My Beautiful Commander

LV 4

LadyVannadium

My ghaaad! this story is so interesting! pls. release more chapters. I really love the story esp. the main character. The development of the story is good the grammar and the every word use is good Overall. Good! Thumbs up ! The two siblings are very cute and they're so sweet ! hahaha I look forward to this

LV 15

aimej

Strong female MC ✔ Handsome & a bit innocent ML (who has never fall in love before 😂) ✔ Cute & adorable baby bro ✔ Cheecky brothers ✔ And a hell lot of a** kickin' moves by MC... Pricelessss 😍😍😍😍 Getting in love with this story. One of my accidental discoveries. Give it a try and you won't regret it. Caiyok author nim. You have turn me into a fan of yours. All the best. *Stability update ia just 4 at the mo cos I am a new reader of this story. Will update it once i got an idea of the author's updating mode. 😉

LV 5

Akaira

I really really LOVE this novel. The characters are amazing. The FemMC is not dumb. She's very smart and really strong. I always love strong MCs. The Male Lead's Family is so adorable. The FemMC's little brother is also adorable. When they appear in a chapter, it just gives me this fuzzy warm feeling inside. The ML is strong as well so that's always good. I love his brother. I love his sister. I love his father. I love his mother. His mother is awesome. Let me correct that, his family is awesome. All of them are already in the ship eventhough we are still building the ship for our couple here 😂. So that's why they're awesome. If I were you stop reading the reviews here now and start reading this treasure. You will never regret reading it. (Shameless 5* review hoping to motivate the author so I get more chapters to read............)

LV 4

Maggiee

Interesting story! Keep it up!!! Thanks for your hard work. I always read your novel and waiting for more chapters !!! Many many thanks 👍😄

LV 5

Reading_Otaku

It is good but not as good as the translated novels. The dialogues sounded awkward at times. I am not really one with describing but I can say that this is almost on par with those originals in wattpad. Examples are "Yes, I do(n't)" and "The Empress". This is only my opinion so if you really want to know, it is better to read it yourself.

LV 13

ChocoLatte

I like how the story goes and all. Just that I hope it's not one of those long story with thousand over chapters. I kind of wish the FL&ML will meet each other again(I'm at ch40)

LV 5

Lilyeddy

Omg!! My favourite character is strong mc btw three chapter is not enough for me, it seems I already addicted 😂 and keep up good work author 😁

LV 5

Ginabut

Pretty good novel its practically your female cliche heroine novel but its not cringe worthy compared to other stereotype heroine, its decent as of now that is

LV 5

GeezAmy

I have found a gem. I love transmigration novel and strong MC and cute little kid and this one takes the cake. From all the novel I have read so far this is very well written and is an original work. You got to give this novel a read and you will without a doubt be hooked.

LV 4

Mocka

I like this novel so far 😄 Cool MC , hondsome ML And cute little brother 😉 Can't wait for the MC and ML to meet again and to know how the're going to do to develop their feelings for each other 💗💗💗

LV 4

hawlol

The romance is the only redeeming quality on the story. But even that is spoiled by a single number 12. Being 12 is alright for the MC that is reincarnated but it's wrong for everyone else, specially for the Male Lead that's in love with her already. Taking a 12 year old to a whore house and making her drunk is equally disturbing. I mean... this reads like a pedophile's romance and it just feels wrong. 12 years old is a child, not a teenager, which would alredy be pushing the boundaries. All of this would be corrected by making the MC over 16, so I can't understand the author's choice on this matter, nor can I forgive him. Now for the story, like I said, the romance is good with cute moments, as long as you imagine that the MC is already a grown up with more than 16 years and 12 is a mistype. The characters are well defined and with unique personalities, which is a plus. The action part is dumb, because there's no challenge or reasoning in the battles and being an Army Doctor in the past is reason enough for the MC to be amazing at everything, including archery and spears (Don't think that's what current army doctors are good at). The author also added some form of cultivation to the novel but it's meaningless and not explained. The ML is a big martial artist with 'Qi qong' but the MC fights toe to toe with him without losing or wining and she's half his size without 'Qi Qong' or cultivation. The battles are won by her just because she's 'amazing' and that's it. In other worlds, she's the ultimate 'Mary Sue' that can do anything right without any reason or explanation whatsoever and every problem's solution just comes freely towards her, which makes the story a silly wish fulfillment tale. If you can ignore the age conundrum and like cute romance, you'll like the story, otherwise, keep away from it.

LV 13

ChocoLatte

Don't get me wrong with the amount of stars I'm giving. The story is okay with the right amount of cuteness and comedy. However, having the MC being 13 years old for the amount of chapters given at the moment, I don't think that we will get to see a proper ending for a novel that is neither contracted nor having regular updates. So far, the updates haven't been that consistent (same goes for your other novels). Up till now she is still 13 and funny thing is, she said that she intend to travel for 3years, I assume that there will be a 3years time skip with her grown up appearance and gathering flies right after he gave her the whip and bid goodbye. But noooo. I feel as tho everything is just fillers after fillers afterwards just to drag I-don't-know-what. Basically I'm dropping because I find it too draggy. It's like reading 13years old Phoenix without the romance and time skip which just drags on and on even tho the amount of chapters is already long enough. Thank you however, for making time to write. (:

LV 4

protoned

overrated. characters are ....... meh ...female lead super meh development ....... meh settings.....super meh meh meh meh meh meh meh no its not meh its more what the **** its sooooo MEH ok this is enough for character count

LV 12

sanieysa

why author not updated anymore . . waiting for this long a time ago hurm. .still not updated ? it's not to be continue ..so sad !! why why why why why why Many novel that i got interested to be hiatus.. i like this story i guess , i have to find others novel to lighten my mood

LV 11

Suzykay

I've read over a dozen similar novels, this was just one of the few. Neither unique or interesting. The characters kind of make me irritated. FL knows she transmirgrated into a 13 y/o girls body into a different time era inheriting the girls memories, yet she immediately forgets that and acts tomboyish and insensitive like modern girls do. Her 3 y/o brother is too mature for his age...i mean his words doesnt even suit a 3 y/o, I understand if he was 5+ years. In addition, the MLs personality seems all over the place. I cant seem to grip it. I had thought he was a cold, quiet and handsome kind if guy, but next thing I know hes a flirtatious guy....I understand where the author is going with the story. Theres potential, but the writing is a bit childish and character and story needs furthur development. Otherwise, its not that bad a story to read when your bored or run out if things to read though...

LV 11

taelovestata

I am so grateful that I found this novel. It's seriously so good, way more than I expected. Every chapter is exciting and thrilling. And I really love all the characters! Very well done. Well-written story that deserves a lot of appreciation. the best way to relate to the countless 5-star ratings like mine is just to go ahead and check out this story for yourself! U won't regret it❤💜 (thank me later, xx) lol

LV 14

Loidel

this novel is very nice to read but it is so sad that the author is no longer releasing chapters...i just hope that the author will not drop this novel.

LV 5

hannah_maganda

I'm hoping that the author did not abandone this story because I really like it so much. But their is still no update. Please release new chapters.

LV 10

Ampersand

The author clearly lacks writing experience. The flow of the story seems to be rushed. The MC is an army doc that has never touched a man (eye roll). The author doesn't understand human anatomy. Villains are one dimensional and lacks sense and motivation, The people helping MC is one giant ass pull out of nowhere. Because seriously, what's their motivation in helping the MC to that extent. The story is cliched and cookie cutter. Generic and boring doesn't even begin to describe the story. The novel clearly doesn't deserve to even begin to charge SS with how awful it is with its lack of editing. Conversations don't flow naturally and characters are not fleshed out. The author is clearly out of their depths and should really not even attempt to write a wuxia story as they lack the understanding of the culture and the nuances of fighting styles. Give this novel a hard miss and you won't even be disappointed. How it scored so high when it sucks so bad, I'll never know. If someone told me they bought the reviews and positive comments. I would not be surprised at all.

LV 13

tmk_ing

Am I the only one who can’t view the chapters? It says that the chapter is deleted for me. Anyone else has this problem or what? It’s been two days now and I want to catch up.