Viola_Bear

Viola_Bear

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2022-05-01 Joined Global
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Viola_Bear
Viola_Bear
2 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Viola_Bear
Viola_Bear
2 years ago
Commented

she is very lucky

"Look Miss, if you don't mind I will marry Miss and be the father of the baby you are carrying," said the doctor.

..not continue..

..not continue..

Urban · Vanila_Michelle

Viola_Bear
Viola_Bear
2 years ago
Commented

poor Ivy

"Miss Ivy's pregnancy is very vulnerable, she could miscarry if her condition still doesn't improve for the next few days," explained the doctor.

..not continue..

..not continue..

Urban · Vanila_Michelle

Viola_Bear
Viola_Bear
2 years ago
Replied to Eternal_bunny

up to you. i don't care

Viola_Bear
Viola_Bear
2 years ago
Commented

i found too much words oh from chapter 3 to chapter 5

Viola_Bear
Viola_Bear
2 years ago
Commented

too long ummm

Viola_Bear
Viola_Bear
2 years ago
Commented

You should write father using Father not father.

Viola_Bear
Viola_Bear
2 years ago
Commented

no comma after what for?

Viola_Bear
Viola_Bear
2 years ago
Commented

using dot after before " the punctuation is make confused

Viola_Bear
Viola_Bear
2 years ago
Commented

too much words oh in this chapter