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A decent story but short chapters, either release more or condense these four chapters together, the only reason on me saying this is to keep readers wanting to come back if the chapters are so small and there isn’t a large amount of chapters a lot of people will drop.
Woah I prefer to read the In a different world with the Naruto system. Hahahahahahahahaha Seriously, but nice introduction ...... I'm interested to read the next because I have always loved action...
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The story isn't bad it just needs more chapter or longer chapter. The story isn't bad it just needs more chapter or longer chapter. The story isn't bad it just needs more chapter or longer chapter. The story isn't bad it just needs more chapter or longer chapter. The story isn't bad it just needs more chapter or longer chapter. The story isn't bad it just needs more chapter or longer chapter. The story isn't bad it just needs more chapter or longer chapter.
A decent story but short chapters, either release more or condense these four chapters together, the only reason on me saying this is to keep readers wanting to come back if the chapters are so small and there isn’t a large amount of chapters a lot of people will drop.
Woah I prefer to read the In a different world with the Naruto system. Hahahahahahahahaha Seriously, but nice introduction ...... I'm interested to read the next because I have always loved action...
Bad novel ALERT * 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎🤮🤮🤮🤮👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎🤮🤮🤮🤮👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎😳😳😳😳👎👎🤮🤮👎😳✋🤮🤮✋✋✋✋✋😳✋👎👎🤮🤮