Sabelwe_Nxumalo_8464

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5 days ago
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I really enjoyed the gambling arc as it put a new and fresh take into the story. keep up the good work author

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Sabelwe_Nxumalo_8464
18 days ago
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thanks for the chapter

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Sabelwe_Nxumalo_8464
1 months ago
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thanks for the chapter

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Sabelwe_Nxumalo_8464
1 months ago
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thanks for the chapter

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Sabelwe_Nxumalo_8464
1 months ago
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thanks for the chapter

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Sabelwe_Nxumalo_8464
1 months ago
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thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work

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Sabelwe_Nxumalo_8464
1 months ago
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Author this story had potential but I am noticing a problem. you are info dumping too much when I am reading it feels like I am reading about the history/lore of star wars instead of the story of Thrawn and his plot progression. please balance the story out so that it doesn't focus too much on dumping info

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Sabelwe_Nxumalo_8464
1 months ago
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thanks for the chapter

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Sabelwe_Nxumalo_8464
1 months ago
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thanks for the chapter