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"A Wish Of Lazy Otaku"
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It's good, just remember to use articles, or words such as the, or a. Other than that, you're chilling. I like the realism, and the relatability towards the target audience. Thankss for writing this!!!
Okay okay! This novel is nice. System genres have been going over the rankings lately, so this is good. I think there are just some "things" you need to detail out more. This just needs some grammar fixing, and intense verbs for readers to feel the book more. Over all this is fine. Keep up the good work.
Ok, it does need editing and some proof reading. Its a great start with a clear and concise plot. I do like the suicide mission at the beginning, Though, it does need to be fleshed out more.
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I like reading system novels so I won't hesitate giving 5 star. I hope author won't drop this novel, I just read the description and I'm already interested. so yeah I hope you can update more. thankyou