"How a Tentacle Monster Became the Lord of a Dungeon

LV 4

Guy_Cat

Overall a great story that develops on the concept more than others with the same concept, for example the story didnt just turn into tentacle DM sexual assaults female intruders, other than that the characters feel pretty good and i can actually remember who is who unlike some other books where names just go in and out the moment i read them, fianlly the last thing i didnt mark perfectly was world buildingas there isnt a large amount of it but that will likely change, Keep up the good work

LV 1

kskwk

Overall Score: 4.4/5 So, the dungeon master, what do you think of him? Probably just a kill-monger that kills adventurers to grow his dungeons more or even kill more people to spawn higher-level monsters. Well, this story is different, the dungeon master is still trying to defeat people, but through a diplomatic way which makes this story fun to read and the discovery phase of this story is awesome since it's not just "Muh exp to get stronger dungeon," nor, "Hurr Durr OP dungeon ability." Style Score: 4/5 My only problem with style is the small number of dialogue tags that sometimes can make it confusing. Otherwise, it's an easy-to-read experience from the get-go. 4 is the well-deserved score, it's not perfect, but it's close enough to be perfect. Grammar Score: 5/5 No complaints here. Grammatically, it's easy to read, even for a second speaker like me which sometimes becomes a problem with how translating advanced prose can be. Story Score: 5/5 Diplomatic is better than fighting. 5/5. Character Score: 5/5 The character, which is reincarnated to be a tentacle-ish monster, is actually really likable since he knows how to manipulate the dungeon even with his low level. My only complaint is his name, which is just 'DM'. However, my taste shouldn't bother you nor should remove a star from this review, so it's 5/5 for me.