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I like the concept, but there is one f*cking question that has to be f*cking answered because its confusing as f*ck. IS HE A MALE!?!? The author had hinted that he was only using "he" because it was easier and sh*t, plus all the other f*cking hints like the androgynous face and b*llshit like that. What the f*ck, I know its the author's way of being mysterious and sh*t but make up your goddamn mind or just be out right with it. Not tryna be sexist or anything, but I don't really have any interest in reading novels with a female MC. Its because I just find it harder to put myself in the MC's shoes and other reasons that are related to my own immersion and preference. For now I am just going to rate the novel a 3 star because I like the notion of an op guy transported to Modern World Earth with a twist.
Simple and honestly just a fun read. It is by no means a work of literary art but the grammar is readable which is more than a lot of novels on here and my number one turnoff to stop reading a novel. I was an English major in college so I have standards for at least legible writing on this app and this novel falls into that category. I am excited to see where this novel goes as the story is interesting and is similar to Edea chronicles I think is the name of the novel. I’m high as **** and drunk but loved bingingt this in my current state.
The perfect kind of popcorn entertainment to keep you busy when you're bored and trust me that's not a bad thing. Also bonus point for short paragraphs that don't make my eyes bleed.
Really good story written by a lolicon with lolicon character for lolicon complex reader! LOL Overall its a good story with interesting plot recommended for all people to read!
Appreciate the daily update. So far I like the world that the author created. Their stability is appreciated in a world of original novels that are not reliable. I hope they don't drop this because the MC is interesting and I want to see what happens!!!! I read it daily. Keep it up author! Thanks ♥♥♥♥♥
I really love the moments with mc and his xiao ling! They’re so adorable together! Please write more of mc’s hot hot muscles. I can’t get enough of them 😍😍😍
I haven't read any chapters yet but because u update your novel everyday I'll give u 5 star rating 😃 I'll recomment after I'm done reading 10 chapters
Your shameless nyan making its way through. I had once contemplated on whether I should give myself a 5 star review, but a fellow author then asked me, “Why not? As the novels author, you should be its biggest fan.” It was as though I had finally seen the light at the end of the tunnel. Willing my heart against the possible backlashes from my beloved and potential readers, I bring to you this ultimate, once in a lifetime, totally unlike any other 5 ⭐️ review! Believe me when I say that it was one of the hardest decisions I have ever faced in my life, but as the fellow worker had said, if I am not my own novel’s biggest fan, then who is? If I did not love my own novel as though it was my own child, then what can I possibly offer my readers? So as not to be a disappointment to my readers and myself, I have done what I now rightfully consider as to be expected! I have many great things planned for this novel, and I cannot wait to bring it to you all. May we go along together on this journey of S**WS. Shameless nyan signing out 🎤
Beware of the loli! I think you know what I mean, but I don't think it could be helped. Now with this, I wish you luck in achieving the realm above the stars.
author, merun, u did good. i be shameless and give u another 5 star review i help u on ur journey to the top! btw i read up latest chapt very good novel dont overwork, with daily updates
Revelar Spoiler
Still early so we'll see how it goes but the writing is great so far and loving the story! Definitely check it out. I'll be following this novel along and getting daily chapters while it's first starting is a great start as well. 10/10
@Merun I like the story I think it should still be under magical realism most of the world doesn’t know about this and it’s only for those in the sect Also great job on the novel amazing for one per day(I could barely get one out per week)
So far I am enjoying the world. The writing is easy to understand and read. Keep it up author-nyan, thank you for a fun novel! Looking forward to more
Not enough chapters for a lengthy review but the quality of the grammar in the story is miles above some others, even in the top 20 on the originals.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I like the concept, but there is one f*cking question that has to be f*cking answered because its confusing as f*ck. IS HE A MALE!?!? The author had hinted that he was only using "he" because it was easier and sh*t, plus all the other f*cking hints like the androgynous face and b*llshit like that. What the f*ck, I know its the author's way of being mysterious and sh*t but make up your goddamn mind or just be out right with it. Not tryna be sexist or anything, but I don't really have any interest in reading novels with a female MC. Its because I just find it harder to put myself in the MC's shoes and other reasons that are related to my own immersion and preference. For now I am just going to rate the novel a 3 star because I like the notion of an op guy transported to Modern World Earth with a twist.
Simple and honestly just a fun read. It is by no means a work of literary art but the grammar is readable which is more than a lot of novels on here and my number one turnoff to stop reading a novel. I was an English major in college so I have standards for at least legible writing on this app and this novel falls into that category. I am excited to see where this novel goes as the story is interesting and is similar to Edea chronicles I think is the name of the novel. I’m high as **** and drunk but loved bingingt this in my current state.
The perfect kind of popcorn entertainment to keep you busy when you're bored and trust me that's not a bad thing. Also bonus point for short paragraphs that don't make my eyes bleed.
Really good story written by a lolicon with lolicon character for lolicon complex reader! LOL Overall its a good story with interesting plot recommended for all people to read!
Appreciate the daily update. So far I like the world that the author created. Their stability is appreciated in a world of original novels that are not reliable. I hope they don't drop this because the MC is interesting and I want to see what happens!!!! I read it daily. Keep it up author! Thanks ♥♥♥♥♥
I really love the moments with mc and his xiao ling! They’re so adorable together! Please write more of mc’s hot hot muscles. I can’t get enough of them 😍😍😍
I haven't read any chapters yet but because u update your novel everyday I'll give u 5 star rating 😃 I'll recomment after I'm done reading 10 chapters
Your shameless nyan making its way through. I had once contemplated on whether I should give myself a 5 star review, but a fellow author then asked me, “Why not? As the novels author, you should be its biggest fan.” It was as though I had finally seen the light at the end of the tunnel. Willing my heart against the possible backlashes from my beloved and potential readers, I bring to you this ultimate, once in a lifetime, totally unlike any other 5 ⭐️ review! Believe me when I say that it was one of the hardest decisions I have ever faced in my life, but as the fellow worker had said, if I am not my own novel’s biggest fan, then who is? If I did not love my own novel as though it was my own child, then what can I possibly offer my readers? So as not to be a disappointment to my readers and myself, I have done what I now rightfully consider as to be expected! I have many great things planned for this novel, and I cannot wait to bring it to you all. May we go along together on this journey of S**WS. Shameless nyan signing out 🎤
Beware of the loli! I think you know what I mean, but I don't think it could be helped. Now with this, I wish you luck in achieving the realm above the stars.
author, merun, u did good. i be shameless and give u another 5 star review i help u on ur journey to the top! btw i read up latest chapt very good novel dont overwork, with daily updates
Revelar Spoiler Still early so we'll see how it goes but the writing is great so far and loving the story! Definitely check it out. I'll be following this novel along and getting daily chapters while it's first starting is a great start as well. 10/10
@Merun I like the story I think it should still be under magical realism most of the world doesn’t know about this and it’s only for those in the sect Also great job on the novel amazing for one per day(I could barely get one out per week)
So far I am enjoying the world. The writing is easy to understand and read. Keep it up author-nyan, thank you for a fun novel! Looking forward to more
Not enough chapters for a lengthy review but the quality of the grammar in the story is miles above some others, even in the top 20 on the originals.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.