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I’ll will just put this down in one word. Amazing! I love how the story is progressing and expectations that will come to be known of the world as he explores.
This novel is intricate and rather unique than the other wuxia novels I've read. I'm extremely fond of the MC, Beta, with his very cold attitude to those he deem his experiments/enemies and warmth to his close ones. I'm hoping this novel could gain popularity just like the mc.
Loving the book, its well written, has great character development and is all together a very engaging book, my one and only complaint is it needs much much much much much much much much faster chapter releases. GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS!!!
The story is incredibly enjoyable. It plays with world and character ideas that I haven't seen on this website, and it pulls it off well. The first couple of chapters were rushed and the writing quality was poor, but that's quickly fixed. I don't really know how frequently this story updates. In the half-week since I finished it, I have seen no new chapters come out.
Truly an Awesome book, it has quite an interesting story and it has my attention. As far as the grammar goes, you might see some people saying that it bad. It's not excellent but it is at a very readable level. The first chapter might seem a bit off putting with the sentence structures being a bit awkward, but beleve me that it's really worth your time.
i think this is a masterpiece of a novel love the main reminds me of a kinder version of leylin from WMW the way the main acts even with his bagground is very interesting and makes the novel much lighter which makes it enjoyable for a wider range of readers
I haven't read this yet but based from the comments, it is supposed to be a good read and I am now excited about this(Its been ages since I saw something worth reading here). Though I could say that the cover page needs an improvement as it definitely looks an upright lizard wielding a staff if viewed from afar.
The quality is great despite a very scant amount of errors here and there. I would say the quality of writing is superb which embraces details, but doesn't stray from the story to go on long expositions. I also would love if it was released slightly quicker, but the author has stated that he like quality over quantity, I am in awe of that. Some authors just think about cranking out as many chapters as possible, but this author really takes his time as you can see with the length of his paragraphs. The story is going at a pace which leaves you satisfied and wanting more to know what happens next. Characters are unique and I'm loving the brotherhood element that is going on, which in most cases with other novels, is never mentioned or just really badly expressed with superficial relationships, but I genuinely enjoy these characters' relations. The world background is good, however, I think it's this book's weakest point, but I simply don't care! The characters and their stories are enticing enough for me to come back everyday to see if another chapter has been released. Anybody that is reading this review, give this novel a go. You won't regret it!
I'm loving this work so much I plowed through all the chapters in no time. Now I'm eagerly awaiting updates. I definitely recommend giving this a read.
I love this can you make more of this it is amazing. If you are do you know when and at what time your normal updates are the characters personality is top notch and so is storyline itself.
A nice change of pace from the usual memes. The concept of him embracing death is jhuicy as well. I jus need him to be more aloof Ecks dee.
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Truly an excellent story. The world is awesome! There were some tense issues in the first few chapters, which have since been fixed. I hope that the author continues with this and gives us hundreds- maybe even thousands- of chapters. This one has the potential to make it up there with Castle of Black Iron or Martial World. This author has a gem; however, the key to popularity- and money- on this type of site is regularity of releases. I hope that the author can regularly release 1 or 2 chapters a day. If so, this will be one of the most popular stories on qidian.
Such a good story ah..but the name is quiet crud I still like the flow of the story and suit my taste so I'll support it... Just like now I liked how you write the events and the world background. Your words is easy to understand, I'm a filipina so I'm not proficient in english but reading this is quiet good. Deep english is difficult to understand for me. Anyway thank you for your update. Pls update so quickly I'm seeing your story in the future I'll support it hehehe
Very good novel and very well written enjoying it so far I recommend it for a try.............................................................140 is to much come on now
AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO REALLY READ FIRST CHAPTER??????? I see 16 people voting 5 stars, and that made me think, "oh this must be an intressting novel". And I am now writing a review after reading 1 chapter. And usually I dont do that. But holy cow! I am so confused! Help me anyone who actually read or still reading this novel! The following notes are taking from the running text. The reason i number them all up liks this is because the very first chapter is CONFUSING. You want to captivate your writer not confuse them. All the notes below are taking from your running-text ( no paragraph divisioning ) 1.When Beta was only 2 years old, he was already made to help dissect corpses. One year later, on his third birthday, he was called into an unknown room. ( Beta is now forced as a 3 year old child to fight a death match against Gamma) 2. "Gamma wins. Leave the room to the left side." 3. "Your opponent got your eyes (Betas eyes), and you got his. Your eyes were better than his, so that's what he won in that battle." 4. "The thought of suddenly having someone else's eyes in his head shocked him greatly(Betas Point of view). Even worse is the fact that he'd lose even more parts of his body almost made him go insane. " 5. Beta leaves the room after being revived, and his father says = "He's an incredible child. Beta is much more intelligent than the other kids so far. I truly wonder how he will turn out to be. We should prepare more samples for him to fight against. If he simply beats everyone to death the moment he meets them, we won't get our desired result." WHAT? - Pretty sure Beta were the one WHO DIED? 6. The next day his father called him so he walked along the corridor, surprised that the door to the martial arts training field is still there. As soon as he arrived in his father's room he started looking around. He saw nothing but the table that he wakes up on once he dies, but this time with an addition. There's a person on the table. He looked at his father inquiringly. -"Beta, today you will learn about the art of changing your body. You will take this boys arms and take them as yours. One step at a time of course. We'll start with the left arm today so get ready to first cut his and then yours off." WHAT - Writer you are already completely writing something else. 9. "The time has finally come, he has to cut off his arm." this here is a weird sentence. - WHat do you mean the time has finally come? after 1 week? even though Beta is the only one who died? Whos arm is he cutting? Writer. feel free to hate and comment my text. But my advice is, sit down, revise your own text before you post your chapter. Or ask a friend who is good at english and read your text. This is just for your own good. Because real english plublishers will ask an editor to rework your text.
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I love this novel you should add more chapters in the near future. Since I have to have at least 140 characters in order to post this I will now list my favorite waifus 1: Chara (Undertale) 2: Mikan Tsumiki (Danganronpa) 3:Celestia Ludenberg (Danganronpa) 4:Toga Himiko (BNHA) 5:Neo (RWBY) 6:Rem (Re:Zero) 6:
i really like this novel, it has new ideas, the grammar is alot better than in other novels, it has just a great all around feeling to it. Keep it up, im looking forward to new chapters :)
keep up the good work man and I will support you all the way peace out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!""lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
I am really looking foward to see the story develop into. The systems seems to be a little different than in other stories. So far the story is interesting to read.
I can't explain enough how awesome this novel is unfolding. Trust me when I say that there are many more exciting things you'll encounter. It's definitely worth to read and a must-have in your library list with notifications on 😆
Can't describe how awesome this novel is going. It is definitely a must read. YOU WON'T REGRET IT! Like seriously! If you're tired of looking at cliche novels out there, this one is definitely a breath of fresh air for you to read on. I swear you'll be begging for more <3
This novel has gone beyond all my expectations for it and continues to amaze me. There isn’t a thing I would change about it. Keep up the fantastic work and work!
This is an great quality story. I am vey much in love with beta I mean come on I think we can all agree on that especially with his twisted past
With regards to the story it’s only missing a cultivation leveling system. As for the updates I just wish it was more often. Overall it’s a unique and great story that leaves the reader on the edge of there seat. I can’t wait to read more!!
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I'll only be more frustrated if I start reading now... Maybe I'll wait until 100chs or until it's dropped to start reading 🤔. 😴
Embora, eu n esteja lendo ainda esperando aumentar os cap, a novel parece ser muito Boa e continue a escrever 😁😁😁 rapaz esses coisa de 140 caracteres e triste em kkkkk
I love the concept and the idea behind the story is unique. Kinda tired of cliche things in a novel so please give us something more unexpected. I hope that the MC will do more badass things in the future too. Keep on going with the writing. Ganbatte!
Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140.
Estou gostando muito da historia e suas possibilidades. Obrigado. .........................................................................................
I’ll will just put this down in one word. Amazing! I love how the story is progressing and expectations that will come to be known of the world as he explores.
This novel is intricate and rather unique than the other wuxia novels I've read. I'm extremely fond of the MC, Beta, with his very cold attitude to those he deem his experiments/enemies and warmth to his close ones. I'm hoping this novel could gain popularity just like the mc.
Loving the book, its well written, has great character development and is all together a very engaging book, my one and only complaint is it needs much much much much much much much much faster chapter releases. GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS!!!
The story is incredibly enjoyable. It plays with world and character ideas that I haven't seen on this website, and it pulls it off well. The first couple of chapters were rushed and the writing quality was poor, but that's quickly fixed. I don't really know how frequently this story updates. In the half-week since I finished it, I have seen no new chapters come out.
Truly an Awesome book, it has quite an interesting story and it has my attention. As far as the grammar goes, you might see some people saying that it bad. It's not excellent but it is at a very readable level. The first chapter might seem a bit off putting with the sentence structures being a bit awkward, but beleve me that it's really worth your time.
i think this is a masterpiece of a novel love the main reminds me of a kinder version of leylin from WMW the way the main acts even with his bagground is very interesting and makes the novel much lighter which makes it enjoyable for a wider range of readers
I haven't read this yet but based from the comments, it is supposed to be a good read and I am now excited about this(Its been ages since I saw something worth reading here). Though I could say that the cover page needs an improvement as it definitely looks an upright lizard wielding a staff if viewed from afar.
The quality is great despite a very scant amount of errors here and there. I would say the quality of writing is superb which embraces details, but doesn't stray from the story to go on long expositions. I also would love if it was released slightly quicker, but the author has stated that he like quality over quantity, I am in awe of that. Some authors just think about cranking out as many chapters as possible, but this author really takes his time as you can see with the length of his paragraphs. The story is going at a pace which leaves you satisfied and wanting more to know what happens next. Characters are unique and I'm loving the brotherhood element that is going on, which in most cases with other novels, is never mentioned or just really badly expressed with superficial relationships, but I genuinely enjoy these characters' relations. The world background is good, however, I think it's this book's weakest point, but I simply don't care! The characters and their stories are enticing enough for me to come back everyday to see if another chapter has been released. Anybody that is reading this review, give this novel a go. You won't regret it!
I'm loving this work so much I plowed through all the chapters in no time. Now I'm eagerly awaiting updates. I definitely recommend giving this a read.
I love this can you make more of this it is amazing. If you are do you know when and at what time your normal updates are the characters personality is top notch and so is storyline itself.
A nice change of pace from the usual memes. The concept of him embracing death is jhuicy as well. I jus need him to be more aloof Ecks dee.
Revelar Spoiler Truly an excellent story. The world is awesome! There were some tense issues in the first few chapters, which have since been fixed. I hope that the author continues with this and gives us hundreds- maybe even thousands- of chapters. This one has the potential to make it up there with Castle of Black Iron or Martial World. This author has a gem; however, the key to popularity- and money- on this type of site is regularity of releases. I hope that the author can regularly release 1 or 2 chapters a day. If so, this will be one of the most popular stories on qidian.
Such a good story ah..but the name is quiet crud I still like the flow of the story and suit my taste so I'll support it... Just like now I liked how you write the events and the world background. Your words is easy to understand, I'm a filipina so I'm not proficient in english but reading this is quiet good. Deep english is difficult to understand for me. Anyway thank you for your update. Pls update so quickly I'm seeing your story in the future I'll support it hehehe
Very good novel and very well written enjoying it so far I recommend it for a try.............................................................140 is to much come on now
AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO REALLY READ FIRST CHAPTER??????? I see 16 people voting 5 stars, and that made me think, "oh this must be an intressting novel". And I am now writing a review after reading 1 chapter. And usually I dont do that. But holy cow! I am so confused! Help me anyone who actually read or still reading this novel! The following notes are taking from the running text. The reason i number them all up liks this is because the very first chapter is CONFUSING. You want to captivate your writer not confuse them. All the notes below are taking from your running-text ( no paragraph divisioning ) 1.When Beta was only 2 years old, he was already made to help dissect corpses. One year later, on his third birthday, he was called into an unknown room. ( Beta is now forced as a 3 year old child to fight a death match against Gamma) 2. "Gamma wins. Leave the room to the left side." 3. "Your opponent got your eyes (Betas eyes), and you got his. Your eyes were better than his, so that's what he won in that battle." 4. "The thought of suddenly having someone else's eyes in his head shocked him greatly(Betas Point of view). Even worse is the fact that he'd lose even more parts of his body almost made him go insane. " 5. Beta leaves the room after being revived, and his father says = "He's an incredible child. Beta is much more intelligent than the other kids so far. I truly wonder how he will turn out to be. We should prepare more samples for him to fight against. If he simply beats everyone to death the moment he meets them, we won't get our desired result." WHAT? - Pretty sure Beta were the one WHO DIED? 6. The next day his father called him so he walked along the corridor, surprised that the door to the martial arts training field is still there. As soon as he arrived in his father's room he started looking around. He saw nothing but the table that he wakes up on once he dies, but this time with an addition. There's a person on the table. He looked at his father inquiringly. -"Beta, today you will learn about the art of changing your body. You will take this boys arms and take them as yours. One step at a time of course. We'll start with the left arm today so get ready to first cut his and then yours off." WHAT - Writer you are already completely writing something else. 9. "The time has finally come, he has to cut off his arm." this here is a weird sentence. - WHat do you mean the time has finally come? after 1 week? even though Beta is the only one who died? Whos arm is he cutting? Writer. feel free to hate and comment my text. But my advice is, sit down, revise your own text before you post your chapter. Or ask a friend who is good at english and read your text. This is just for your own good. Because real english plublishers will ask an editor to rework your text.
Revelar Spoiler I love this novel you should add more chapters in the near future. Since I have to have at least 140 characters in order to post this I will now list my favorite waifus 1: Chara (Undertale) 2: Mikan Tsumiki (Danganronpa) 3:Celestia Ludenberg (Danganronpa) 4:Toga Himiko (BNHA) 5:Neo (RWBY) 6:Rem (Re:Zero) 6:
i really like this novel, it has new ideas, the grammar is alot better than in other novels, it has just a great all around feeling to it. Keep it up, im looking forward to new chapters :)
keep up the good work man and I will support you all the way peace out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!""lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
I am really looking foward to see the story develop into. The systems seems to be a little different than in other stories. So far the story is interesting to read.
I can't explain enough how awesome this novel is unfolding. Trust me when I say that there are many more exciting things you'll encounter. It's definitely worth to read and a must-have in your library list with notifications on 😆
Can't describe how awesome this novel is going. It is definitely a must read. YOU WON'T REGRET IT! Like seriously! If you're tired of looking at cliche novels out there, this one is definitely a breath of fresh air for you to read on. I swear you'll be begging for more <3
This novel has gone beyond all my expectations for it and continues to amaze me. There isn’t a thing I would change about it. Keep up the fantastic work and work!
This is an great quality story. I am vey much in love with beta I mean come on I think we can all agree on that especially with his twisted past
With regards to the story it’s only missing a cultivation leveling system. As for the updates I just wish it was more often. Overall it’s a unique and great story that leaves the reader on the edge of there seat. I can’t wait to read more!!
Revelar Spoiler I'll only be more frustrated if I start reading now... Maybe I'll wait until 100chs or until it's dropped to start reading 🤔. 😴
Embora, eu n esteja lendo ainda esperando aumentar os cap, a novel parece ser muito Boa e continue a escrever 😁😁😁 rapaz esses coisa de 140 caracteres e triste em kkkkk
I love the concept and the idea behind the story is unique. Kinda tired of cliche things in a novel so please give us something more unexpected. I hope that the MC will do more badass things in the future too. Keep on going with the writing. Ganbatte!
Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140.
Estou gostando muito da historia e suas possibilidades. Obrigado. .........................................................................................