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Interesting!! Interesting!! Interesting!! Interesting!! 140 character is tiring!! Interesting!! Interesting!! Interesting!! Interesting!! 140 character is tiring!!
Add into library since it's apocalypse! Unfortunately it's hiatus!! Add into library since it's apocalypse! Unfortunately it's hiatus!! Add into library since it's apocalypse! Unfortunately it's hiatus!!
Add into library since it's apocalypse! Looking forward to the author continuing this one! Add into library since it's apocalypse! Looking forward to the author continuing this one! Add into library since it's apocalypse! Looking forward to the author continuing this one!
Daily task! You're lucky since your novel is in my library! here five star!! Daily task! You're lucky since your novel is in my library! here five star!! Daily task! You're lucky since your novel is in my library! here five star!!
Hmm... it's rare to see apocalypse novel nowadays! Unfortunately this novel is in hiatus!! Hopefully you will continue this! .........................................
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Good so far! Unfortunately the author is focused with his contracted novel! Good so far! Unfortunately the author is focused with his contracted novel! Good so far! Unfortunately the author is focused with his contracted novel! Good so far! Unfortunately the author is focused with his contracted novel! Good so far! Unfortunately the author is focused with his contracted novel!
Good so far! Hopefully you will continue this one! Good so far! Hopefully you will continue this one! Good so far! Hopefully you will continue this one! Good so far! Hopefully you will continue this one! Good so far! Hopefully you will continue this one!
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Worst grammer ever.very hard to read.worst possible MC(a dumbass made op. like meat pies falling from the sky).a ridiculous god charecter(why does he sound like a deliquent).A FRIENDLY SUGGESTION - you better stop writing bro because this ****ty novel is doomed to fail.
i like it i like i like it i likei like it i like i like it i like i like it i like i like it i like i like it i like i like it i like and i love it , i want plus i want plus i want plus i want plus i want plus i want plus
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I get the fact that you want a Overpowered hero, but, isn't that a bit too much right now ? Just the first chapter... The gifts are just too much, just make him a god already....
I'm gonna be shameless ahahah though making sure didn't went too far for 5 star ahahaha~ I quite liking my own writing, but other should feel different with my writing so please forgive my own incompetence! so feel free to give correction to comment within chapter and maybe suggestion for my story? for that, just give comment here~ thanks for giving this trashy novel time, hopefully you'll like it, and yeah i'll try to finish this here because i quite like that inkstone didn't have any error that sometime erasing my writing suddenly unlike in my past platform~ just hope there will be table feature later, and many writing feature that not there yet should be added later so we can write more comfortable but right now its comfortable enough for me bcz i didn't get my laptop heavy unlike my past platform, again~ anyways, thanks again for your time and hopefully this novel that i write will be one of new source of your enjoyment. if not, at least hopefully it will not bring any eyes or brain cancer to you because my grammar is bad ahahahaha~
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I already read this story on the royal road, but it stopped being published and I dropped it, if you are the same author, I hope you do not fall here too
Revelar Spoiler
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Interesting!! Interesting!! Interesting!! Interesting!! 140 character is tiring!! Interesting!! Interesting!! Interesting!! Interesting!! 140 character is tiring!!
Add into library since it's apocalypse! Unfortunately it's hiatus!! Add into library since it's apocalypse! Unfortunately it's hiatus!! Add into library since it's apocalypse! Unfortunately it's hiatus!!
Add into library since it's apocalypse! Looking forward to the author continuing this one! Add into library since it's apocalypse! Looking forward to the author continuing this one! Add into library since it's apocalypse! Looking forward to the author continuing this one!
Daily task! You're lucky since your novel is in my library! here five star!! Daily task! You're lucky since your novel is in my library! here five star!! Daily task! You're lucky since your novel is in my library! here five star!!
Hmm... it's rare to see apocalypse novel nowadays! Unfortunately this novel is in hiatus!! Hopefully you will continue this! .........................................
Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!Apocalypse!!
Good so far! Unfortunately the author is focused with his contracted novel! Good so far! Unfortunately the author is focused with his contracted novel! Good so far! Unfortunately the author is focused with his contracted novel! Good so far! Unfortunately the author is focused with his contracted novel! Good so far! Unfortunately the author is focused with his contracted novel!
Good so far! Hopefully you will continue this one! Good so far! Hopefully you will continue this one! Good so far! Hopefully you will continue this one! Good so far! Hopefully you will continue this one! Good so far! Hopefully you will continue this one!
MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!MOAR!!!!
Worst grammer ever.very hard to read.worst possible MC(a dumbass made op. like meat pies falling from the sky).a ridiculous god charecter(why does he sound like a deliquent).A FRIENDLY SUGGESTION - you better stop writing bro because this ****ty novel is doomed to fail.
i like it i like i like it i likei like it i like i like it i like i like it i like i like it i like i like it i like i like it i like and i love it , i want plus i want plus i want plus i want plus i want plus i want plus
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OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC OP MC
I get the fact that you want a Overpowered hero, but, isn't that a bit too much right now ? Just the first chapter... The gifts are just too much, just make him a god already....
I'm gonna be shameless ahahah though making sure didn't went too far for 5 star ahahaha~ I quite liking my own writing, but other should feel different with my writing so please forgive my own incompetence! so feel free to give correction to comment within chapter and maybe suggestion for my story? for that, just give comment here~ thanks for giving this trashy novel time, hopefully you'll like it, and yeah i'll try to finish this here because i quite like that inkstone didn't have any error that sometime erasing my writing suddenly unlike in my past platform~ just hope there will be table feature later, and many writing feature that not there yet should be added later so we can write more comfortable but right now its comfortable enough for me bcz i didn't get my laptop heavy unlike my past platform, again~ anyways, thanks again for your time and hopefully this novel that i write will be one of new source of your enjoyment. if not, at least hopefully it will not bring any eyes or brain cancer to you because my grammar is bad ahahahaha~
Revelar Spoiler I already read this story on the royal road, but it stopped being published and I dropped it, if you are the same author, I hope you do not fall here too
Revelar Spoiler
Dropped??? Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp