DEEPANSHU_PAL

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DEEPANSHU_PAL
DEEPANSHU_PAL
1 years ago
Replied to SleepySmile

Recently I tried to write in better way can you tell me if I am improving or not (sry for disturbing you as I have no one to tell about my writing)

DEEPANSHU_PAL
DEEPANSHU_PAL
1 years ago
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for a writer their work is equal to their love .

DEEPANSHU_PAL
DEEPANSHU_PAL
1 years ago
Replied to SleepySmile

THX THERE WAS ALWAYS SOME MISTAKE LEFT BUT IT FELL GREAT TO GET HELP FROM READER

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EVOLUTION HUNTER

EVOLUTION HUNTER

Fantasy · DEEPANSHU_PAL

DEEPANSHU_PAL
DEEPANSHU_PAL
1 years ago
Replied to SleepySmile

Ok i try to improve thx for suggestions

DEEPANSHU_PAL
DEEPANSHU_PAL
1 years ago
Replied to Lord_Meph1sto

Thx bro I recently start correcting my mistakes with grammerly and forget after doing main chapters mistakes correcting to correct summary and Auxiliary chapters thanks for your feedback And i try to make minimum mistake in grammar 😋

DEEPANSHU_PAL
DEEPANSHU_PAL
1 years ago
Commented

I think people don't like it

  • EVOLUTION HUNTER original

    EVOLUTION HUNTER

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG TRANSMIGRATION LEVELUP APOCALYPSE EVOLUTION

    AT OF AWAKENING YOU HAVE AWAKENED AS S CLASS - ELEMENTAL SWORDSMAN ERROR EROOR ERROR ERROR ERROR YOU ARE NOT IDENTIFYED AS FROM THIS PLANET RETRIVING SYSTEM, ERROR ERROR CHANGING CLASS TO FRANK GOBLIN SUCCES..... Separating THE SYSTEM FROM the main system SUCESSS........ Our main protagonist, Airen (reincarnation), has awakened in the game world of Nexus as an S-class Elemental Swordsman. However, the system is unable to identify them as being from the planet and encounters errors. As a result, their class is changed to F-rank Goblin, and the system is separated from the main system. Airen knows that they will face many unimaginable situations and wonders if they will be able to maintain their sanity. They question whether they will become a savior, victim, or monster in this new world.

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