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Immortal in Naruto World - Discontinued

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Autor: Ezukejyll

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Being a Ninja is hazardous in a world full of conflict and danger.
A Naruto fan dies and became blessed by the gods and reincarnated into the world of Naruto.
Can he seize power to be able to protect his loved ones? Will he become an immortal and crush his foes? Watch as he earns his power step by step and rise from the ground up.


Note/disclaimer:
This is a fanfiction based on Naruto.
All character except those that didn't appear on author work is not mine.

No infringement of these copyrights is intended, and is not authorized by the copyright holder.

All original characters are the property of Masashi Kishimoto the Author of Naruto's series and manga

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Lyrical

This Novel doesn't make any sense at all,i'm sorry. MC was 40 in his past life,he still has his memories,he watched the Anime.. So why is he so dumb??? He reincarnated as Haku's brother. We all know what that means,right? Haku is from the Yuki Clan. The Yuki Clan has a Kekkei Genkai and Kiri hates Kekkei Genkai. So the Yuki Clan will be exterminated.. Haku's mother is from the Yuki Clan while his father is a normal farmer. Haku has the Kekkei Genkai from his mother's family. When his father finds out he's terrified! Instead of protecting his family hiding this secret he brings people to massacre them. Haku's father kills his mother and then tries to kill him. Haku releases his Kekkei Genkai and kills his father in self-defence. The MC watched the Anime and knows all this. NOW he's reincarnated in this family but doesn't do anything to prevent the tragedy. He doesn't warn his mother and brother that his father will go **** crazy and will try to kill them or that Kiri will exterminate all Clans with Kekkei Genkai like theirs... NO! MC just acts like a bored kid all the time instead of taking precautions for the future. When the tragedy happens he's SAD and CONFUSED!!! Didn't Author said he knew the plot??? SO why is he sad and confused? He could've prevented all this to his family... But the most hilarious thing is that AFTER the tragedy MC acts cool knowing all the plots and characters when 5 minutes before or during his 3-4 years in Naruto World he didn't use his advantages. Does it make any sense??? The Author created a Dumb MC who can't use any of his advantages because he's too stupid. Only after the tragedy happens he rembers it!!! It doesn't make any sense! I will probably drop this Novel. Author said: ''MC has his memories,he watched the Anime.'' Yeah,right. ''Knows the plot'' my ass. Author gives MC advantages but doesn't use them at all. Why even give them to him then??? Well,if you read this Novel and you've seen the Anime then you will know what i'm talking about. You will probably get angry as well. I'm saying all this because the fact MC has memories and has watched the Anime but doesn't use his knowledge doesn't make any sense. It ruins the plot and characters. It's not fun at all... So i can't rate this Novel highly.

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6yr
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Vladmira

An idiot MC who can't use his advantages. MC knows only how to destroy the story and other characters. Many things doesn't make sense and after a while it makes you angry. No fun.

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6yr
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Urss
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Just wanted to be ur first fan because that would be very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very difficult

6yr
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Dead_and_gone

Garbage novel is a courtesy for this novel it isn't a cuss got it. Mc is stupid he is haku's brother knows plot still gets his mother killed like a true peice of **** then 5 minutes after goes over the plot acting like a smart ass the writer probably was on moon when he wrote this peice of gigantic crap .

4yr
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louisjacq

WHY are the Naruto's character behaving like chineses characters? It's allright for the mc but WTF? The other people are mean to behave like japanese character!!! Well it's really good overall.

6yr
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ShenYanxia

My choice is 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👌👌👌👍👍👍👊👊👊 ☺☺☺☺

6yr
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HentaiGod

Nice story! Looking forward to this awesome fan fic. Keep it up. Its a fresh idea for the MC to be a cultivator in the anime world so it a good idea

6yr
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SilverEmpyrean

One hidden gem out here, its a little different than "naruto" themed novels. I hope the storry progresses futher till the actual war. Anyway need 140 charc. Soo..........................

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6yr
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Albin_Joseph_9075

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3yr
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alice_76

i like it but too bad it was dropped........................................................................................................

3yr
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MartyUrsus

Really bad cultivation novel. Mc is only aloud to use qi, so the story is just a week re-enactment of a cultivation novel with a few naruto fillers.

6yr
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InnerVoice

Love it. Yfokydjtsjtstjsjtstjxjtsgkxfgvvxgxitxgxjttxjtztjxydfgdhctxhchcfychtcdxkgdjyxgjsugxktgchxciydjgctfxktdkgdiyhdychgcgjgxb bbxbxvxjfxgkxjtdhkdtfddhrdgurgxstudyeftuskyjtxkhxykcykdhcufjchhcdtichlchisjgxgixkhdiyxhlc

6yr
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InnerVoice

You did a great job on this novel but I’d wish you didn’t let Sato learn every form of energy cause that’s just too OP. I’m fine with him mastering qi and using qi in his elemental techniques like he’s been wanting to do since young. There’s no need for him to learn chi, magic, chakra.(not even possible due to his qi overwhelming his chakra), or bloodline (again impossible cause he can’t use chakra). Sato don’t even need it cause he have him and yang body, allowing him to progress in cultivation at light speed compare to others. He can also most likely able to control powerful flames and sub zero ice. So his bloodline limit is in a sense inferior to his yin qi.

6yr
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Tarhanis

Good fan fiction of naruto world with an mc using QI and not chakra. This is what made him unique compared to all others fanfic of naruto. The mc (for now) learn all by himself. Moreover the world is well depicted : Not with just bad and good guys but people who make their choices and have their own reasons (#fatherofmc)

6yr
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Ezukejyll

Going to be shameless and give myself the highest rating I think i deserve haha. Anyways somehow i'm not satisfied with the Novelcover so anyone who wants to do me a solid and propose a badass cover can message me on Discord Ezukejyll#6084

6yr
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mmuserver

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6yr
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Mr_Kat

If MC is an otaku, then why would he not know what happens to haku's family ?. Why are all otakus portrayed as idiots (MC) ?. I could somewhat tolerate the common notion of meeting "gawd" but the omnipotent being saying that MC had an accidental death is ridiculous. While this concept is new, your execution of it needs more work. The MC's method of training seems to be meditation, would it cause any trouble if he does that in home or while asleep ?. I have lots to say, but laziness won. So, i'll leave it at this. The story would be nice if fleshed out logically.

6yr
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