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"Football manager" system

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In the vibrant world of football, In year 2027 a young prodigy named Kay dreams of becoming a famous soccer player. However, destiny takes a dramatic turn when a tragic accident costs Kay his dreams. Despite this devastating loss, Kay refuses to give up on his dreams, and he chose another road.

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QBL
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First of all, you did the unforgivable... calling football "soccer"! Next, let's be serious, who wants to read a manager's novel? If it's about a player, that would be another story.

4mth
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Estelem_Shelym

Interessante ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

5mth
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Narciss84

So far so good hopefully you can keep it up mate

3mth
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Outalb_Abdrrazzak

Nice story ... it's really about a new something ( Soccer manager ) , ... Also I like how the characters are designed .. I'm excited for the Upcoming conflicts and how our hero will face them ..

4mth
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DaoistyQNGiX

Never tells you that it’s in the future until you see busquets at a coaching thing so don’t bother with this OC player stories.

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4mth
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BryndenRivers

Characters are good but there are a lot of problems. For one the entire thing feels chatGPT-ish because nearly every other line is about how the MC is ready to face the challenges along the way or that he has such a great support system behind him... it became annoying after like the 5th time he said it in one chapter. Also the 10 year olds performing advanced football skills and shots are completely unrealistic. I can only read about a child performing a step over, feint, or precise dribbling and putting a ball in the top corner of the net before I just get annoyed that it's way too unrealistic.

3mth
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Bumbum420

its football you dumbss not soccer. murican cease your delinquent ways, just see the light be the one. kekw...

4mth
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Best_Coach_9192

Hy I am the author, this novel's timeline is in 2027, so you will find some very well-known players in the story who finished their careers as a player and began their careers as a manager.

4mth
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AKHRIF_AYOUB

Nice story, I like the character of the mc.

4mth
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Abdrahman_BL

I liked the story and events, just one problem is the updates, hope that he continue the story and not drop it

1mth
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