DaoistOMxpxK

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2021-09-25 Joined Canada
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DaoistOMxpxK
1 years ago
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love the flow of the story so far

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DaoistOMxpxK
1 years ago
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Previously on Hades in the multiverse

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DaoistOMxpxK
1 years ago
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why did he even save eren's mom? i don't see the point in that, she brings nothing to the story.

DaoistOMxpxK
DaoistOMxpxK
1 years ago
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the book is great but i will advise you to use an app the helps you with sentence structure and punctuation

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DaoistOMxpxK
1 years ago
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i thought the Argents had a code "WE HUNT THOSE WHO HUNT US" i have not seen that come into play but it up to the author i guess

DaoistOMxpxK
DaoistOMxpxK
1 years ago
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the book is great so far just wish you were upload more chapters

DaoistOMxpxK
DaoistOMxpxK
1 years ago
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the book is great.The only thing is writing his status to often is fulling up the pages instead of writing the story. You should focus more on whats happening than writing this long power levels. This is my only opinon

DaoistOMxpxK
DaoistOMxpxK
1 years ago
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too much of the same things were being repeated in different ways

DaoistOMxpxK
DaoistOMxpxK
1 years ago
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with what I have read so far your writing is amazing

DaoistOMxpxK
DaoistOMxpxK
1 years ago
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he should have brought medical books