Eh it’s not really anything special. Author keeps including stuff but obviously did no research about the subjects so it literally is plain wrong or makes no sense. Tons of grammar errors, author barely knows how to construct a sentence. You can tell they didn’t reread it either, as some of the mistakes are extremely obvious but still haven’t been fixed. Maybe it gets better down the line, but not my thing. MC is very stupid, and the systems remarks are there for absolutely no reason. I can tell author is trying to be funny by making a system with a personality, but it falls flat and just makes it annoying.
How pathetic do you have to be to have your heart beat wildly from every pretty girl you see?
[What the hell? The first thing that comes to your mind after seeing a beauty is to ask for guidance instead of your heart beating wildly. Are you even a man?]
The Tycoon's Odyssey
Urban · Lonelythree
Are you dumb?
These people seriously believe that Nova could cover the sky with his hand for them.
The Tycoon's Odyssey
Urban · Lonelythree
This is something he probably should’ve consulted Asher about first… but I’ll ignore that I guess
"I sent them away. There is no need for excesses."
Reincarnated Lord: I can upgrade everything!
Games · DD_TheDreamer
Wasn’t one literally killed while trying to revive the family, and the other poisoned? I’d say that’s not really their fault
Asher knew the very cause of his father and brother's deaths: They left the ways of the Ashbournes.
Reincarnated Lord: I can upgrade everything!
Games · DD_TheDreamer
I think you don’t realize how creating a game works, also you very much just failed to comprehend the first couple chapters
"Were the Ashbournes this great in the past?"
Reincarnated Lord: I can upgrade everything!
Games · DD_TheDreamer
Yet I imagine he’ll be dealing with them constantly…
Due to this, mages, who were once as populous as the sand, became rare sightings.
Reincarnated Lord: I can upgrade everything!
Games · DD_TheDreamer
That’s like rule number one of things not to do
This was Liya, one of the main player-friendly characters, which he created with Lia, his girlfriend, as the source material.
Reincarnated Lord: I can upgrade everything!
Games · DD_TheDreamer
Incase you missed it, there were still people in the building. He just wants to destroy the game, not kill everyone lol
Asher emerged from the roof after destroying nearly half of the memory unit. Panting heavily, he faced the receiver. A tall structure that receives signals from the satellite. The game was going to be launched in different zones. Each zone represented a country, so a satellite was needed.
Reincarnated Lord: I can upgrade everything!
Games · DD_TheDreamer
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original The Reaper of the Sea
The Reaper, a name he's earned by the countless number of bodies that end up wherever he goes. People fear him, as it's said once he says your name, you're as good as dead. Some believe he's nothing more than an urban legend made to scare kids. Now whether these rumors are true, only "The Reaper" knows. But once he's in a situation where he's falling to his death, he somehow gets transported to a different world instead. And this is the world of.. One Piece?! A world full of grand adventure, vast seas, and mysterious powers. Will the name "The Reaper" spread across the seas to be feared? Will it never be heard of again? Or will something different come from his appearance? There's only one way to find out! Just a disclaimer that I’m not very good at writing, or story telling (as far as I know) since I have no experience! I’m not the best at English grammar/writing either so criticism and feedback is actually welcome and appreciated! Either way I hope you enjoy the story, I’ll try my best to make it a good time.6 Chs 115 Collections
The problem is author didn’t explain anything like that. By default, Oakflesh only increases defense. I don’t even think Oakflesh actually changes your skin into a different material, it’s more of a layer of mana covering your body from what I remember. Idk I stopped reading this anyways, maybe he explains more down the line but it wasn’t my style.
Overestimating the quality of his saber and the strength given by oakflesh Reyvin is surprised when while mortally wounding the bandit it is still not enough for an insta-kill. The man lets out a pitiful wail alerting the only remaining bandit who comes out of the camp holding a dark haired amber eyed Breton teen with a knife to her throat.
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav