The Devil WithInn (Under Revision)

LV 5

Feyr

Well, as I greatly enjoyed this read and eagerly await more chapters I shall give a review. Mind you, I shall give a unbiased (as much as possible) review with praise and critique where it is due. Let's start this like the star scores. Writing quality: Sometimes a minor weird thing pops up here and there as far as i can remember. Yet there is never a disruption in the reading flow, nor did it ever bother me. That pretty much means if there are flaws they are minor and just noticable if one looks for them. As such the quality gets a 4/5. Besides that one should remember it is an original story. Stability of updates: Here I can say very little as I started and finished reading what is there within a single day. So I shall temporarily give this an average 3/5 for now till further observation. (Yes i am stalking this novel like crazy) Story Developement: The story is very interesting yet a bit strange. How should I put it? The story does develope nicely, the pacing is good and the flow is well. Things are explained well enough and depicted good. Yet somehow it feels much easier to read then some other novels do. It is a much relaxing thing to read and does not evoke the thought of something being out of place. Basically what I am trying to say is that the story develelopement is going well up to this point. As thus 4/5 stars. Character Design: Welllll~ thats some crazy **** right there. You know when life gets hard and gets to you, and you be just like meh I don't give a fluff anymore? Thats how it feels with the characters. That is not meant in a bad way though. The characters are all different and for once, for tis one story there is no character I don't like. They all are written excellently and fulfill their roles and personalities as they should. There are no slipups on the behavioural pattern they should have due to their character. As such this gets a lot of praise from me, besides that even if very very slowly there is character growth and change. I like that it happens this slowly without changing anything major, staying true to how the characters should be and behave. As such I shall give my first 5/5 rating ever. But then again, it may just be that all those characters just fit my personality so damn well. And I just must love them to bits. World Background: Here we are, the last of the categories to rate. Lets see... This story takes its time to explain its world, yet it is not done in a bad way like several other stories do. There is neither an info dump nor is there to little. Mostly what has to be known is introduced plus some trivia and tidbits left and right along the way. As such you never really feel lost about the world, nor are you overindulged in knowledge. So it always leaves you with something new to learn or wanting to know. The pacing of explanations is nice as well so it gets a 4/5 from me. That means there may be a little to improve here and there, but by no means is it lacking anything. Its like a delicious dinner, yet it could be that tad bit better if something else was added. Nothing has to change but there is room for growth is what I am trying to say :3 Afterword: Damn me I love the crazy in that story, I love the interaction between the characters so so much as it flows and feels natural. Their behaviour and actions are awesome. By no means are they perfect characters, they all have their flaws and own weirdness but that is what makes them so awesome and lovable. Putting all that crazy and weird into a single place creates a beautiful thing which made me drop legit tears from laughing so hard. Sincerely Feyr~

LV 5

SweetPea

I literally have the chapters with all my favorite funny parts memorized cuz I've reread them so many times. There aren't many chapters so far, so I tried waiting it out. But it's absolutely no use cuz every time I see 1 unread chapter here, I forget all about waiting it out!

LV 6

Indunil

So for those who are pondering whether to read this novel or not, this is a 'DEFINITE GOODSREAD'. Once you start reading this, you'll definitely enjoy and will eventually end up looking forward for its next update. This novel is a 'FRESH' unlike those cliché reincarnation novels, with a bit of swearing (I find it to be normal) which helps one feel connected to the characters' emotions. The characters are quite different from the norm. The FL is your day-to-day hot tempered girl who tries to enjoy her way out in whatever she does (though it doesn't go well the way she wants). The main supporting characters, the way they behave, makes the reader enjoy themselves. There are a few cliffhangers and some characters are mysterious, with little hints for the moment. As for the ML, he's currently passive; he'll be active in the future updates. Overall, like in every other novel (though the way it happens is unique), the FL journeys to a different world and experiences new things and meets new people and makes bonds. Hope that you would end up reading the novel and enjoy yourselves in this small world created by the author. 😊

LV 3

KangDayong

This novel is really interesting so far. Absolutely love it!! Been laughing since the first chapter. It’s amazing how it cracks me up with every sentence that comes out of innas mouth.

LV 13

Saiexs

This novel sounds promising. A handsome man chasing the mc. Fuñl swearing can be readjusted or ignored. I just hope it wont affect the story and its characters ot just to do it to increase words. That would be awful. Also i really like the idea how she didnt believe the bullshit but got thrown to 'who knows where'. Keep it up. Please always be happy and release more.

LV 5

Meilia

I try to tread this and.. wtf is the MC crazy i feel like😂 but i like this story and plot line.. i really wan to know what will se become in another world after rencarnation though~ Oh and are the hell king will go search for her? I think yeah but let see on the next update~ i am really can't waiting for another chapther la~

I dont know where you are from but you momma raised a genius author. Your writing is simply superb. We are like two worlds apart but i feel every little bit of this book. My love for this book is deeper than the DNA. ❤❤❤❤❤❤. Before i sign out... lotsa love from Kenya.🇰🇪🇰🇪🇰🇪🇰🇪

LV 11

Inuyasha17

Love the plot Romance is slowly developing and very mysterious plot Cant wait to continue to read the story and see how the romance develops

LV 3

Bahjo016

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LV 4

IceCream_Girl

I reallly reallly love this story! The characters are interesting as well as the plot!!!!! Although the author doesn’t update frequently, the writing in phenomenal!! The story is just so interesting and I’ll always be waiting to read the next chapter! I highly recommend!!

LV 4

minyol

I love the author's energy. There are just certain auras to books that make your mood light just for picking it up 😊 The author can work a little bit more on his grammar, or better yet, just have it proofread by a friend (Freeeeeee 😂) But if you like a character who is easy to understand and relate to, try this one. I just hope to be as committed as this author in updating. Lots of love xx

LV 11

Inuyasha17

Love how the characters are developing and the story is getting more interesting Leaves you with many good questions of the characters They are just so mysterious

LV 10

amirahyon

It is actually wonderful Strictly speaking this is the first novel I've read here and believe me I loved it and I just hope to see the end soon.

LV 4

Patchuli86

Very good story line, great characters, love the fact the MC is a badass, unconventional, frontal and that many people can relate. I have to congratulate the autor for such amasing novel. It's very adictive, I just read it from the beggining to the last charter updated in less than 12h. Hope you continue this great work. (Sorry for the bad english)

LV 3

Vilaxy

This is one of the funniest novels I've ever read so far and the comedy in this story is quite refreshing, making me always laugh out loud because of the main character's crazy antics. Although the chapters were short, I hope the author would be willing to adjust it a little longer because I tend to get anxious and not satisfied once I'm at the end of the chapter (which only took me less then 20 seconds to finish it). The making of the novel is unique, unlike those other novels their MC is too OP and having predictable plots that are starting to get boring throughout the latest chapters. Honestly speaking, your my first favorite author since I started reading webnovel. Keep up the good work and I'll cheer you as a loyal fan yours truly!!!😉😉(Make sure to bring unexpected plotwist!!)

LV 3

storyobsessed

So far the story was quite enjoyable, however being a Muslim I wanted to point out that this "the Muslims had crescent and stars" is very wrong and offensive...

LV 5

NoisyFridge

Interesting MC, a well-written character who behaves consistently to his personality given to her by the author, a character rather than out of line, yet real...human. The story is interesting with some unexpected turns and the reading is pleasant and enjoyable.

LV 5

waytee

even if this story has a lot of swearing i really like it,i mean not because of the swearing but i find it interesting and quite funny the way the mc swears and curse,hahahaha