Oliver_Corbin

Overall a interesting story but lack of details makes it difficult to read such as out of nowhere the MC suddenly has a brother at a academy . With some character development and proper pacing could transform this book from a alright book to a great book

So far so good as of chapter 17. hope the lack of comment s won’t effect the writing quality.

i read this book on kindle by the author named Ethan Matherson and i was wondering if that was you because it is a copy and past of the entire story and i saw a comment about that so googled it and saw this book