Death’s Heir

LV 13

BurningSkies

So I guess I should write a review? But tbh I don’t really have anything to say. First I know not everyone will like my story, the way it progresses or the way I create my characters and that’s fine. Nothing true interesting is ever universally liked 😌 Second I don't like doing info dumps I've done in the Q&A chapters and I didn't like it but I decided not to change it, most information will be revealed as the story progresses. 😎 Third, remember Azreal was just a regular human with some paranormal powers a min ago and even tho gramps practically rewired his mind he's still that kid from the mountain town, so he isn't going to always make the best decisions that you'd expect in the beginning. 😪 Fourth I won't go around revealing things he doesn't know then when he finds out I end up spending a whole chapter on it again 😕 doesn't really make any sense to me. If you can get past that as well as a few spelling errors (that I'm correcting as I find) then give the story a try, if not then don't bother reading then coming to bitch in the reviews about what didn't like. 😬 #TIBIALTAI

LV 5

Corianderleaves

Need more chapers release. ......... Filling up space..........................More...................................................More............................More...........More........

LV 5

Kymani

Read this story from when It’s was just being posted on RRL and I really liked it so ofc am going to add a positive review P.S 😂😂 sorry about stealing your pen name

LV 6

fatloser

It good .hope it get a stable update Ghhbb;bvvvvvvvvvvvvdkyfuc xgdifoy chxkck jfyiffu jgdgdkb jzsifjfbm bxj a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a q. A q q q q q q q q f t. G g g gg. G g g f f f f f f f f d e

LV 10

Jigaru

The story seems interesting and i hope more people pick it op cant wait for more chapters keep op the good work-----------------------------

LV 5

Wofl_Man

Right of the bat, chapters one and two threw me off because they were the same chapter with different names. It also didn't help that there were spelling errors in the first paragraph either. I pushed past all of that and I got settled into the story, and I gotta say, from the beginning to where I stopped, I didn't enjoy any of it. Character development is rushed and doesn't make any sense, characters are rushed and also don't make any sense. In the second or third chapter, a character is introduced, he's the bully who apparently hates the mc the most. He beats the mc up, almost kills him, and quite literally the next chapter he's dead. Another thing is that, it's established pretty early on that the reason everyone hates the mc is because he can see when people are going to die, and he warns them to go to doctor. When they don't listen, and die he gets blamed, and when people are dropping like flies for some reason, he gets all the blame and the whole village hates him. I could go on, like about his mom's death, or his grandad showing up, but I won't, the books bad, you shouldn't waste your time. 2.5/5 for trying.

LV 6

Ashenfox

This novel is one of the best i ever read, please dont stop realeasing (but i would like to know how often is the release, after all the more the better)😄

LV 5

42n8

Ok synopsis looks really good and it looks like my cup of tea so I’ll read it when more chapters are released I enjoy binge reading 300 chapters lol

LV 5

setaskl

Love the story so far. But man the amount of misspelled words is massive lol. A couple of times i had to reread the sentences to make out what it was supposed to mean. But keep up the good work author. I lile the story and the characters are easy to remember. Hopefully you can pump out like 7+ chapters a week lol.

LV 2

M0miji

Its a good read but one of the biggest drawbacks is the huge amount of misspelled word as such i suggest that before updating your chapters you should run a through read on it to avoid such situations or you can also just have someone edit it or check it if u have someone like that

LV 14

not2complex

I was just going to read the first chapter to find out more about the plot and - didn't stop until c59. It's a great beginning, very creative and I am looking forward to more chapters.

LV 15

Seraphim1369

A refreshing breeze after all the reincarnation, revenge,mc always getting out on top plots out there!! Very well written with plots and story lines that really make you anxious for the next chapter! I really hope to see this cont maybe with a few more chapters a week 😉

LV 13

Gryndynn

Wish there was more sucks it had to end here I was really looking forward to how he would progress and get out of the situation he wound up in.

LV 11

Tristan175

THE TALENT! THEEEE TALENT!!!! THE TALENT! I CANT SAY IT enough the talent in this book is a goddamn gem! it deserves recognition, even an anime!

LV 13

Jackcharming1

Entertaining out also all over the place. It’s difficult to tell whether the author has an idea of a plot or is simply combining seemingly disjointed stories on a chapter to chapter basis.

LV 14

DarkImmortal_Intel

I wanted to not mess with this LN's ranking since it's only got 16 reviews atm. BUT, I want to give a piece of my mind (at chapter 12). So far, MC is useless. Gets transported to some divine world by his OP grandfather, then said grandfather toss's him out like a sac of rotten potatoes without telling him anything, or giving him basically supplies or rations. Then MC immediately falls asleep after being transported to a hell region, and some random people abduct him without MC waking up (MC was just tired, nothing wrong with him- and it was a normal tired not over exhausted tired). Anyhoot, MC just sleeps through someone walking up to him, have a convo with other people around his sleeping body, then they pick him up and toss him into a carriage. WHO DA FUQ SLEEPS THROUGH THAT?!?!?!? SOEM FUQING SQUIRRELL COULD HAVE KILLED MC WITH TAHT KIND OF =LAKDJG;LKASDHGKL;JSDHGKJFDSHGSLKDJFHGSDLKFJHGSLDKFJGHSDLFKJGHSDFLKJGHKLJSDFHGLKJSDFHC

LV 14

walking_turtle_ugh

Its pretty cool ovr. The writing could be a bit better. But i like it a lot. Its a good plot and some good powers. Ive been reading a lot of sustem books recently and this gave a good respite from them. Looking forward to the other chapters.

LV 4

New_Divide

This story is absolutely great so far, the author has started releasing daily updates again with is great. Only thing left is for him to honor that mass release promise. And as for the story just give it a shot, what’s the worst that could happen?

LV 15

nightninjas

The spelling and grammar could use practice, not perfect my self though, but I love how everything is coming together. Characters have great development and it really has me hooked