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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Overall turn out to be a great story and I can it’s gonna like to see more of it later on in the future is possible to many updates one per day I am hoping praying to God again I want to be very good story I liked where it’s going I want to see this take off
im glad to see a fan fic apart from the naurto, bleach and one piece on here. i wish could see one for zoids lol anyway i really hope when he starts going against other bladers that you make the fights more decriptive the prolouges fight with naga was just dissappointing. since it was a prologue ill let it slide but i really hope you dont make it a habit. this novel has potential. granted i dont see it going beyond 500 chapters. unless you plan on making travel to other worlds i just dont see it but maybe you will surprise us readers. i look forward to your future work
A good story as of now with good potential. Hope to see much more and updates are quick as well so I suggest this novel my fellow Daoists. Well watch small errors during writing.
Well looking forward to the development of novel, Great concept and good development until now. Hope you keep it up and provide regular updates
Haven't read a chapter yet but judging from how bad the synopsis is, I wouldn't want to start reading. Fix your synopsis and start adding punctuation to it. It was basically a run-on sentence.
I kind of like this concept so hope you will do a good job regarding this and I will support you in this journey of yours, provide quick updates
Hello fellow Daoist I'm Ashurathe13th. I was watching an anime with my younger cousin regarding beyblade and I had a flash of inspiration and decided to write this novel, well its my first time ever writing anything of this sort so hope you guys like it
Best story, I sure like beyblading. I think this is a good story plot. A singer and a beyblader, great. Unlike all beyblade stories, yours has the best main character. I really hope that you could make more chapters for this book, thank you.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Overall turn out to be a great story and I can it’s gonna like to see more of it later on in the future is possible to many updates one per day I am hoping praying to God again I want to be very good story I liked where it’s going I want to see this take off
im glad to see a fan fic apart from the naurto, bleach and one piece on here. i wish could see one for zoids lol anyway i really hope when he starts going against other bladers that you make the fights more decriptive the prolouges fight with naga was just dissappointing. since it was a prologue ill let it slide but i really hope you dont make it a habit. this novel has potential. granted i dont see it going beyond 500 chapters. unless you plan on making travel to other worlds i just dont see it but maybe you will surprise us readers. i look forward to your future work
A good story as of now with good potential. Hope to see much more and updates are quick as well so I suggest this novel my fellow Daoists. Well watch small errors during writing.
Well looking forward to the development of novel, Great concept and good development until now. Hope you keep it up and provide regular updates
Haven't read a chapter yet but judging from how bad the synopsis is, I wouldn't want to start reading. Fix your synopsis and start adding punctuation to it. It was basically a run-on sentence.
I kind of like this concept so hope you will do a good job regarding this and I will support you in this journey of yours, provide quick updates
Hello fellow Daoist I'm Ashurathe13th. I was watching an anime with my younger cousin regarding beyblade and I had a flash of inspiration and decided to write this novel, well its my first time ever writing anything of this sort so hope you guys like it
Best story, I sure like beyblading. I think this is a good story plot. A singer and a beyblader, great. Unlike all beyblade stories, yours has the best main character. I really hope that you could make more chapters for this book, thank you.