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I completely ruined it from volume 2 and ran out of ideas to rewrite it so I am dropping the story for good
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This cool, I recommend reading it if you've reached the point almost no passable fics are left out there. Now, to me it feels almost high quality.
This type of novel is not my type since I like mc that are badass this mc is not cause he can’t even get mad at a kid and lets her do what ever she wants, like the story goes Beerus destroyed earth but where was goku? Did he die already if he did where is his children? Dead too?
Why do the MCs in fan-fics always go to DXD or Naruto or One piece? That's stupid! Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid
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The craze of today's writers is to pick up and add clichés to it, like MC being someone from Earth who reads and watches manga and anime, or adding useless harems to the story or this lemon **** they call, or does MC doggie. behind woman, it hurts the dignity of a man you know? And another I don't know who was the retard to say that every man's dream is harem ... my dream is to reincarnate in the immortal world in search of strength and not this garbage harem
I really appreciate this work of art that has made my view of all of these animes and Manga extremely dull compared to this wonderful fanfiction. Very good.
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The story itself is good but the grammar needs some work here and there and there are some weird... Personality shifts in the MC for no reason even if he was a Saiyan. If u watched DB you would know how most Saiyans act so that needs some work as well. If this was rewritten with a little more work here and there it would be more popular. Just my opinion don't be roastin meh.
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Dude this author somehow managed to connect a lot of animes into one universe and make it understandable. There are a lot bbn of crossovers and I dont even know what's happening anymore.
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Please author be clear to yourself first what you want to write....just keep on mixing other animes here and there and what's with Irene Belsherion from uzumaki clan... lol be a little more innovative.
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(This is not a review on the content) There are two things i will never understand in this world, the first is why people are still watching the walking dead and the second is why DXD fanfics are so popular.
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Hmmm... I'm not sure if I should compliment this or criticize it. While in my opinion, it is good for most of the chapters as the MC's character is basically a scary man that turns into mush when with his family, and he very overprotective, sometimes I find that instead of a Family he's more like a slave and sometimes I don't think his family loves him that much as from what I can see, he's only getting s*x from Yasaka and nothing else such as them risking their lives or other emotional stuff like that. While I didn't mind this, others might cause who wants a slave for an MC, no one wants the person they're supporting to get controlled or manipulated. But while I say that it is good and there are parts that I don't mind, there is a part which I very much mind which is why I stopped reading the rest. The author from what I can see fucking changed the MC. I don't mean like change his personality or appearance, I mean like they got another character to be the MC, which is stupid in my opinion. If you want to have a different character as the MC make like a side story or another novel don't discard the original that we have come to know and love. That's all, while I do think it is good, stop when the chapter title says 'prologue', not the first prologue the second prologue which should be chapter 49, 48 or earlier.
I’m many chapters in but as a saiyan the number one thing he should be thinking of is fighting and there’s none of that in like 30 or more chapters. Plus while reading this I cringed too much because of dialogue. What ikki says is cringe as ****. But if you wanna try it you can still try it as we have different opinions.
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very cringe novel, this is about a Saiyan god becoming a housewife and taking care of spoiled kids, a weak emotional Saiyan god who always gets triggered and emotional over everything, the MC is a snowflake who always rages and get nothing accomplished, poorly written story with no storyline, the Saiyan god become a housewife, that's the conclusion of the story, the MC is a bloated frog, all but intimidation and rage.