. But still story iz outstanding

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I love love love it😃😄 Thank you author, the plot of the story is amazing and Zuhn is unstoppable which makes me love the story even more😆 the way you describe the story is something that makes the persons blood boil by reading it😆 Please keep up the good work and remember to take care of yourself two🤗

killing is just a chilplay to him. a boy at his **** who kills without batting an eye even at the court he admitt for killing 100 people and just laugh at his doing.