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- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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Really great novel even with the grammatical errors which I hope can be improved on...the mc still follow some of earth rules and conditioning even with his system and sad background and not turning into a wild beast hungry for power with lots of women and not giving a **** about anybody but himself....pls no harem just focuse on the mc changing the world for the better will not bring scientific technology to this world plz if u want romance then u can talk about mc and his wife who has captured his soul
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I already have a look through the story, I have to say, it does have great potential, all you need to do is flesh out the world a bit more and do a bit of spacing on each paragraph and it would look great.
Hi, guys, i am the author of this novel, I'm still writing in a book, after a littlele bit change the word and storyline i will publish it, I'm sorry if I've done something that made one of you angry with me I'm so sorry, I'm just a newbie trying to seek a new experience.
Hi! I've read your story and really liked it! But it is sad for me not to find any of your social medias to talk with you. As a reader, i hopw i can talk with you about the book. The plots, characters and settings all bring me such a fantastic reading experience. I can understand you are busy with your novel. But i hope we can have a chance to communicate with each other.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
More more more it really is a very great novel and plz mass release.....................................................mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Really great novel even with the grammatical errors which I hope can be improved on...the mc still follow some of earth rules and conditioning even with his system and sad background and not turning into a wild beast hungry for power with lots of women and not giving a **** about anybody but himself....pls no harem just focuse on the mc changing the world for the better will not bring scientific technology to this world plz if u want romance then u can talk about mc and his wife who has captured his soul
Revelar Spoiler I already have a look through the story, I have to say, it does have great potential, all you need to do is flesh out the world a bit more and do a bit of spacing on each paragraph and it would look great.
Hi, guys, i am the author of this novel, I'm still writing in a book, after a littlele bit change the word and storyline i will publish it, I'm sorry if I've done something that made one of you angry with me I'm so sorry, I'm just a newbie trying to seek a new experience.
Hi! I've read your story and really liked it! But it is sad for me not to find any of your social medias to talk with you. As a reader, i hopw i can talk with you about the book. The plots, characters and settings all bring me such a fantastic reading experience. I can understand you are busy with your novel. But i hope we can have a chance to communicate with each other.