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I am so excited to see this novel! It's finally back! - 5/5 Motivations (Intriguing relationships and personal goals/desires) - 4/5 Plots (Deconstruction/alteration of typical "Become the Ultimate!", too early for sub-plots) - 4/5 World (I can't stop this stupid grin, the potential is real) Fellow Readers, if you didn't know - this novel started way back on another site. I think something happened in Real Life causing the Author to put it on hold… Yes - the Real Life Excuse. I mean, seriously! No one needs to earn money... or eat, or sleep, or go to the toilet! They are simply optional. Obviously. *Cough* This is not the first book the Author has written. (Yes, Author - your getting free publicity.) I mention it because these novels seem to share a Universe (or something similar). I was worried I needed to read the other novel first, but was pleasantly surprised that - Nope! - you don't need to read anything before. This is a novel true to itself. Thank you, Author! But I am a bit... worried. Since the novel originally only released 12 Chapters before, I can only assume that nothing has changed and this is just a mere transfer from the other site. This means that I cannot really recomm- … Wait. What did I just see? One Chapter a Day?! "Aaa-le-lu-ia! Aaa-le-" *Cough Cough* I mean - That's awesome! I'm totally stoked! Now to sit in Excruciating Agony, waiting to see the counter reach 13 (not 12) Chapters!! "Mwahaha - It finally begins!" *Ahem* Sorry. ___ For the Author ___ Recommendations: 1) Mass Release! --- at least 20 chapters, please. I have a firm and completely biased belief that all readers are Binge Readers. If we have a solid Thanksgiving Dinner first, we Readers will gladly suffer the Excruciating Agony of waiting for our next meal time no matter how ******. Like Breakfast - not cereal, but a turkey sandwich with various bits from last night's left overs… Yummy. We will gladly suffer any Excruciating Agony if we've had a good meal to sustain us and leave us curious and excited for more. *Cough* Why am I using food analogies? *Cough Cough* 2) Word Count --- around 2,000 words, please (Not a Problem here! This is really just my Personal Pet Peeve) --- Chapters are meant to be the size of a breakfast brunch (around 2,000 words) that have us reflecting on or craving for more. Not a nibbled burrito (1,400 words)! Having 10 Chapters in the counter can be misleading if they satisfy a Reader's belly for only one or two meal times. You might as well call them Pages and not Chapters at that point… Rant completed. Post Script: I seriously need to eat something. --- Thank you for bring this novel back! Let the ritual of Excruciating Agony begin!!
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Cool.... The synopsis sounded awesome though I haven't read the chapter yet but the synopsis forced me to write and also good luck to author hope that the story is also as cool as the synopsis.....
I think it is good to read entertainment. If you are free and nothing to do then read it. It is a good time pass novel. The way of storytelling is a good thing about this author so I want to say that author is created a good piece of thing.
I am so excited to see this novel! It's finally back! - 5/5 Motivations (Intriguing relationships and personal goals/desires) - 4/5 Plots (Deconstruction/alteration of typical "Become the Ultimate!", too early for sub-plots) - 4/5 World (I can't stop this stupid grin, the potential is real) Fellow Readers, if you didn't know - this novel started way back on another site. I think something happened in Real Life causing the Author to put it on hold… Yes - the Real Life Excuse. I mean, seriously! No one needs to earn money... or eat, or sleep, or go to the toilet! They are simply optional. Obviously. *Cough* This is not the first book the Author has written. (Yes, Author - your getting free publicity.) I mention it because these novels seem to share a Universe (or something similar). I was worried I needed to read the other novel first, but was pleasantly surprised that - Nope! - you don't need to read anything before. This is a novel true to itself. Thank you, Author! But I am a bit... worried. Since the novel originally only released 12 Chapters before, I can only assume that nothing has changed and this is just a mere transfer from the other site. This means that I cannot really recomm- … Wait. What did I just see? One Chapter a Day?! "Aaa-le-lu-ia! Aaa-le-" *Cough Cough* I mean - That's awesome! I'm totally stoked! Now to sit in Excruciating Agony, waiting to see the counter reach 13 (not 12) Chapters!! "Mwahaha - It finally begins!" *Ahem* Sorry. ___ For the Author ___ Recommendations: 1) Mass Release! --- at least 20 chapters, please. I have a firm and completely biased belief that all readers are Binge Readers. If we have a solid Thanksgiving Dinner first, we Readers will gladly suffer the Excruciating Agony of waiting for our next meal time no matter how ******. Like Breakfast - not cereal, but a turkey sandwich with various bits from last night's left overs… Yummy. We will gladly suffer any Excruciating Agony if we've had a good meal to sustain us and leave us curious and excited for more. *Cough* Why am I using food analogies? *Cough Cough* 2) Word Count --- around 2,000 words, please (Not a Problem here! This is really just my Personal Pet Peeve) --- Chapters are meant to be the size of a breakfast brunch (around 2,000 words) that have us reflecting on or craving for more. Not a nibbled burrito (1,400 words)! Having 10 Chapters in the counter can be misleading if they satisfy a Reader's belly for only one or two meal times. You might as well call them Pages and not Chapters at that point… Rant completed. Post Script: I seriously need to eat something. --- Thank you for bring this novel back! Let the ritual of Excruciating Agony begin!!
Sounds Like Danmachi to me.... Sounds Like Danmachi to me.... Sounds Like Danmachi to me.... Sounds Like Danmachi to me.... Sounds Like Danmachi to me....
Cool.... The synopsis sounded awesome though I haven't read the chapter yet but the synopsis forced me to write and also good luck to author hope that the story is also as cool as the synopsis.....
I think it is good to read entertainment. If you are free and nothing to do then read it. It is a good time pass novel. The way of storytelling is a good thing about this author so I want to say that author is created a good piece of thing.